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wsxz007 作业贴 作文啊作文 你跟我和好吧……求你了 1.27求拍砖

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发表于 2013-1-5 16:52:26 | 显示全部楼层 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
wsxz007 1月4号的综合

The reading passage is discusses the issue of whether or not the
dinosaurs are the endotherms. The professor's lecture deal with the same topic.Even so she argue that the dinosaurs are not endotherms, which contradict what the reading passage states. In the reading there are three specific points to support it's idea.
The first one, although the passage asserts that the fossil was found in the polar area, where is so cold that only endotherms can exist. At the same time the professor claims that the region where the fossils be found is much warmer than today and habitat can be changed during the cold months. Clearly, the professor disagree the first point in the massage.
Moreover, even though the statement in the reading argue that leg position is the characteristic of the endotherms, because of the sustained physical activity, the professor contends that the position of the legs in order to supports more weight. Obviously, the professor's argument challenges the states in the passage.
finally, both of them refer to the Haversian canals.The professor maintains that although there are Haversian canals in the dinosaurs, the same time there are also grow rings in body of them.During cold period, the grow rings thicken show that the vegetation slowly or stopped. Whereas the author of the passage claims that the Haversian canals is the feature of the endotherms.
In conclusion, the professor clearly identifies the weaknesses of the reading passage and forcefully proves the central argument in the passage of that dinosaurs are endotherms is inaccurate.
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沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-5 21:04:34 | 显示全部楼层
1月4号独立  批啊 批啊 求暴批
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It is better to relax by watching a movie or reading a book than doing physical exercise

Recent years, the social competition become more and more fierce. Under the circumstances, the social life makes people more nervous than ever before. Various of entertainments are needed by every corner in the city. However the traditional ones are always popular. Some ones argue that it is better to relax by watching a movie or reding a book than physical exercise. In my opinion, relaxing in silence is the best way for me.
First, now days daily life is more and more quick than ever before. Doing as more as we can in shorter time. In order to enhance the competitiveness, the whole city race against time. Reading and watching something slowly after all day work is a best chance to relax our body and brain with no competition but enjoying. Just like wine-tasting, drink the wine as slowly as we can, and least the bouquet full of the mouth.    
Second, grinding a chopper will not hold up the work of cutting firewood. More preparation may quicken the speed in doing work. Reading  makes people think. In the books, people can find the answer to everything which puzzle you in daily life. Further more, the movies alway tell something which is the most typical in modern society and history. After the past of the teacher, history and other’s experience is the best sample to take example by.
Finally, during reading and watching something which have nothing to do with the pressure from daily life or work people can liberation the brain, and enjoy something fresh. Every time came into a corner in work, I would go to enjoy a movie in the cinema by myself, and forget all the stuff but the movie. After that, a clear head can give me something new to deal with the puzzle.
For the reasons above, although doing physical exercise is a good way to relax the body, but the better efficiency is the goal of entertainment. In leisure time, reading books and watch movies is better the sports.
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-6 17:24:38 | 显示全部楼层
1月5号 综合 TPO5
The professor actually contradicts the statements made in the passage. He is of the view that non of the arguments about what  Chaco great houses were used for is convincing.

First, although the space of the largest house is big enough for 100 families to live in. However the professor points that the fire place in the house is the size fit for only ten families, which obviously disprove its counterpart in the reading passage.

Second, the author of the passage point out that the condition of the house can be used for store food, whereas the professor asserts that there are no maize or containers in the house , which are considered the principal food for Chaco. He claims that abundance of food and large containers should be found in the  house if it is a storage space, which weak the point of the passage.
Finally, despite reading passage give the evidence about the pots, which is asserted to be used in ceremonies. At the same time, the professor argue that besides the pots, there are also materials couldn’ t be used in the ceremonies, such as sand, stone and building tools which is used to build the house. In other words the pots in the house is only the construction trash the same as other stuff, which can’t prove the houses are used for ceremony.
In conclusion, the professor apparently identify the weakness of the passage.
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-6 19:37:34 | 显示全部楼层
1月5号 独立
Agree or disagree, in order to succeed, you should be more like the others than be different from everyone else


Life is challenging. In order to be successful we should prepare ourselves in many fronts. Although to be different from others could make sure one person stand out of the crowd quickly at the beginning, compare to the beginning, a durable success is more important to our lives. In my opinion in order to succeed , person should be more like others than different from everyone else. My view is basis on campus, social life and family.

