晒作文 求打分

daisy57

大家督促我写作文啊啊
Do you agree that mordern technology has helped students learn more information and faster?

Most students would agree that they have benefited a lot for their study from mordern technology such as the Internet and in-time conmunication facilities. Not only did they make our work more dynamic and productful, they also extent our lives to a broader realm, where lies tremendous opportunities and dicoveries to be found.

In addition, mordern technology has made students to learn faster than ever. If you make an investigation among students, you will probably find out they have a consensus on how mordern techonology has improved their understanding of their subjects. With the help of Internet, they would soon get to know what's going on around them.

A student would lag behind if he doesn't have an access to mordern technoloy. Our world is changing erraticly, with everlasting revolution and reforms carried on in a large scope of industry and fields. Technology has one of the most influential role in these changes. It not only changed our life styles externally , but also changed internally the way we think and conceive this world.

There had been some doubt on whether the mordern technology have distracting affects that would harm students' studies. For example, abuse of Internet and electronoc devices may lead to addiction. These concerns are worthwhile, however, we cannot deny that there are plenty of students who can utilize the entertainment devices to help them diminish overloas stress. After all, if we make good use of mordern techonogy, we would find it help us learn both faster and better.

daisy57

KiKi你好, 说道托福作文我真是菜鸟一个, 不知道什么样的文章在ETS那里会打高分呢.. 也不好评你的了
你的第三段第一句话"To..."没有主语. 其它我也说不出什么
我词汇量还行, 结构就是G的结构.. 绕来绕去的 T的老师大概不喜欢吧..
没怎么学过,我去看10篇范文好了 等水平够了再给你改吧..

daisy57

当然我G的作文也很糟 ...