第一篇处子作，6月考，求大家评改，德克的猪快来啊，感激不尽

coloma

1. People attend college or university for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge). Why do you think people attend college or university? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 

Why, you may wonder, so many students choose to attend college or university after graduating from high school. Perhaps they have the oppotunities to enter the work force, however, they continue their study instead of getting a job. The reasons for most of them, from my prospect, are that the advanced education can sharpen their study skills and increase their career oppotunities.
   

    First of all, if you do not attend the university, you won't have the chance to receive a systematic training of your study skills. in most cases, when you are enrolling in a University, you are asked to select courses by yourself. This eventually requires you to achieve your study programme independently, intead of just attending the classes rearranged for you. Of course, this will develop your study skills such as making plan, adapting to diverse teachers,etc. On the other hand, suppose you took part in a research project, probably you should try your best to get information from internet, communicate with your partners and consult the professors. These are also significant study skills for you.Once you miss the college education, you will find it hard to abtain equavelant ability under other situations.
   

    Another essential reason for students to attend university is that the advanced education can provide them with more career oppotunities. Nowadays the world has been greatly changed by high-thec, and the high-thec. itself never stops running ahead. Thus, many new jobs which require candidates with advanced education background appears. Take communication industrial for instance, jobs within this area often require advanced knowledge in computer science, language skills and so on. Thus, you will get more opportunities to pusue a career with a bachalor degree in computer science.
   

    other reasons such as preparing for further education are also available for students who attend college or university. In this passage I focus on the two main reasons of attending college. one is the sharpen of the study skills, the other is the increase of career oppotunities.

自己写作文觉得挺吃力的。6月24就要考了，大家给点建议吧，感激不尽阿~~

[此贴子已经被作者于2007-5-29 15:40:59编辑过]

coloma

自己顶一下，nn多多评改吧

coloma

在论坛下载了词汇替换，准备好好背背

这样水平的作文能得多少分呢？ 现在应该多写还是多看范文呢？应该去找个模板来用吗？

准备天天都练作文，否则到时候30分钟内根本就写不好。。。

coloma

还有不到一个月时间，6月24考。

大二前后英语考过4。6级，都是70几分。

之后英语学习没有间断，但是几乎没有练过写作，所以写作文觉得特别头痛。。。急救阿~~~

coloma

迷惑阿~~~