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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Young people enjoy life much better than older people?

For most of the time, we are always on a arduous journey to seeking for the answer of this question: in the modern times, whether Young people enjoy life much better than older people? Most of people hold the opinion that young people bear much harder life than older people, for they face much more stress than older people and there are a bunch of complicated problems rush into them. Contrary to the opinion with most of people, my heartfelt agree with the ideal that Young people enjoy life much better than older people.

First of all, as we know, at present, numerous inventors are filled with our life,such as computer, automobile, television and so on. These facilities bring extreordinaty convenience to young people contribute to improve their daily life's quality and quantity. For instance, i can drive my own automobile to school everyday, while in the studing periods of my parents, they just on foot to school. Thus, it alway cost a lot of time and increasing unsafe factors in their way.


Secondly, young people can enjoy much more broad horizen than old people. Let us take a glance at the fact: more and more people are crazy about online chantting, online games and get some information for the internet. It is expanding our knowledge dramatically that from the computer and internet. We can easily obtain current event for the computer and communicate with others, get more infermation about them, no matter they are in the States, Japan or China.

On the other hand, young people really encounter various complex situations in nowadays and bear much more pressure than the older. The expanding number of young people face the stress of entering university and seek for a content job. They should deal with a diverse of sophisticated things to suit modern society.

Numerous the benefit of life that older people enjoy are, they can not complete with the advantages that young people's lif, when convenience and widen view are taken into consideration. Based on the facts prevailly stated, we may safely draw a conclusion that:Young people enjoy life much better than older people.