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作者: 陌下清风    时间: 2010-8-26 12:52
标题: 请教大家~有关于GWD1-34~
GWD1-Q34:

Although people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States
, their
death rates from heart disease are far lower in France.


A.people in France consume fatty foods at a rate comparable to the United States, their
B.people in Franceand the United States consume fatty foods at about the same rate, the
C.fatty foods are consumed by people in France at a comparable rate to the United States’s, their
D.the rate of fatty foods consumed in Franceand the United States is about the same, the
E.the rate of people consuming fatty foods is about the same in France and the United States, the


答案为B,但是D没有找出来错误,是逻辑含义上的问题吗?希望大家有明白的指点我一下,谢谢~
作者: 0o小猪o0    时间: 2010-8-26 19:08
although后面要加句子的 D里although后面加的是名词the rate
作者: 陌下清风    时间: 2010-8-27 12:27
那个...D选项中Although后面加的应该是句子吧:the rate is about the same. 望继续讨论讨论~
作者: alpaca    时间: 2010-8-27 13:27
这里没有理由用被动吧。另外,感觉因为死亡率是人吃的行为造成的,人是主动的。
改变了原句的意思,原句是人吃,这里成了rate是主语。

好像从语法上说D没错,甚至更加平行一点,但是貌似改变了句子的逻辑意思……这题我也错了,错得和LZ一样.
作者: 陌下清风    时间: 2010-8-29 21:59
恩,恩,好的谢谢~果然是一道很迷惑人的题,我再来研究研究~
作者: buffonjuventus    时间: 2010-8-29 22:22
although后面确实是句子。我自己也觉得D没什么大问题,但是GMAC的SC原则就是简洁明了,没有歧义,在这种原则下,B的主动语态肯定比D要直接。
如果非要说D有什么问题的话,我想可能是the rate of fatty foods consumed这里有点歧义吧,consumed是修饰fatty food还是修饰rate,换句话说是fatty food被consumed了还是rate。再举个例子就是,sizeable wolves population,容易歧义在sizeable是指population还是指狼。
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