[求助]写作,请各位高手帮帮忙!!

cindy_xh

今天写了第一篇作文，用了半个多小时，照着打到电脑上居然又用了半个多小时，而且错误连篇, 我快疯了！独立写作一共才半个小时，我前前后后用了将近两个小时！！求助阿！！！

我其他三项都不是大问题，唯独写作。请版竹，各位前辈支支招，帮我顺利渡过105, 拜托了!!!

这是我今天写的作文, 知道不好, 不过恳求各位指正!!!

cindy_xh

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement？A person should never make an important decision alone.

 Should A Person Never Make An Important Decision Alone?

The issue of a person should never make an important decision alone will certain lead to a heat debate among people, and views on this issue vary from person to person. Some people hold the idea that a person should never make an important decision alone, however, many others argue that the verse is true. For my part, I side with the later for several following reasons.

First, the issue is too absolutely. Actually, some important decisions people make alone are much available than those advised by others. It is probably no exaggeration to say that no one is better you than yourself; therefore, your own decision must be most suitable for yourself. Here ate two real examples to manifest the notion. Two senior student are both interested in arts, but when the got the university’s offer, one chose Literary as his major after considering the merits and demerits himself alone, while the other took his parents' idea, and decided to major computer, which was thought to be more popular and practical. So guess, what’s the result? The one who made his decision alone become a well-know writer; in contrast, the other who followed his parents' wish got to nowhere, since he had no interest in computer. From this illustration, we can safely arrive the conclusion that a person an make an important decision alone.

Secondly, in some circumstance, people have to make an important decision alone without and choice. For insurance, a commander in the war has to make his military decision not only independently but also quickly. The war won't wait for his discussion with others. In addition, most of his decisions made alone in the context are right

Besides, everything has double folds. Not all decisions made alone are correct. Some persons' limited knowledge and experience have many adverse effects on his decision. As a result, his own decisions are lapsable. In some extent, on had better listen to others' voices and adopt useful advice. Nevertheless, this is for making a better decision.

In conclusion, I strongly commit to the notion that a person can make an important decision alone.

[此贴子已经被作者于2006-10-31 23:08:46编辑过]

cindy_xh

Thank you all the same !!!!