第一篇作文，请牛人批批，5月9号就要考了

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第一篇作文，考过两次IBT了，lg以前帮我改过，号称他指导过考满分没问题，结果第一次21，第二次才20，还是到版上来求牛人吧，好久没学英语了，请大家狠批，谢谢啦，老题目： Parents are the best teacher of children.

    

A multitude of people take the view
that parents are best teachers. There is no deny that parents are the most
familiar and trustworthy people for children. However, taking education into
consideration, I strongly incline to oppose this viewpoint. I do not believe
parents are best teachers.

    

The threshold reason lies in a lot of
parents’ absence from educational knowledge. To be an excellent teacher, we can
never emphasize the importance of elementary teaching measure too much. However,
not all the parents have this kind of knowledge. My cousin Jake is just a
quintessential case in point. Although he has a high degree and successful career,
he is not a first-class father in my mind. Sometimes he is very angry to his
kids and does not know how to express. To him, the best useful educational
measure is to take a physical punishment on kids. Consequently, my nephews
became very traitorous and rejected to talk with their father.

    

Therefore, the educational knowledge
plays very significant role in communication with children and the best teacher
should be someone who have these knowledge.

    

In addition, a lot of people have  more or less various of shortcomings. What is
more, sometimes they do not realize or admit these. As we know, children like
to mimic their parents’ behaviors. It is conceivable that children tend to
inherit these shortcomings if parents do not care these. For example, my friend
Kate used to lie in front of her kids. I was not surprised when she complained
to me that her kids learnt to lie.

    

Last be not least, it is not
efficient to teach parents own children. Because parents are the closest people
to them, children love to play games when they are leant from parents. Therefore,
it is probably take double or triple time to teach their own children.

    

In conclusion, I do not believe
parents are best teacher of children.