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Do you agree or disagree: similar jobs with you for your children?
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Nowadays, parents have a fierce discussion about whether their children should have similar jobs with them. Some believe that their children should have the similar jobs with them because the parents are familiar with the jobs and can help their children to get a short-cut in the career path. However, some believe that their children should have a different road because the parents’ jobs are too difficult for their children. As far as I am concerned, both of these two ideas are reasonable but deserve further illustration.
Granted, parents who want their children to have similar jobs have undeniable reasons. Today’s world is full of hardship and toughness. What our parents have accumulated is precious for us and even takes us several years to realize. By having similar jobs, we can make good use of those experiences and become more successful in our career. For example, my aunt is a doctor who worked in a famous hospital for twenty years and his son is now working in the same hospital too. As far as I see, my aunt has offered much help to my cousin when he picked up the courses in the university, when he looked for an internship and when he hunted for a job. Once my cousin told me, if it were not for his mother, he would never choose to be a doctor because it was too hard. He also told me that many of his classmates can not find a job after graduation.
However, some parents are reluctant to allow their children to pick up similar jobs. There are good reasons for parents who have suffered from some bitterness in their career life to prevent their children to enter into the same field. Take firefighter for example. According to a survey conducted by the Renmin University
, up to 70 percent of firefighters don’t want their children to be a firefighter. Although this is a noble occupation because it saves people’s life, firefighter always faces dangers of losing his own life. As parents, they might not allow their children to choose the same job. Another example would be teacher. Since more and more teachers are facing the possibility of catching a lung cancer or other disease because of the overload working time and the harmful chalk powder, some teachers are not willing to allow their children to have the same job.In my point of view, parents are all care about their children. Therefore, what they are worrying about is all justified. However, we omitted the most important point of this question: the interest of their children. Even though some of the occupations are dangerous or tough, if their children are interested in those jobs, parents should allow them to choose. After all, interest is the biggest momentum of success. You can never ensure that your children are happy if they are not in their most interested field.
In conclusion, I think parents should allow their children to choose career that they are most interested in and should not just think of their own concerns.(508)

zhima427

总觉得自己离题偏题了，贴上范文：Example:
When asked about that if you want your children to take similar jobs with you, overwhelming majority of parents will answer yes. However, in my opinion, the disadvantages of this choice outweigh its merits.
Admittedly, similar jobs with parents can benefit children a lot. As seeking for a position becomes harder and harder nowadays, taking jobs alike to mine will provide will provide a gateway for my kids undoubtedly. They can learn my experience and skills I gained these years. Thus, they are able to avoid wasting time in looking for practical methods. They can also make friends with my colleagues and consequently, they will establish their social network soon. All the things above can facilitate their career.
However, if they are forced to followed my career, it will become difficult for them to grow mature. My direction will prevent them from committing mistakes; as a result, they will never get negative feedbacks and learn how to correct faults. A simple analogy may help brighten my point. We will never our arms if they function well. But once they are broken, we will pay attention to them and try to find out what is wrong. That is what we call negative feedbacks. My children will lack such kind of experience because I tell them what to do and what not to do before they try. Therefore, they do not know how to realize their errors and come up solutions by themselves. Unfortunately, they will never grow mature and independent.
Moreover, without considering their opinions, they will feel disrespected and may become intractable, which runs contrary to our aims that help them achieve success as soon as possible. My classmate, whose father is an excellent businessman , once told me that he now hated anything about economics or business because his father pushed him to learn those thins which did not attract him at all. At last, he did not become a businessman; what was worse, he cut off his connections with his father. Whenever I think of his angry eyes, I fell sad for his father’s inappropriate guidance. Children have their own freedom and rights to choose their jobs. We should respect them and let them enjoy their free choices.
In sum, children should not be forced to take similar jobs with their parents. What they need is a world of freedom, though it may be full of mistakes and costs, instead of a successful but inspired life.(408)

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