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标题: 拜托大家看看这题语法 [打印本页]

作者: celiababy2 时间: 2012-10-28 18:20
标题: 拜托大家看看这题语法
Mary Wollstonecraft's A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

	and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing
	and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing
	as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing
	and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized
	but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of

我选的B，答案是D,我觉的B 不错啊

作者: DUKB24 时间: 2012-10-28 20:08
two kinds of credits are given to demonstrate why the work was unprecedented

they should be put in parallel form

was unprecedented in noun and in noun

B is not parallel to the former part

作者: kiwifoodtown 时间: 2012-10-29 10:33
B的IN 后面没有具体的名词，形式不平行。

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