When we were in campus, the first thing to study is imitation. Following the teachers do everything, such as writing, speaking, performing even though making friends, in other words, the principle of succeed is like others. All ones know that, a successful student must be good at imitation. For instance, When I was a student in my 12 years old, I always wanted to write something different, and didn’t like the article style given by the writing books. But not until my words is similar as the others in my class my score is not good, and my article is not understand by others.  

From a social perspective, we live in an interdependent world which imposes its obligations on us. Each person belong to different social group and plays important roles. In order to be a popular person in the daily life, we should enjoy the same topic with others. Further more, a good interpersonal relationship can offer various of convenient which is an advantage in the further enterprise. As a result of to be more like others, there not only a successful career but also a good social relationship.

Family is another important part in the daily life, and the harmonious of the family is a half of success. Members in the same house share joys and sorrows of others all the time. So it is better to have the same hobby with the others in a family.

Well, the creation and selfhood is also important in one’s pursuing for success. Sometime, basing on the resemblance the different is a new competition in the modern society.
In conclusion, in order to succeed, we should be more like others than different or strange. Success prefer the ordinary.
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-7 10:46:00 | 显示全部楼层
感谢批改,我的英文表达实在是……,而且小时候考试基本靠蒙,从来不知道语法为何物……考T告诉我一个道理——出来混迟早是要还滴,以前偷懒丁点不学的语法和写作现在都是狂补啊,谢谢你哦,我会认真改正的(之前主要分不清哪个是对的)
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-7 18:18:43 | 显示全部楼层
1月6号 独立
Modern society, teamwork is playing an increasingly important role in competition. An effective group can make more profits than others from the same starting point. As everyone knows that a brilliant and effective leader is significant in a team, and how about the members, also important or not? Personally, I think it is not only effective but also necessary to make the decision both from the leader and the members. In other words, the effective leader should try to adopt suggestions from members.
Personally, everyone in the team is an inseparable part of the entirety. In order to enhance the efficiency of the team, it is important to inspire everyone to take a part in the decision. By this way, the goal of the team is also the target of all the people, which can inspire the proficiency extremely.

Furthermore, outstanding wise will have mistake, and personal ability always limited. Take ideas and suggestions and use them if they work for you. It is a better way than do everything by yourself. Such as, most of the company will take middle-level brain storm before any significant decision. At the same time, we can see a lot of television programs will take suggestions from audiences and organize the creation team in order to perform the best popular program. All of there show a point that the decision from both the leader and the else of the group is more effective than the leader oneself.

Additionally, when everyone take part in the decision of the team, members will have more time to communicate to each other, which is a good chance to increase the team spirit. Any effective leader know that a good teamwork means better outstanding achievement. For instance, when I was the president of student union, I took the middle-level meeting with all the ministers from different department and made the decision of action plane for next month. After the meeting the project of the student union is more popular than before.

Although it is necessary that sometime, especially in the emergency, the leader also have to do the decision by his or her self quickly and decisively. On the other hand, it is be counteractive if leaders take the suggestion from stuffs all the time.

In conclusion, an effective leader not only know how to inspirit the staff to create a miracle but also take the good suggestion from team members the same as address the urgent work firmly and decisively.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-8 15:55:38 | 显示全部楼层
1月7号 独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statementeople who move out of their native village or town are more successful and happier than who stay in their native village or town for their whole life.

Recent years, as the development of Chinese education, graduating from a university is not only a wish for most of students. After almost twenty years living in a same area, it is a wonderful chance for students to change a new environment that to go to an university in a different city or a bigger one than hometown. However the others think it is more happiness and successful to stay in their hometown. Well, I choose the first one for the reason of three aspects.
Personally speaking, the mental characteristics of people who want to have challenges in their lives are more adventurous, diligent, independent, and smart than the others. All of these features are the element of a successful people. Furthermore,for this kind of people success alway meant happiness. For instance, Bill Gates, who was used to be the most wealthy person of the world. He gave up the degree of Harvard, and created Microsoft with his friend Paul Allen. Maybe someone would said is crazy to give up Harvard. But Bill Gates chose to challenged himself to do something different and enjoyed it.
Moreover, in a new environment, we can get in touch with someone who come from different cities and work on various domains, and learn about multiple things out of our work and daily life. All of the fresh informations will lead to a vast potential for future development. On the other hand, the more friends meant a varied and graceful life. Experience of myself, the colleagues from my part time job during the University study show me the information of consulting, and now it is a dream which I am working hard on.

