I choose D; Answer is B;
I do not think B is right, "that" clause in B modify "imprisonment", such modification may express a confusing sense.
The structure should be it a crime (for sb to do sth) punishable by imprisonment.
To be discussed....
作者: mariezhu 时间: 2004-6-15 00:14
偶同意你的看法,如果我选也会是D,不知其它NN们的看法...
作者: 麻集爱 时间: 2004-6-15 00:19
Because of a law passed in 1993 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold.
介词+ one's doing ??
作者: juan 时间: 2004-6-15 01:16
标题: open to discussion
18. On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion and coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.
- With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
- A law passed in 1993 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding
- Because of a law passed in 1993 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold.
- Due to a law being passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
I choose D; Answer is B;
I do not think B is right, "that" clause in B modify "imprisonment", such modification may express a confusing sense.
The structure should be it a crime (for sb to do sth) punishable by imprisonment.
To be discussed....
D. Because of a law passed in 1993 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold.
因为passed in 1993是修饰a law的,所以可以把D简化成because of a law making it a crime punishabke by ..... 个人感觉这里because of a law making..的结构很不好...而且我觉得这句话的前后句子不是因果关系.
而B选项: With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
是不是可以把makes it a crime中的it看成指代后面的that从句, that a United States citizen hold.....
这题如果是我做,我也会在B.D间徘徊...不过最后可能还是会选B.因为总感觉because of a law making it.....很怪.
多多讨论.
作者: rt316 时间: 2004-6-15 02:56
D. Because of a law passed in 1993 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold.
因为passed in 1993是修饰a law的,所以可以把D简化成because of a law making it a crime punishabke by ..... 个人感觉这里because of a law making..的结构很不好...而且我觉得这句话的前后句子不是因果关系.
而B选项: With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
是不是可以把makes it a crime中的it看成指代后面的that从句, that a United States citizen hold.....
这题如果是我做,我也会在B.D间徘徊...不过最后可能还是会选B.因为总感觉because of a law making it.....很怪.
多多讨论.
有理
作者: LES 时间: 2004-6-15 09:00
B. With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
没有问题，makes，因为是政府法律法规的内容，所以用一般现在时，make it... that: it 做形式宾语。make的考点之一：
make的考点有：
1. make sth. sth.
2. make sth. adj.
3. make it ... that/ to d it为形式宾语，that/ to do 是真正的宾语。
D. because of 比because, 前者多用于简单句。
作者: kingsoft 时间: 2004-6-15 09:35
我选了D，但是看LES的解释，我觉得make it adj for sb to do sth也是一个固定的结构，没有什么问题
我当时排除B是从意思上来看的，我觉得是因果关系。回头再看看用伴随来解释，似乎也无不可
我想问：D中的a law passed in 1993 making 在两个分词之间是否需要逗号或者连接词？？
作者: LES 时间: 2004-6-15 10:23
"make it adj for sb to do sth也是一个固定的结构"
对，没错！但D选项不是这个结构，而是make it sth. for sb. to do sth. -不过就这一点而言，偶不太确定。
排除D的主要原因是because of后面的宾语太冗长了，不符合用because of 为了简洁的原则。
作者: mariezhu 时间: 2004-6-15 11:22
偶现在也对前后两句是否是因果关系有疑问,好像不是也可以...
我对B的感觉:第一个that没问题,修饰law,可是第二个that,不仅象weiyu说的那样,修饰上可能有歧义,而且如果make it a crime for sb to do sth不是错误(见我下面找到的例子),那么that从句无疑也不够简洁
关于because of, 我回大全找到以下两个例子, 感觉是because of不能跟gerund或者句子,但是跟修饰语长些的名词(只要是名词)不是错误
165. Because of the business community’s uncertainty about the President’s position in regard to the issue of the budget deficit, an unanticipated rise in interest rates has occurred.
(A) in regard to the issue of the budget deficit, an unanticipated rise in interest rates has
(B) on the deficit, an unanticipated rise in interest rates has
(C) regarding the budgetary deficit, an unanticipated rise in interest rates have
(D) on the deficit, an unanticipated rise in interest rates have
(E) regarding the deficit, an unanticipated rise in interest rats have
166. Because of the enormous research and development expenditures required to survive in the electronics industry, an industry marked by rapid innovation and volatile demand, such firms tend to be very large.
