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标题: NN 帮帮我啊 [打印本页]

作者: edalee 时间: 2010-6-24 15:34
标题: NN 帮帮我啊

Because she knew many of the leaders of colonial America

and the American Revolution personally, Mercy Otis Warren was continually at or near the center of political events from 1765 to 1789, a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make her one of the most valuable historians of the era.

(A) a vantage point combining with her talent for writing to make

(B) a vantage point, when combined with her talent for writing, that made

(D) and this vantage point, which combined with her talent for writing to make

(E) and this vantage point, combined with her talent for writing, made

E中的and是并列啥和啥啊？？

作者: hsinq 时间: 2010-6-24 16:41
A、combining应改为combined
B、when后面省略错误，that made的形式改变了原句的重心，没有体现出动作
C、that后面少了个be动词，and it made指代不明确，且多余
D、and后面的句子不完整，which后面少了be
E、正确。and并列两个句子,combine使用正确。

作者: edalee 时间: 2010-6-24 16:43
谢谢拉拉

作者: rongyang114 时间: 2010-10-3 09:52
为什么省略错误了？when（vantage point） combined with her talent for writing, that made。。。。

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