[求助]請問這樣的寫法有問題嗎？請指正...謝謝~

guandream

以下是引用itsmyways在2004-11-4 9:35:00的发言：

請指正下方有畫線、粗體的部分，因為我有點不太確定...

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When confronted with various questions, different people make their own decisions due to their respective viewpoints. Analysis of these questions helps us improve the understanding of our basic needs and preferences. One of such controversial issues is whether we support that a large shopping center is built in our neighborhood or not. (there is nothing wrong with the grammar, but the structure is really awkward)The choice is not easy to make. However, from my point of view, I will think supporting the building of the shopping center is more advisable. Among numerous factors which support  my arguments, I will discuss three conspicuous aspects of them as follows.

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Neighbors are the people who live near us, and their behavior deeply affects our daily life. Good neighbors can make us feel comfortable and give us much help when we get into some trouble. On the other hand, if we have bad neighbors, they would make our life irregular and even have us want to move out. Therefore, from my point of view, among numerous qualities of a good neighbor, I think there are at least three conspicuous aspects of them as follows.

guandream

"whether" already implies two alternatives, so you donot need or oppose. support to build:" to build "is infinitive as an objecitve.