(A) to survive
(B) of firms to survive
(C) for surviving
(D) for survival
(E) for firms’ survival
此外关于make it a crime for sb to do sth, 我也查了一些,如下:
Each of the services have recruiting regulations which make it a crime for recruiters to lie, cheat, or knowingly process applicants that they know are ineligible for enlistment
Are you aware of the fact that the UN wants to;
10. Make it a CRIME for parents to deny their children access to immoral and undesirable material.
11. Make it a CRIME for parents to determine who their children are not allowed to associate with.
12. Make it a CRIME for parents to influence their children in terms of thought, conscience and religion.
13. Make it a CRIME for parents to inspect their children's bedroom to look for drugs or obscene material
作者: LES 时间: 2004-6-15 11:48
谢谢marie mm又辛苦地查了资料，使偶搞懂一个用法。
又看了一下B和D，试着翻译后觉得逻辑上似乎有点问题。
B. 有了一部...法，人们发现要......
D. 因为有一部...法，人们发现要......－感觉不太通，应该说“因为有...法，人们要......”，即后半句的found that似乎不顺。
只是感觉......不懂的感觉......
作者: juan 时间: 2004-6-15 12:12
谢谢merie MM的详细资料.
还是感觉这里不是因果关系,应该是伴随关系.
作者: bon 时间: 2004-6-15 12:44
这两天大家都在讨论GWD的题，我认为GWD的题路较怪
就拿这道题来说，我从没见过noun+过去分词短语+现在分词短语的结构，但是就出现了：
a law passed in 1993 making it a crime punishable
所以我认为象这样的题目不用深入研究。
大家讨论
作者: LES 时间: 2004-6-15 12:49
请问bon，GWD题是什么题啊？前两天也有人来问偶，回说是GWD的题，那么是他自己编的题，还是他搞到的真题？谢谢！
作者: bon 时间: 2004-6-15 12:55
我也不知道啊，你去问问麻集，好像他一直在做的样子
作者: tianwan 时间: 2004-6-21 22:29
B, With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
Can the "hold" be pural to match "a citizen"?
作者: LES 时间: 2004-6-22 00:28
B, With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
Can the "hold" be pural to match "a citizen"?
tianwan的眼睛真厉害！
偶做题目的时候竟然没有发现这么大的错误！
这样看来只能选D了。
作者: arundhati 时间: 2004-7-7 15:46
我想问一下A，除了这个hold 需要用单数外，on account of这种用法有问题吗？我不太熟悉这种用法，请教大家！
作者: jefferyli 时间: 2004-7-18 21:49
9-18 GWD 的答案是D，同一题出现在3-22，GWD给的答案是B，不知他是否也拿不准......
作者: perpetual 时间: 2004-8-8 10:45
一看到because of , with 后面加一长串东东，偶就晕。
作者: nanalin 时间: 2004-8-15 09:49
9-18 GWD 的答案是D，同一题出现在3-22，GWD给的答案是B，不知他是否也拿不准......
我这边看到9-18是B;3-22是D 
这题题型很偏,跟OG明确性的题型差很多
作者: antimemory 时间: 2004-8-17 22:01
倒是在LZM的书里见过这样的结构：当用一个物体的持续性动作对该物体进行限定性修饰时，采用-ing形式，相当于表明该动作时该物体的一个永久属性，而若是法令或权力的内容，则用现在分词短语对该法令或权力进行限定，如the regulation banning smoking
那按照这种说法，a law （passed in 1993） making it a crime punishable 就能够成立
作者: tony6 时间: 2004-8-23 16:02
同GWD3-22
http://forum.chasedream.com/dispbbs.asp?boardID=23&ID=60630&page=1
作者: 我爱宝宝 时间: 2004-8-24 04:57
我这题选了c。og上有类似的，但我现在拿不出来。
作者: liyuan 时间: 2004-9-13 22:58
太赞了！
作者: xoway 时间: 2004-9-15 12:29
这道题如果必须选择一个答案，我选C，虽然C也可能有问题。
先说说B和D的错误
B的错误起码有一个hold，不说了
D的错误在于，本句没有表示因果的意思，D的意思说，因为法令的颁布。。，移民发现。。。，在gmat的题目中，很少看见这样表达因果的，这并不是典型的因果关系句。而且because of 后面加一大堆东西，一般来说也被ets抛弃
下面来说为什么C对
C的结构是独立主格，ets喜欢的常用结构，类似的结构在大全里很多。
关于独立主格，直接引用jnlvo在“大全注释”中对959的论述
959.Child care already a solid part of the employee benefits package at many companies, more businesses are focusing on a newer family benefit known as elder care, servicing for older dependents.
