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作文求拍!!!!第一次发稿

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楼主
发表于 2008-7-20 11:25:00 | 显示全部楼层

作文求拍!!!!第一次发稿

真是不好意思发,但为了写作水平能尽快提高,因为考试临近了! 恳请德克帮忙批一下!并打分

City and town which do you prefer to live?

It is difficult to say, living in the city and life in a small town, which is better, because both of them provide important but different experiences for people.  In my point of view, I prefer life in a small town.  There are three advantages for living a small town that are listed as following. 

One of the most important benefits is the less cost.  This is very important for people who do not have more money since they get the income on the average of the country. Therefore, how can you reach your goals by spending the same money?  For example, you can buy a house in the small town instead purchase an apartment in the city; and you can save more money to travel, or for your children to take a nice school. 

Another important advantage is the nice habitation environment.  In small town, it has the relative stability residents, because they do not often make a move, due to the job changing, or other reasons.  Therefore, it is good for children to grow up and easily for people to make the good relationship with their neighbors.  Furthermore, they do not need to concern when they go to working or shopping, if they will suffer the traffic jam.   

The last one is huge advantage for people health that is less population.  There are no more cars, factories, and less population.  Therefore, people can breathe the fresh air, see more trees and grasses, even they can run in the forest, which can release the pressure of people after working, and keep their health.

In a word, living in a small town has more advantages like i above presented.  But I cannot deny that living in the city also has some benefits.  Like, more entertainments and fashionable.  However, in order to, efficiently use your money, giving a nice environment to your children growing up, and to keep your health.  I suggest that you live in a small town.   

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-20 22:36:00 | 显示全部楼层
请大家随便拍吧!我顶着!
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-23 00:30:00 | 显示全部楼层
多些夸奖,我真是一点信心有!
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2008-7-23 00:48:00 | 显示全部楼层

多谢夸奖,我真是一点信心都没有!(不好意思楼上打错了,意思全变了)

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