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[原创]非牛人之小挫人的第一篇练习作文 大家进来帮改改啊

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楼主
发表于 2007-3-30 20:15:00 | 显示全部楼层

[原创]非牛人之小挫人的第一篇练习作文 大家进来帮改改啊

是题库的第一篇:人们选择上大学的原因

Among the millions of high school graduates in China, surprisingly there are hundreds of thousands of them who enter the college annually. The freshmen can be categorized into two fields: some are intended, others are blind.

The former part attends college to increase their experiences, enlarge their knowledge and widen their insights. In China the orbit of students’ life is directly across between school and home especially from primary school to high school. The regularity is becoming much clearer than before with kids rising into higher level, the education of pre-college can be attributed to elementary one and only spread of several subjects, so the accumulation of experience and specific knowledge nearly equals to blank beyond studying, even have no possibility to deepen and specialize the knowledge. After entering the college, kids finally have more opportunities to focus on one or few subjects they are interested in and get much closer to the dream. Just like the Founding Prime Minister Enlai Chou of P.R.C. determined to study in order to raise his beloved motherland, helping her escape from poverty, starvation and so forth.

Obviously, some in the first active part are to guarantee the opportunities of advancement for future job market. In such a more and more fierce competitive society, college education becoming universal education, those high school graduates with no professional skills must have lots of difficulties in finding a decent job and even would get no job.

The second part can be concluded as blind with even no personal goal or perspective: following their parents’ cherished but failed college entrance dream, entering college with the observation of their friends’ decisions and so on so forth. All because of nescience, ironically it always becomes an reason for people to do something.

沙发
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-31 12:59:00 | 显示全部楼层
怎么没人啊
板凳
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-31 17:18:00 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢三楼啊
地板
 楼主| 发表于 2007-3-31 17:21:00 | 显示全部楼层
啊?要写题目么?还有请问是在哪儿上的辐导班啊?那次看过一个问山版的帖子要不要写题目 回答说不要的呀?
5#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-1 22:24:00 | 显示全部楼层
怎么没什么人来给建议啊?还有ESL是什么啊?
6#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-2 19:07:00 | 显示全部楼层
感谢山斑的详细解答啊 能不能再对作文进行下评价啊?是不是太烂 看的人不少 踩的好少啊
7#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-3 17:42:00 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢12楼哦 字数统计了一下不足300字 会因为字数扣分么?
8#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-4 19:32:00 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢山斑
9#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-4 19:33:00 | 显示全部楼层
字数统计了一下不足300字 会因为字数扣分么?
10#
 楼主| 发表于 2007-4-5 19:48:00 | 显示全部楼层

山斑进啊 路遥知马力,日久见人心

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