(A) Child care
(B) With child care
(C) Child care as
(D) Being the Child care was
(E) With child care's being
独立主格只有B。独立主格在句首根据意思可加with。独立主格with+n+(as)+n,主句。有时也可把with置句后。分词做独立主格有时前面可以加with或without, 如The park is beautiful with all the trees putting on a tender green. 此外，with常常用在独立主格结构前，构成介词短语作状语。这种用法中的with不表达什么意义，因而常可省略。请看例句：
1)With a revolver in his right hand, Johnny hurled his muscular body against the door and smashed it down with a crash.(约翰尼右手拿着左轮手枪，健壮的身体猛扑在门上，轰隆一声把门撞开了。)
2)The traffic inched along,with horns honking.(汽车缓慢地向前挪着，喇叭声不断响着。)
此题名词+名词。名词+名词作独立主格一般用作同位; 修饰主句一定要加with(参见OG104)。故A不好。
其它独立主格形式：
名词(代词)+现在分词、过去分词；Weather permitting ,We'll go to the Summer Palace.
名词(代词)+形容词；
名词(代词)+副词；This little excitement over, nothing was to be done but to return to a steadfast gaze at my mute companion.
名词(代词)+不定式；
名词(代词) +介词短语构成。He came out of the library, a large book under his arm.
回到这道题上来，此题并非n+n形式的独立主格，with自然可以省略。
而且独立主格结构对逻辑意思的表达更为贴切。
C唯一的问题是关于make的用法，这里make it for sb doing是否也可以正确。
虽然make it后面并非一定要跟that或者to do,
例如：
1,She made it in films when she was still a teenager.
2,We just made it in time for the wedding.
3,I can't make it on Friday.
4,She has made it through the worst of the illnesss now.
但目前没有找到任何可以直接确认选项C用法正确性的例句,我也认为C里面关于make的用法是可能错误的。
请大家继续讨论。
作者: horsefish 时间: 2004-9-18 03:27
我选C.
D的错误是介词+分词
102. Except for a concert performance that the composer himself staged in 1911, Scott Joplin's ragtime opera Treemonisha was not produced until 1972, sixty-one years after its completion.
(A) Except for a concert performance that the composer himself staged
(B) Except for a concert performance with the composer himself staging it
(C) Besides a concert performance being staged by the composer himself
(D) Excepting a concert performance that the composer himself staged
(E) With the exception of a concert performance with the staging done by the composer himself
Choice A is best. In B, the participle staging inappropriately expresses ongoing rather than completed action, and the prepositional phrase containing this participle (with... it) is unidiomatic. Likewise, C uses the participle being inappropriately. In D, the use of Excepting in place of the preposition Except for is unidiomatic. Choice E is awkward and wordy.
作者: bloodcherry 时间: 2004-9-20 04:07
这题很怪啊...
但是我不同意选C
A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
这里holding变成分词短语修饰citizen,好象citizen是个crime一样，逻辑意思有问题
我想问的是..B除了hold的时态之外，还有没有别的错误呢?
我现在很疑惑的是关于with的用法.到底有没有逻辑主语的问题呢?什么时候有什么时候没有呢?请NN指教.我的意思是,如果这题with有逻辑主语的话,那么immigrants做主语就逻辑上不合理了
On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a
A. On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a
B. With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a
C. A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
D. Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
E. Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
作者: joe11 时间: 2004-9-20 11:07
B. besides "hold" should be "holds", I don't know what "that a US citizen hold" modifies.
In addition, "that a US citizen hold gold in the form of bullion or coins" seems to be a incomplete sentence.
So, I prefer D to B.
作者: bryan0806 时间: 2004-10-10 07:24
D. Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
想问一下这里的 it 是指代什么呢 是什么作用?
因为make+N.+adj. 不就可以了吗
不懂it 在这里的作用 我唯一想到的是 it=to hold...... 那这样是不是代表D是唯一的答案了 虽然我选了C 但是好像只有D可以解释这个it
不解 感谢回答!!
