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标题: 求NN给解释下verbal review第53题的OG对C选项的解释~ [打印本页]

作者: twingkey 时间: 2012-10-20 12:50
标题: 求NN给解释下verbal review第53题的OG对C选项的解释~
The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A.conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide

B.conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding

C.conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses,deciding

D.conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide

E.conditions, and in their use the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, decide

答案：D

选是选对了，但对og的解释实在不解。

OG对C选项的解释：By using the coordinating conjunction and, this version of the sentence creates the need for a second subject and main verb; this second subject is absent. The participle deciding cannot function as a main verb.

也就是说，即使换成decide，C项还是不对，因为缺second subject。
但C、D应该是一样的结构啊，为什么C就缺而D不缺呢？是因为in using的缘故吗？实在是想不通....召唤NN！！

作者: twingkey 时间: 2012-10-20 13:11
又查了一些含in using的例句，发现其用法一般都是放句尾表示“在使用.....方面”，与using还是不一样的，后面直接加动词会比较奇怪.....我只能体会到这了....希望有别的想法的同学来纠正一下~~~~

作者: twingkey 时间: 2012-10-20 15:10
自己顶.....

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-10-20 16:37
SVO and，——后面应该是加句子，所以要求有第二对S+V,但是像D这种情况，comma的作用其实是用于隔开插入语部分，再加上decide和前面的examine的主语是一样的，所以就省略了，直接decide就可以了。。。。。
C选项，首先and后面都不是句子，用and无法与前面形成并列关系。（一看就是结构混乱）
D选项，直接用decide，发起者与前面保持一致

作者: DUKB24 时间: 2012-10-20 17:22
I am not a big fan of this OG explanation

it seems that this explanation should give to answer choie A

if and is preceded by a comma, it will make sense to say that

but that is not the case in choice C

作者: twingkey 时间: 2012-10-20 19:12

SVO and，——后面应该是加句子，所以要求有第二对S+V,但是像D这种情况，comma的作用其实是用于隔开插入语部分，再加上decide和前面的examine的主语是一样的，所以就省略了，直接decide就可以了。。。。。
C选项，首先and后面都不是句子，用and无法与前面形成并列关系。（一看就是结构混乱）
D选项，直接用decide，发起者与前面保持一致

-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/10/20 16:37:15)

那个....也就是说C选项的in using不是插入语喽？这个怎么判断呀.....OG那解释是说即使改成decide，C也不对，一定要加second subject.....晕.....

作者: twingkey 时间: 2012-10-20 19:14

I am not a big fan of this OG explanation

it seems that this explanation should give to answer choie A

if and is preceded by a comma, it will make sense to say that

but that is not the case in choice C

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/20 17:22:21)

确实是C选项的解释...T-T

作者: DUKB24 时间: 2012-10-20 19:45

-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/20 17:22:21)

确实是C选项的解释...T-T

-- by 会员 twingkey (2012/10/20 19:14:40)

yes， I check it out myself

I don't know what OG is saying here

作者: sisichen666 时间: 2012-10-20 21:12

The normative model of strategic decision-making suggests that executives examine a firm’s external environment and internal conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide on a strategy.

A.conditions, and in using the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, can decide

B.conditions, and they use the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses in deciding

C.conditions and, in using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses,deciding

D.conditions and, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, decide

E.conditions, and in their use the set of objective criteria they derive from these analyses, decide

答案：D

选是选对了，但对og的解释实在不解。

OG对C选项的解释：By using the coordinating conjunction and, this version of the sentence creates the need for a second subject and main verb; this second subject is absent. The participle deciding cannot function as a main verb.

也就是说，即使换成decide，C项还是不对，因为缺second subject。
但C、D应该是一样的结构啊，为什么C就缺而D不缺呢？是因为in using的缘故吗？实在是想不通....召唤NN！！

-- by 会员 twingkey (2012/10/20 12:50:20)

og就是说这里deciding不能作为谓语，哪里说变成decide也不对了？？？？？in using就是个插入语，那他后面要不然就加一个句子，要不然就加一个同主语的谓语动词。。。我就是这么理解的。。。不用太纠结了吧亲。。。。你知道and后面应该怎么用就ok啦。。。。这里只有D是正确的啊。。

作者: twingkey 时间: 2012-10-23 20:55

-- by 会员 twingkey (2012/10/20 12:50:20)

-- by 会员 sisichen666 (2012/10/20 21:12:22)

我觉得OG这解释的意思就是：
这个选项有两个错：
1、this second subject is absent.
2、The participle deciding cannot function as a main verb.
我就是不太理解第一个错.....确实比较纠结....

作者: DUKB24 时间: 2012-10-23 23:19
http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-776408-1-1.html

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作者: twingkey 时间: 2012-10-24 18:38

http://forum.chasedream.com/GMAT_SC/thread-776408-1-1.html

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-- by 会员 DUKB24 (2012/10/23 23:19:52)

嗯.....明白啦~~~~不纠结啦~~~~非常感谢！

作者: sarahzzz 时间: 2014-3-13 16:12

DUKB24 发表于 2012-10-20 17:22
I am not a big fan of this OG explanationit seems that this explanation should give to answer choie ...

这个地方做插入语的逗号可以放在and后吗？改成conditions, using the set of objective criteria derived from these analyses, and decide 可以吗？求NN解答~~~

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