【揽瓜阁语法打卡小分队】Day7

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1.（187）United States Senator Daniel Inouye was appointed to several posts within the Democratic Party during his first term, that included assistant majority whip and vice-chair of the Democratic Senatorial Committee.
A.that included （that指代term，改变语义）
B.which includes （which指代term，改变语义）
C.including
D.some of which were （离修饰对象太远了）E.among them being （being wordy & 修饰对象不明确）

2.（188）Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are now drawing solid conclusions about how the human brain grows and how babies acquire language.
A.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood, are
B.Neuroscientists, having amassed a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are （neuroscientists后面无谓语）
C.Neuroscientists amassing a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood over the past twenty years, and are （neuroscientists后面无谓语）
D.Neuroscientists have amassed a wealth of knowledge over the past twenty years about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,    （neuronscientists have amassed knowledge, drawing... 错误，原句想要表达的是[有...知识的科学家得出了一个结论]
E.Neuroscientists have amassed, over the past twenty years, a wealth of knowledge about the brain and its development from birth to adulthood,  同D
DE：drawing不是amassed的结果

3.（189）She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.
A.She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to  （less...compare to错误; run-on）
B.Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to （less...compare to错误;）
C.Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in
D.Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to  （less...compare to错误;）
E.She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in （过去完成时使用错误；run-on）