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发表于 2012-10-8 00:33:14 | 显示全部楼层 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
As there are no solitary, free-living creatures, every form of life is living in a same chain, so no matter which species confronts to extinct, others will be in danger directly or indirectly. Then as the troublemakers, we human beings should make efforts to save endangered species, which is also save ourselves indirectly. We should protect our society to be sustainable development.

Admittedly, protecting these endangered species will slow down the society’s economic development. People cost a lot to protect them with suitable habitats, without their predators there and enough foods available. Like a kind of endangered bird, they need forests to live in and insects to feed on, which means disafforest will be limited thus the paper producing industry will be influenced directly. Government also should cost lots of money on protecting them from being preyed by predators like snakes, hawks and so forth. What’s more, when comes to the aquatic species, it is more complicated and tougher to protect them. however, although society limits its development and costs lots of money on protecting endangered species, they can not guarantee the endangered species to survive. It is a waste of money.



However, unless the species are really extinct, society should make efforts to protect them. With the rapid development of economy in this year, our ecosystem has been broken some extent. Fresh water is decreasing day after day, and air quality is worse with the factories increasing. These all lead to environment deteriorate and unsuitable for many species survive. It is sound none of our human being’s business, but when think further they are influenced indirectly by us. If we do not save the endangered species, when they extinct, the food chain will be destroyed, which finally endanger ourselves. So in order to decrease the dangerous we should try our best to save endangered species.



Also if we keep a sustainable development, save more endangered speciess can bring us unexpectable profits one day. Like panda, our Chinese national treasure, we can give it to other Countries as gift to enhance the national friendship which indirectly increases the trading between each other. There are many precious species come to extinct, if we can protect them survive there will be an enormous amount of wealth for us human beings.

There may be the worst situation, if humans do not rescue these endangered species, that all endangered species are disappeared then ecosystem’s balance will be broken and some natural resources disappear the same time.

The importance of we live depend on species is like what species survive rely on human beings. We should keep this society with sustainable development and try our best to save the endangered species.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-8 00:34:05 | 显示全部楼层
帮帮忙看看吧,感觉好难写到500啊!!!脑子转坏了也只有450~~~
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-8 23:34:19 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢llshruby,竹林哥 的指点,我继续改进。刚开始写有点摸着头脑,努力改进。再次谢谢啊
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-8 23:35:53 | 显示全部楼层

非常感谢

谢谢竹林哥的指点,我继续改进。刚开始写有点摸着头脑,努力改进。再次谢谢啊
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 楼主| 发表于 2012-10-8 23:36:25 | 显示全部楼层

谢谢

谢谢llshruby大神的指点,我继续改进。刚开始写有点摸着头脑,努力改进。再次谢谢啊
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