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标题: GWD一题，筒子们来讨论下！！！ [打印本页]
作者: jameshzd 时间: 2011-7-16 14:54
标题: GWD一题，筒子们来讨论下！！！
As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A.As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B.As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C.Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A.As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B.As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C.Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
AB排除掉就不用说了，C 排除的原因是改变了原本是 results that A causes B 变成了 results in A causing B，原文意思以不够完整了。
C 和D 我又徘徊了好久，C 我觉得 results in the fact that 有点啰嗦了，但是 后面的 with ....结构 让我 觉得用的不太好，因为我觉得一个事件 导致另一个事件的发生，用with 来做伴随 似乎 忽略了这一点，大家有什么想法吗？欢迎讨论啊！！！
As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing the bee to sustain a fatal injury.
A.As the honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed, staying where it is inserted, this results in the act of stinging causing
B.As the heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
C.Honeybee’s stinger, heavily barbed and staying where it is inserted, results in the fact that the act of stinging causes
D.The heavily barbed stinger of the honeybee stays where it is inserted, and results in the act of stinging causing
E.The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted, with the result that the act of stinging causes
AB排除掉就不用说了，C 排除的原因是改变了原本是 results that A causes B 变成了 results in A causing B，原文意思以不够完整了。
C 和D 我又徘徊了好久，C 我觉得 results in the fact that 有点啰嗦了，但是 后面的 with ....结构 让我 觉得用的不太好，因为我觉得一个事件 导致另一个事件的发生，用with 来做伴随 似乎 忽略了这一点，大家有什么想法吗？欢迎讨论啊！！！
作者: jameshzd 时间: 2011-7-16 14:56
不好意思啊，我好像复制粘贴了好几遍。。
作者: jameshzd 时间: 2011-7-16 16:05
没人理啊。。。桑心啊。。。
作者: jameshzd 时间: 2011-7-16 17:47
再次无力的往上顶啊！
作者: jameshzd 时间: 2011-7-16 18:48
童鞋们要不要这样啊。。。喊天天不应喊地地不灵啊。。。。
作者: MarsTOF 时间: 2011-7-16 19:00
CD result的主语变成stinger 不对 应该是stinger stays where it is insert 导致的严重后果
个人意见。。我语法也不好诶 。。各种悲催。。
作者: jameshzd 时间: 2011-7-16 19:25
CD result的主语变成stinger 不对 应该是stinger stays where it is insert 导致的严重后果
个人意见。。我语法也不好诶 。。各种悲催。。
-- by 会员 MarsTOF (2011/7/16 19:00:42)
我觉得有道理啊，C 的话是 stinger results in。。。是不太好列。
作者: 若雪 时间: 2011-7-17 09:32
刚发现这题~~同意MARS，问题的根本原因是原来作者人家想说蜜蜂的刺留在了插入的地方。。导致了balabalabala..
C说的是蜜蜂的刺本身导致了balabalabala....
james默默冤枉了蜜蜂的刺噢~
而且C的results in the fact that....读起来好wordy...
作者: shirleylittl 时间: 2011-8-24 17:13
个人以为是“The honeybee’s stinger is heavily barbed and stays where it is inserted”这个事实导致了后来的result，而不是The honeybee’s stinger这个东东导致的。OG上常碰到这种整体指代的问题，记得有个什么鸟的，选择是bringing to 34 the number.....
作者: kimFA35 时间: 2011-9-19 13:45
我悲剧地发现怎么这题选E吖。GWD上面是不是写错了==
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