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      Does easier-prepared food improve the way people lived?

   While people keep on fasten the pace of life,products that help to simplify daily procedures emerge.Easier-prepared food, such as sliced meat that wrapped in retainer, is among them, which greatly improve the way people live.
Initially, food preparation is no longer a tedious task that prevent women from achieving greater accomplishment.Liberated by supermakets that provide vegetables and meat clean and neat which need only a few minutes to be made into a meal, many women have a lot more time to engage themselves in studying or pursueing thier interests. Higher pay jobs with more demanding requirments are accessable now.
   Moreover, since it is so much easier to master cooking with food packs that contain relevant ingredients and sometimes even cooking instructions, many people are able to enjoy the fun and satisfaction of cooking.Not only fathers, but also adolescents can readily serve the table with dishes that are delitious and nutrious at the same time.Generally speaking, this helps removing some of the heavy loads of housework that once burdened mothers so much.Thus,we could draw a conculsion that easier-prepared food has brought sighnificant positive impact on the family.
   However,some argue that it is easier-prepared food that draw mothers away, making them less committed to family.It is true that once mothers spend more time doing their own business,there are less time for them to tend to family members. But mothers have every right to realize their dreams like others do. Only when every member of the family simultaneously devote himself/herself to chasing goals in life and enjoy family time can the family be genuinely happy and satisfied.
   All in all, the change of food preparation have huge influence on the modern lifestyle.No matter we like it or not, the impact can not be withdrew.Gladly,the change is positive in general, and people seem to be content about it.