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lemonlime

TWE 129 A university plans to develop a new research center in your country. Some people want a center for business research. Other people want a center for research in agriculture(farming). Which one do you recommend?

Sometimes it is really hard to choose from one to another. Which one is better, a new research center for business or a new center for agriculture? They both have great advantages. However, in my opinion, for my country--China, a new center for agriculture research will be needed more.

First of all, China is one of those countries whose agriculture is the most important issue of the whole country. It has great amount of land for farming since a long time ago. Therefore, agriculture is the one which feeds the whole country. And, more than half of the entir financial income of China is made by agriculture products. A new research center for agriculture will help to find new kinds of farming product which could make even more money for my country. It can be said that China is living on agriculture now.

In the second place, China is still a developing country. It has some areas that stay in poor and hanger. Farming will more helpful for the people in those areas to make money and feed their families. Also, the new research center for agriculture may make some new cheaper and easier growing products that poor people in China could get and grow them easier.

Although a new research center for business is not a bad idea at all and may help on the economy of China, agriculture is the basic needed for China right now. China has to solve people's hunger first, then laterly develop business. So, a new center for business research seems not as important as a center for agriculture research.

Therefore, it is easy to choose from a new center for business research or a new center for agriculture research. The answer is obvious for my country that a new research center for agriculture is more necessary. The most needed one has to be solved first.

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lemonlime

thank you

lemonlime

我自己修改了一下， 麻烦在给看看。 谢谢。

It is always hard to choose from one to another. Which one is better, a new research center for business or a new center for agriculture in my country? It is not easy to say since they both have great advantages in several aspects. However, in my opinion, depends on the individual situation of my country--China, a new center for agriculture research will be needed more.

First of all, China is one of those countries whose agriculture is the most important quality of the whole country. Chian has great amount of land for farming and used it well since a long time ago. And it doesn't really have much thing been good at according to historical issues. Therefore, agriculture is the one which feeds the entire country. Also, more than half of the total financial income of China is made by agriculture products. A new research center for agriculture will help finding new kinds of farming product which could make even more money for China. It can be said that China is living on agriculture now.

Secondly, China is one of the developing countries which are not as rich as those western countries. Some areas in the west of China still stay in poorness and hunger. Farming will be more helpful for people who live there to make money and feed their families. Farming for those are enen more important than their lives. The new research center for agriculture may make some new cheaper and easier growing products that could be used wildly in those areas.

Although a new research center for business is not a bad idea at all and may be helpful for the economy of China, agriculture is the basic needed for China right now. China has to solve people's hunger first, and deals with business later. So, a new center for business research seems not as urgent as a center for agriculture research.

Consequently, it is easy to choose from a new center for business research or a new center for agriculture research in China. The answer is obvious that a new research center for agriculture is more necessary there, because the most basic event has to be solved first. But I belive a business research center will be needed when China is stronger later.