有大大帮我看一下吗?我写作时间来不及.....

zhenhanhan

我4.29考ibt,寒假在新东方上课的时候老师说最好写到350多个字才有可能分数高一点写作,但是我写作的功底一直很差,主要是速度很慢.现在要在30分钟里面写350个字实在是比较困难,前面写了一次,27分钟写了311个字,但是由于根本没有考虑时间,写出来的东西幼稚的一塌糊涂,有大大帮我看下这种文章大概能拿几分么?还有一个礼拜不知道还有没有救了....

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types
of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your
answer.

It’s a quite complex question. In my opinion sometimes face to face communication will be better than the other kinds of communication, while because the ever increasingly pace of society’s development, the advantages of some other kinds of communication far outweighed the weakness of the face to face communication, so I reckon that the answer depends on the situation.

We can differ the people who you are going to meet into three main categories. Valentain, boss and collogues, friends.

When you make a appointment with your girlfriend or boyfriend, face to face communication will be the only choice. Who can imagine you two “whisper some sweet words” or “kiss” through your cell or email? It’s totally show your disrespect to Jupiter.

If you are going to meet your boss or collogues, both face to face way or other are considerable. The affairs you are talking can be effectively transmitted by email or SMS, so it can save both you and your boss’s time, besides, you can make more sufficient preparation before the meeting, especially when you are a timid guy.

Lastly if you are going to meet your friends, I recommend you better take the face to face way. I once heard a piece of word: beer and cigar spawn friendship. So we can see how important to be together with your friends rather than talking for a while through phones. However, here’s a exception that if you got some urgent affairs to take care and you must find some friend for help, one call will be the most sensible choice.

in conclusion when you are going to deal with your love relationship, work, or friendship, different circumstance decides different way of communication you can take. Both face to face communication and other ways are suitable, the crucial point is that you should choose the right one in the right time.

大大不要浪费时间帮我批改了,我只想知道这种文章大概可以拿到个什么样的分数??最后一个礼拜还有没有救了,谢谢....

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-4-20 17:42:55编辑过]

fly_me

尽力就好