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标题: OG12 123 C——自己的旧帖子，新问题~·~~见12楼~ [打印本页]
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-10 01:32
标题: OG12 123 C——自己的旧帖子，新问题~·~~见12楼~
She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.

A. She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to

B. Being less successful after she had emigrated to New York as compared to

C. Less successful after she emigrated to New York than she had been in

D. Although she was less successful after emigrating to New York when compared to

E. She had been less successful after emigrating to New York than in

答案C
C的结构中，似乎比较的二者不太对称呀？
after...和she had in...比？
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-10 13:32
ding!
作者: veryglad2cu    时间: 2010-9-10 15:06
C的比较对象是没有问题的。比较的是success的程度。。。你把after那个状语删了。就是less successful than she had been in~~~~~这样就清楚了。
作者: ryuu217    时间: 2010-9-10 15:26
有道理
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-10 15:37
我怎么觉得是在纽约和在德国两个时期的对比。。但是觉得不对称。。
即使是按veryglad2cu 的说法，也不对称呀？
作者: qingbo    时间: 2010-9-10 19:46
我觉得比较的不是2个时间状语，而是2个句子

还原就是

LJ was less successful after she emigrated  to New York than she had been in her native Germany

两种状态的比较

我唯一纠结的是，什么时候 这个“she had been” 可以省略

LJ was less successful in New York than in her native Germany   这样是可以的

LJ was less successful after she emigrated  to New York than she had been in her native Germany  为什么这样的时候，she had been 不能省略呢？
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-10 21:17
ding!
作者: ccergsm    时间: 2010-9-10 22:29
LJ was less successful in New York than in her native Germany   个人觉得就是比较状语呢吧？
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-11 00:34
众说纷纭呀。。。
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-11 20:34
顶
作者: aeoluseros    时间: 2010-9-12 10:00
我觉得比较的不是2个时间状语，而是2个句子

还原就是

LJ was less successful after she emigrated  to New York than she had been in her native Germany

两种状态的比较

我唯一纠结的是，什么时候 这个“she had been” 可以省略

LJ was less successful in New York than in her native Germany   这样是可以的

LJ was less successful after she emigrated  to New York than she had been in her native Germany  为什么这样的时候，she had been 不能省略呢？
-- by 会员 qingbo (2010/9/10 19:46:08)


umm...需要用had been来表示be in her native Germany发生在emigrated以及主句动作earned之前。
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-12 14:33
我觉得比较的不是2个时间状语，而是2个句子

还原就是

LJ was less successful after she emigrated  to New York than she had been in her native Germany

两种状态的比较

我唯一纠结的是，什么时候 这个“she had been” 可以省略

LJ was less successful in New York than in her native Germany   这样是可以的

LJ was less successful after she emigrated  to New York than she had been in her native Germany  为什么这样的时候，she had been 不能省略呢？
-- by 会员 qingbo (2010/9/10 19:46:08)




umm...需要用had been来表示be in her native Germany发生在emigrated以及主句动作earned之前。
-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2010/9/12 10:00:59)



看完斑斑的解释我还是觉得是状语比较~回答完毕~不知道对不对..反正把自己说服拉~算是解决^^
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-23 00:17
She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.


OG里说A错的一个原因是"creat a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjuction."
可是这里明明可以理解为：句子1，句子2，and句子3嘛。。。——我这种说法怎么不对？
作者: 天使追梦    时间: 2010-9-23 01:11
结构是没错  可是没有这么说的   很少有上来就直接是个代词的
-- by 会员 1qqqqqq (2010/9/23 1:07:26)



恩~
那OG的话是什么意思？
作者: janeee    时间: 2010-9-27 11:43
She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.


OG里说A错的一个原因是"creat a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjuction."
可是这里明明可以理解为：句子1，句子2，and句子3嘛。。。——我这种说法怎么不对？
-- by 会员 天使追梦 (2010/9/23 0:17:27)

没有见过“句子1，句子2，and句子3”此种结构啊，只见过“比较成分1，比较成分2，and比较成分3”
如果有例句，希望能贴出来看看~~
作者: 0o小猪o0    时间: 2010-9-28 00:11
怎么能是状语比较呢？如果是的话那E就也有可能了？
作者: xinxinhome    时间: 2010-10-27 22:48
弱弱的问一下，nevertheless是表示转折吧，所以不能although一起出现？怎么判断是连词还是副词呢，看在句子中的位置？
作者: robinwayne    时间: 2010-11-5 11:48

跟楼上同问。因为这个nevertheless, 我选了E
作者: kevin0214    时间: 2010-11-6 18:06
nevertheless这里是副词吧，连词是连接句子的，只能是“句子A，连词+句子B”吧。
另外，小猪所说的E，即使是状语比较，E也不能选啊，逗号不能连接句子的。
作者: xihuanbinfen    时间: 2010-12-16 13:04
请问，句子1，句子2，and句子3这种结构是错的吗？
作者: davidliuscu    时间: 2011-5-2 15:34
She was less successful after she had emigrated to New York compared to her native Germany, photographer Lotte Jacobi nevertheless earned a small group of discerning admirers, and her photographs were eventually exhibited in prestigious galleries across the United States.


OG里说A错的一个原因是"creat a comma splice if the comma is not followed by a conjuction."
可是这里明明可以理解为：句子1，句子2，and句子3嘛。。。——我这种说法怎么不对？
-- by 会员 天使追梦 (2010/9/23 0:17:27)


同一主语发出的一系列动作，可以用： 动作1， 动作2，and动作3这个结构；本文不存在这种情况
作者: qiuhua01234567    时间: 2012-5-2 19:17
同意LS，一般平行里用的比较多，而对比里不要乱用，涉及到logic了
作者: ARG    时间: 2013-6-11 17:41
非常感谢



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