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music1020

I heard your record, here are some of my suggestions:

1. You can begin like this:"　The women's problem is that....." It can save you 2-3 second.

2. I think it is better to say:" If I were the woman, I would choose the second sulution, because...." since they always ask you " State which sulution you recommend", it would be more clear.

3.In the second sulution, you should mention the person's name " Jimmy", so the  tester can undestand who is Jimmy, since you mentioned later.

I am not goog enough but I hope it helps, maybe there are some pedagogical diffrences between Chinese and American teacher, but it should be work.  

Good luck!!