独立写作求拍砖，peter的作文贴

peterzhai

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? The friend that you can have fun with is more important than the friends that you can get help from.

What defines the friendship? From my perspective, friendship is a relationship between two people who trust in one another, tend to desire what is best for the other, enjoy each other’s company and keep honest, sympathy and empathy to each other. A friend is like a bottle of fine wine, like a snippet of old song, and like a bright lamp shining the way forward on the path. Unquestionably, I believe that real friends are those who give me strong help when I really need.
A friend usually does me a favor whenever I sink in trouble, no matter how hard it will be or no matter how much effort it will take. A real friend will back me up, settle me down and encourage me to cheer up even though the future is unpredictable. Never will a friend throw me over when I encounter difficulties. The assistance from my best friends is the most precious wealth that I have ever accumulated. I intensively appreciate the friendship between Carl Marx and Friedrich Engels, viewing it as the purest friendship in the world. When Marx focuses his entire energy on the social and economic research, it is Engels who gives Marx a hand and helps him accomplish the most brilliant and unprecedented works all over the world. Were there no financial aids and spiritual inspiration from Engels, Marx would not have the extraordinary achievements as we highly respect today.
Moreover, a friend will open his or her heart to me so that I can express my heartfelt feelings without bearing a grudge. Friends will share the sweetness and the bitterness, the success and the failure, and the laughter and the tears. Real friends will not hesitate to point out my mistakes and shortcomings. All they expect are the improvements of me and all they desire are what the best is for me. So do I. Likewise, I will remove all the bushes and thorns and provide a flat road to success for my friends. Admittedly, these friends are not those who can have fun with, but those who give strong supports.
At last, in higher levels, real friends are parts of our bodies. They are beyond the materials and worldly pleasures. What a friend is to me that my arm or leg is to my body. Best friends are life-long, best friends will exist forever and best friends are from stem to stern. By no means will friends give me up and by no means will friends laugh at me when I make mistakes.
Consequently, providing what they have without reservation carves the figures of friends and it again proves the old saying that “a friend in need is a friend indeed”. In light of my definition of friendship, I reinforce my claim that the friend from whom I can get helps is of greater significance than the friend with whom I can have fun.

peterzhai

1118就要考了。求大牛批改啊

peterzhai

啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊啊

peterzhai

十分感谢啊。这种题目说实在的真的不知道怎么进行论证和支持，只能在叙述中堆砌字数了。也许后面加上一段对一种friend的驳辩更好吧。总之谢谢你的意见。考试如果碰到我会注意的。

peterzhai

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