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2014.1.18
1. Nowadays it’s easier to maintain health than the past.
Health, is the most important things in people’s life. Nothing can be done without having a good body. Work, study, entertainment.... Everything is out of the question. It has always been defined as the priority before anything. There’s a recent debate that goes hot in public today about whether we are more healthy nowadays. Although people from the past can care for them a lot, the technology now and the thorough research made by professional nuitrition lists can easily outweigh the poor knoledge from the past. When it comes to me, i would choose without hesitation that we can easily maintain health now.
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Health is one of the most important things in people’s life. It is out of question that almost everything, including work, study, entertainment, etc., cannot be done without first having a good body. It has always been defined as a top priority. There’s a recent debate that goes hot in public about whether we are healthier or not nowadays. Although people from the past can care for them a lot [actually what do you mean?], the modern technology and researches made by professional nuitritionists can easily outweigh the poor knowledge from the past. When it comes to me, I would decide without hesitation that we can easily maintain health now.
2 getting advice from friends who are older than you is more valuable than getting advice from friends your same age.
Friends, is a kind existance that can influence us in knoledge and can pass on good virtues. To be with good friends can get really good thoughts and learn valuable things that we probably never would have seen of our own age. A recent pressing argue about whether people can learn more from older friends. A part of my friends holds to the idea that it’s better to get advice from friends of our same age due to the non-limited relationship between same-aged students. In my opinion, i would prefer to get advice from senior friends. I will explain my point of view in the following examples.
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Friends are a kind existance that influences us not only on knowledge, but also on virtues. To be with good friends can offer you good thoughts and valuable things that we probably never would have seen of our own age. A recent pressing arguement is about whether people can learn more from older friends or not. A part of my friends hold the idea that it’s better to get advice from friends of our same age due to the non-limited relationship between same-aged students. In my opinion, I would prefer to get advice from senior friends. I will explain my point of view in the following examples.
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发表于 2014-1-20 02:26:37
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