作者: sunshining 时间: 2004-10-13 10:12
- On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a
- With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a
- A law passed in 1933 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
- Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
- Due to a law being passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
这题当然选D了，几个选项的结尾都不对，只有make it a crime for a United Stated citizen to hold gold.....正确表达，
意思是
It's a crime for a United States ciziten to hold gold in the forms of bullions.
it指代hold gold in the forms of bullions.
这种结构就像 it's difficult for me to do this assignment一样
看结尾， 排除A.B.C， E中的being多余，意思也怪，所以排除
B中的with 也不对， with多表示‘伴随’的意思，
如 With a book in hand, the teacher came in the classroom. 很少表示因果关系
也不是移民‘带有’这个法律
而本题明显是因果关系啊，因为这个法律，所以移民发现他们不得不surrender身上带的gold
作者: sunshining 时间: 2004-10-13 10:34
而且C中明显有歧义， 结尾的holding到底表达
a law makes ‘holding gold。。。’ a crime for a citizen
还是
a law makes 'blalalalalal......' for a citizen holding gold(= who holds gold)
holding在这里可以做make的宾语， 也可以表示citizen的修饰语， 所以是有歧义的，是og里面最忌讳的
排除C了
作者: juliahom1121 时间: 2004-11-18 22:48
问大家
gwd18 这句话在说什么？it 和that都指的是什么？
谢谢回答
作者: icbc2006 时间: 2004-11-19 14:43
应该是D.
作者: gladys_gl 时间: 2004-11-30 13:20
D. Because of a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a
看了半天大家讨论，觉得应该是D。
这题有因果关系：Because of a law, immigrants found that........
因为有这样的一个法律规定，移民们才发现要上交所有他们随身带的黄金。
作者: msfox 时间: 2004-12-8 14:04
D。
C中的“a law”没谓语。
作者: Pudding 时间: 2004-12-16 23:14
關於B, 大家的焦點都放在hold身上, 對句子的分析焦點也都放在劃線的半句話上. 可是如果我們把中間複雜的一大串字拿掉, 看一下整個句子的意思:
With a law... immigrants found...
with 成為immigrants的伴隨狀態, 顯然是illogical...我覺得這句可以直接從句意就排除掉了 (假如眼睛沒那麼尖沒看到hold的單複數問題的話...)
作者: 妞妞的牛牛 时间: 2005-3-29 21:47
D。
C中的“a law”没谓语。
同意，c中A law..., immigrants found...这个句子是不完整的
作者: Dennies 时间: 2005-4-15 16:52
不同意楼上观点，C中的表达是独立主格！
作者: crackpot 时间: 2005-7-10 00:06
B选项中，偶还质疑with的用法，OG-158中，ETS说with in choice A and Despite having in choice D confusingly suggest that United States citizens somehow possess，所以这里with显然表达不出因果的感觉来，一家之言，等待板砖
作者: 蓝夕叶子 时间: 2005-7-28 20:35
B, With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
Can the "hold" be pural to match "a citizen"?
看到这里，就可以结束B，D之争啦！～TIANWAN就是牛啊～
作者: oceanalma 时间: 2005-10-2 15:55
>
介词+ one's doing ??
同问阿？请指点
作者: smileday 时间: 2006-6-5 18:49
大致同意b,
但這想多請教一個語法點,關於it當虛主詞的用法:
it可指代that從句及to V,這是大家都知道的,
但 it 是否也可指代 for介片呢? 如: It is good for your arrival.
記得學校以前好像有教....
作者: frostone 时间: 2006-6-6 06:53
For me personally, clearly B wins over D, D sounds incredibly heavy and cumbersome "because of ...making...".I doubt if it's even technically correct to construct a sentence like that. Even if it is, GMAT rewards "simple and sweet" and B really makes the flaw smooth.
作者: vicomte 时间: 2006-6-7 11:08
感觉D更好一些
作者: smileday 时间: 2006-6-30 15:50
關於it當虛主詞的用法:
it 是否可指代for介片呢?
如: It is good for your arrival.
請路過的NN相助.....
