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twe 119 两篇文章,哪个好?

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twe 119 两篇文章,哪个好?


119. People behave differently when they wear different clothes.


请大家给这两篇作文打分,觉得哪一篇顺眼,分高。


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文章1:


People do behave differently when they wear different clothes. The reason is not because they have changed, but because people's reaction to them has changed.



Certain clothes are appropriate for certain situations. A man can wear a suit to work and a woman can wear a shirt and a jacket.  When everyone dresses the same, there is no problem. It is like a uniform. Imagine going to the law office to hire a lawyer. One of the lawyers is wearing a suit; the other is wearing jeans. Which lawyer do you want to hire? Similarly, a mechanic works on cars all day and wears clothes that can get dirty. It would be strange to find a mechanic wearing a coat and tie to repair an engine.



People will treat you differently depending on what you are wearing. If your clothes are unusual for the situation, they treat you with disrespect. I remember once I had an old army coat. I wore it into a fancy candy shop to buy some chocolates. The woman was very suspicious and a little afraid. I couldn't understand her reaction since it was still me underneath my big, old ugly green coat. I was dressed like a bum and this caused the salesperson to react negatively to me. Consequently, I was even more polite than usual.




This experience shows me that sometimes I do behave differently because of what I am wearing. In this case, I had to balance my appearance.


文章2:


Whether people behave differently when they wear different clothes is a hot topic today. Different people hold different opinions due to different backgrounds. As far as I am concerned, I strongly agree that people behave differently when they wear different clothes. It is not because people have changed, but because other’s response to them has changed. In the following discussion, I will reason and provide concrete evidence to support my viewpoint.



The first plain truth, I am presenting here, is that certain clothes are appropriate for certain situations. A man can wear a suit and a woman can wear a shirt and jacket. When everyone wears the same, there is no problem. It likes a uniform. Imagine going to a law office. One wears a suit; the other wears a jeans. Which lawyer will you choose to hire? Similarly, a mechanic works on cars all days and wears the clothes that get dirty. It would be strange to find a mechanic wearing a suit and a tie to repair cars. If these examples are accurate and persuasive, you can understand my view deeply.



In addition, behind my view that people behave differently when they wear different clothes lies the fact that people will treat you differently depending on what you are wearing. If your clothes are unusual for the situation, they treat you with disrespect. Facts witness and present many examples. I once had an old army coat  and I came into a baby candy store wearing it. The woman was suspicious and a little afraid. I could not understand her reaction since it was still me underneath my old, ugly coat. Therefore, I was more polite than usual. This experience shows me that I do behave differently when I wear different clothes.



To sum up, due to the above-mentioned reasons, which sometimes intertwine into an organic whole and thus become more persuasive, I can safely reach the conclusion that people behave differently when wearing different clothes.



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