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Because she knew many of the leaders of colonial America and the American Revolution personally, Mercy Otis Warren was continually at or near the center of political events from 1765 to 1789, a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make her one of the most valuable historians of the era.

Aa vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make
Ba vantage point, when combined with her talent for writing, that made
Ca vantage point that combined with her talent for writing, and it made
Dand this vantage point, which combined with her talent for writing to make
Eand this vantage point, combined with her talent for writing, made

正确答案: E

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nemiah

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发表于 2011-7-15 19:33:37 | 显示全部楼层

答案是选E 吧？B 我一看就排除了，B从语法讲一点也没错，但是when 是不能随便乱加的，会如果原意的，如果原文中没有任何信息要用when，选项加了 when 就是错的， when 是时间状语，这里就是 a vantage point 加上her talent for writing，不需要用when， GMAC 很喜欢用when来迷糊我们，LZ 要注意哦~

-- by 会员 jameshzd (2011/7/15 18:08:13)

我觉得B的错误不在于when吧。。

a vantage that.. 是个同位语，但是前面主句里没有和他同为的东西。。对吧？