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以下是引用shirley_zhu在2005-4-22 4:31:00的发言：

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101. Some people like doing work by hand. Others prefer using machines. Which do you prefer?

Some people hold the opinion that woking using machines is superior to working by hands. Others, however, contradict working with machines. Personally, I would prefer working with machines because I think it has more advantages to our lives.

First of all, working with machines has an obviously high (应用比较级)efficiency than using hands. For example, to make a glass cup may probably take an experienced worker two hours to blow it into shape, but with the help of an automatic machine, the time will be cut down to just two minutes. It's only one tenth of the former. That means machines make possible the manufacture of large quantities of products become fairly effective.有语法错误，出现了两个谓语，make 和become.

Another reason why I advocate the attitude of working using machines is that the can maximally save labor resource so that more people can be relieved from heavy, repeated routine jobs. They can spend more time on researches, experiments, even enjoying with their families. The most significant invent----the computer is the best example. With a tap of the "Enter" key, it will do what you order day and night, no sleeping, no complaint. Otherwise a complex problem will cost an unimaginable number of you 有问题to do calculating, analyzing and so on.

Thirdly, controlled by certain programs, machines can complete their task with high precise. On the other hand, hand-making is relatively unreliable.举个例子为好

So, in a word, why people create machines is to help themselves at the most. Then why don't work with machines. 这个结尾有点弱，观点不明确