3xs
作者: californiababy 时间: 2006-8-30 20:43
这道题目，我觉得BCE都有一个错误就是：n + that的定语从句当中都插入了“passed in 1933”。原则上用that引导的定语从句必须直接跟在被修饰的名次后面，中间不能加东西的。这是XDF的小新讲的。
作者: yaomao 时间: 2006-9-27 11:28
恩，我也觉得that有修饰1933的嫌疑
作者: liuyang1984 时间: 2006-10-1 15:49
选D拉
作者: swiss0204 时间: 2006-10-4 20:10
B. With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a
对于choice B我不选的看法是,
1) With 表伴随 ( 有同时的意味),
诚如其它NN 所言, 此题有因果关系 ( 时间上有前后顺序)
2) that 修饰a law passed in 1933 ??
that 应当只能修饰
noun, 所以改为
making 较佳.
SO, I’ll go for
D.
作者: kingdoms 时间: 2006-10-23 15:09
B. With a law passed in 1933 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a
对于choice B我不选的看法是,
1) With 表伴随 ( 有同时的意味),
诚如其它NN 所言, 此题有因果关系 ( 时间上有前后顺序)
2) that 修饰a law passed in 1933 ??
that 应当只能修饰
noun, 所以改为
making 较佳.
SO, I’ll go for
D.
不是这样的, 众NN给的答案B是正确地.
关于1) with 的因果问题, longman 中给出关于With 的解释:
14. because of a situation that exists.
例, With John away there's more room in the house.
正好符合这个题, 没有任何问题.
关于2) 原则上that和修饰词之间不插入成分,但这个并不是不可变, 在XDF的课上老师就曾讲过中间插入介词短语的例子.
XDF老师的原话是说That / which 等指示代词一般不跳跃指代, 但有时会跳跃介词短语指代, 有一道GMAT的原题甚至that跳跃了两个介词短语指代前面的内容.
指示代词不可以跳跃这条原则仅适用于不可以跳跃谓语动词.
另外because of 这个短语最好少用, 因为在GMAT语法中, 这个短语不接复杂成分.(包括动名词短语)
因此这个题选B没有问题.
作者: 莫菲 时间: 2007-5-15 21:57
我们中国学生太可怜了!讨论了两年，我看ABCDE都不对啊。。。
作者: sasazan 时间: 2007-6-6 13:24
AB的a citizen hoild（s) 有明显问题！ C的话前面如果是省略with，那么还对。但我认为C的with不一定是存在的。 D最大的问题是beacuse of 后面加名词性短语，但这里不是……
所以，不知道选那个了
作者: 建天银 时间: 2007-7-30 17:59
其实D还有一个问题就是，making放在这里他的逻辑主语是很有歧义的，可以是前面的law，也可以是后面的immigrants，所以我认为A和D都不对，E的被动没有意义，D的A law在句中很孤立，所以只有B是合理的没有问题的选项
作者: 建天银 时间: 2007-7-30 18:02
另外，这句话中的it应该是代表后面的”that从句“或者”for a unite state…………coins“
作者: bbxiaos 时间: 2007-11-26 08:20
18. On account of a law passed in 1993, making it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold gold in the form of bullion and coins, immigrants found that on arrival in the United States they had to surrender all of the gold they had brought with them.
- With a law passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment that a United States citizen hold
- A law passed in 1993 that made it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen holding
- Because of a law passed in 1993 making it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold.
- Due to a law being passed in 1993 that makes it a crime punishable by imprisonment for a United States citizen to hold
想问一下，这个E里面的makes有没有错？是应该过去式，还是说因为是law就永远用一般现在是？？？谢谢~
作者: yzhao26 时间: 2007-12-19 11:13
B should use past tense
作者: dingxiang 时间: 2008-7-10 21:53
D : a law passed in 1933 making it a crime punishable
一个过去分词+ 一个现在分词, 两个分词连用来修饰一个名词,这种情况在大全877也出现过, 所以不能算错的
另外,这里是Law, 要注意, passed用过去分词, 表示已经完成的动作, 而making用现在分词,因为是law,所以一直有效,当然要用现在分词
这道题目非常经典! 赞!
877. Traveling the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were armed only with an Edison phonograph and insatiable curiosity.
(B) In 1905, Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály, traveling the back roads of Hungary, began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, and they were only armed
(C) In 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary armed only
(D) Having traveled the back roads of Hungary, in 1905 Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology; they were only armed
(E) Béla Bartók and Zoltán Kodály, in 1905 began their pioneering work in ethnomusicology, traveling the back roads of Hungary, arming themselves only
C
作者: huyannancy 时间: 2008-10-28 10:05
ding ls
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