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T:Mutiplesubjects vs one subject.
Vne subject
R:1.more concentrate
2. more professional
3.feel sense of achievement
Since we have ushered inthe era of information explosion. We are supposed to be well-read andversatiled. There is a lively debate about whether we should have multiplesubjects or one subject. For me ,I prefer the second one. There are severalreasons to back up my point.
To start with, our brainshave an integrate ideological system, when we come across a new thing, it willdeliver it into the fresh part to digest it then make it useful for ourselves. Withoutdoubting, we cannot come up with too much unsalted stuff at one time. We aremore likely to be concentrated when devoting to a single subject. Imagine that,when you are watching an interesting program, your litter sister is coming toyou for a math problem. Are you sure that you can solve the issue correctly?
In addition, as we allknow nowadays the company requires the employees become more and moreprofessional and technological. What’s important is not to know many thingssuperficially, but to make yourself professional in a certain subject. I thinkthat is why there is a major subject in the university. We can set foot to manydifferent fields on condition that we have a major one to dig into. It isnothing that knowing all the flowers’ nature but haven’t planted any.
Last but not least, dowell in only one subject also can make us feel sense of achievement easier. Forinstance, if we concentrate in one subject, we can spend the whole time toprepare it, to do the research, to glean the comprehensive information andmaterials. On the contrary, if we work at several subjects together, you haveto separate the time into tiny ones. And it is surest that, you are hard tofinish any of them. You will definitely frustrate when dealing with a messsituation. As a consequence, you may fail to come to an end.
In conclusion, consideringthe physical, psychological, environmental, etc. I believe that if you want tomake a difference, one subject is the better choice.