249. Bluegrass musician Bill Monroe, whose repertory, views on musical collaboration, and vocal style were influential on generations of bluegrass artists. was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia. whose music differed significantly from his own.
(A) were influential on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(B) influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from
(C) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, was also inspirational to many musicians, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was different significantly in comparison to
(D) was influential to generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, who included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, the music of whom differed significantly when compared to
(E) were an influence on generations of bluegrass artists, was also an inspiration to many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music was significantly different from that of
OG中说In C, that included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia improperly modifies many musicians，为何此句不恰当的修饰many musicians，难道只是因为that不引导非限制性定语从句吗？为何B中including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia,可以修饰many musicians？先谢了！
tianwan先谢了.白勇对此点的解释是musicians included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, 逻辑意思不符合,不太懂,还有高手能解释吗?
没有高手解释呀!
我不是高手!我们一起交流
1。THAT是不可以用在非限定性定语从语中的，这是确定的
2。including 是介词，引导的介词短语修饰musicians，请看LONGMAN：
used to introduce something or someone that is part of a larger group or amount you have just mentioned
反义词是 excluding。
例：The price is £25.50, including postage and packing.
You'll need a variety of skills, including leadership and negotiating.
tianwan先谢了.白勇对此点的解释是musicians included Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, 逻辑意思不符合,不太懂,还有高手能解释吗?
BY的意思是：即便认为非限定性是合理的，把that换成先行词，你写出的那句话还是不对，不符合语法；即便认为是插入语，那么that 后面的included应该是一个过去分词，而非一般过去式，如果加上were也荒廖
including的用法是固定的，背下来，别太多争论。想知道B. influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from 到底是修饰musicians or artists?
个人意见觉得还是应该修饰many musicians，不知对否，请指教，谢谢~
非常同意tianwan的观点，杨鹏难句教程里有个经典句子就是这种用法，贴出来供大家参考
One such novel idea is that (idea) of inserting into the chromosomes of plants discrete genes that are not a part of the plants’ natural constitution：specifically，the idea of inserting into nonleguminous plants the genes，if they can be identified and isolated，that fit the leguminous plants to be hosts for nitrogen-fixing bacteria. Hence，(there is ) the intensified research on legumes。
that clause修饰the genes,"if they can be identified and isolated"被两个comma隔开是插入语。
想知道B. influenced generations of bluegrass artists, also inspired many musicians, including Elvis Presley and Jerry Garcia, whose music differed significantly from 到底是修饰musicians or artists?
个人意见觉得还是应该修饰many musicians，不知对否，请指教，谢谢~
Both of you are right, because Tianwan is from the prospective of Choice C, while you are from the prospective of Choice B. That is the difference. According to correct grammar expression, that in C illogically modifies the artists. Therefore C is not the correct answer. Tianwan is just to explain why it is wrong.
非常同意tianwan的观点，杨鹏难句教程里有个经典句子就是这种用法，贴出来供大家参考
One such novel idea is that (idea) of inserting into the chromosomes of plants discrete genes that are not a part of the plants’ natural constitution：specifically，the idea of inserting into nonleguminous plants the genes，if they can be identified and isolated，that fit the leguminous plants to be hosts for nitrogen-fixing bacteria. Hence，(there is ) the intensified research on legumes。
that clause修饰the genes,"if they can be identified and isolated"被两个comma隔开是插入语。
gmat sc中有这种用法吗？ 如果有那是限定还是非限定啊？ 请nn指点！
顺便问问， 结构 sb1, including sb2 and sb3, who... 这时who指代的是那个啊？是不是非限定呢？ 请大家多多咱指点
是限定吧! including sb 2 and sb3 插入句?
open to discussion
没有NN?
who 是邻近指代吧? 我想还是要看句意跟谓语的单复数来往前决定要修释的SB
up up
总像是再跟自己讲话似的
做个总结吧!
由于That 不可用于非限定, 他前面的逗号会造成前面的句子变成插入句
WHO 可以有非限定用法, 所以要由WHO后面的谓语判断
我也总结
1.that 不能用于非限定修饰。
2.本句结构 many musicians + 介词引导插入语 + whose 引导的定于从句
choice C 中 that.... 修饰的是 musician.
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