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竹林中人

when it comes to the educational institute should 这句表述有问题
As is known to all, science, no matter social science or natural science, can be unpredictable and pleasantly unexpected sometimes. A myriad of findings that advanced the human society as whole were once deemed as unimaginable. All these render the "achievement- determination" unreliable.这两句没必要扩大，只需局限于你所谈的话题就好。
, by eschewing some fundamental but highly-risk field have come along with？？？主语在哪儿
purchasing practical and pragmatic field ？ｐｕｒｃｈａｓｅ这里用的不合适吧