From the external context, after leave from hometown, most of us will chose a bigger city to start the next step. Such as Beijing, shanghai or other first-tire cities, which meant a more completed and modernization urban construction. In this environment the young people will have more chance of promotion and space of growth.

Well, the life of the hometown is more peace,comfortable, and convenient. Moreover, the acquaintance and social relationship also can be an assistance for the your career. But it is not essential for the success and happiness.

Go it while you're young and work wonders in the best time in our life.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-9 20:26:50 | 显示全部楼层
1月8号 独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:It's more important for the government to build art museums and music performance center than to build recreational devices (such as swimming pool, playgrounds).


Have you always been heard about the art museums or music performance centers where you were a child, but preciously to visite them except in the tour. Whatever, it is the story happened to me. Oppositely, Playing football and swimming is an common excise in our lives. If it can be brought out, I prefer the government to build more museums and music performance centers than the recreational devices. My view is bases on educational, financial and social.

From a academic viewpoint, visiting the arts center simply enable the students to learn more about art and music. Although but the professor will do his or her best to vivify the course, the artistic works are the best models. Remembered, one of my art classes in primary school, teacher talked about a oil painting. It is the first time I heard about it, which made me so ex citing. However, there is not any real one for student to watch it by themselves, which is a little pity in my memory. It would be contrary, if there was a art museum in my city.

Socially-speaking, there are so many recreational devices in most communities of our country, which is exactly the opposite of the art centers. Recent years, as the increase of living standard, the requirement of the culture rices several times over the early years. However, the culture facilities is far behind the need. So, it is necessary for the government to invest into the are facilities.

Economically, culture consumption is more and more popular recent years. The tickets of the drama, Musical and concert are so expensive but sold out long time before the performance. A number of art constructions will drive a huge consumption of the local society, which is an assistant to the revenue of local government.

As we all know that, the recreational devices are also an important part of daily life in the city. But for the reasons I talked above, the investment of the art constructions are more primary and economical for the current situation of social life.
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-9 21:25:52 | 显示全部楼层
感谢批改 devices 写着写着忘记了 …… 我提升空间是很大,因为目前水平实在是太低……
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 楼主| 发表于 2013-1-10 18:50:12 | 显示全部楼层
1月9号 独立
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement:Movies are worth watching only when they teach us something about the real life.


Nowadays, with the improvement of living standards, culture life is playing a more and more important role in the city life. For instance, movie is a popular consumption in the modern culture market. In my opinion, a qualified movie, which is worth watching, don’t have to teach us something about the real life. The ones give us different scenes out of the real life , such as local condition and custom from other country, science fiction and historical event and anything else, which can make us happy or thinking are worth to be enjoyed too .

From the entertainment, there is no denying that the pressure of the daily life and work is much higher than decade before. Smile is an good way to protect against the pressure and decease. Social reacher give the result of that laughing can effective against the cancer and other high prevalence decease in modern society. For instance, a comedy like <mean girls>, which is a famous movie in America, can let person forgive the pressure and unhappy in the real life. Although at the end of the movie learning nothing, you throw away all the bad feelings, which makes you energy-filled.

From a academic standpoint, the documentary film, which is a kind of movie that represent the real object about architecture, biology, wildlife protection and other kind of subjects. As a student in the university, I often watch the film about the my major and other things I interested. It is a useful way to study by oneself. What’s more, through this kind of movies people can get well know about the past and aspects of the environment different from the real life.

There is no doubt that movies make person think, which is a significant character of a successful movie. Not only the real life but also the hope and dream. When pianist Lang Lang was a five yeas old child, he watched a piano program by a cat in a movie of cartoon and liked it very much. After that, he did his best to chase dream, that to be the same as the cat in the movie. Now he is the one of the most famous pianists in the world. The story tell us that the value of a movie, is not only in the cinema but also in the future especially for the young.

In conclusion, a movie maybe show me without the true of real life, but it is a good one, which can tell me something meaningful or interesting.
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