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[原始] 一战720 打算报名二战 简单的JJ

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发表于 2011-7-21 19:20:00 | 只看该作者 回帖奖励 |倒序浏览 |阅读模式
AA:(过了一天我想起来了!!!)这个还是有不少逻辑flaws可以被攻击的~争取满分咯!The following appeared as part of a business plan created by the management of the Take Heart Fitness Center.
“After opening the new swimming pool early last summer, Take Heart saw a 12 percent increase in the use of the center by members. Therefore, in order to increase the number of our members and thus our revenues, which depend on membership fees, we should continue to add new recreational facilities in subsequent years: for example, a multipurpose game room, a tennis court, and a miniature golf course. Being the only center in the area offering this range of activities would give us a competitive advantage in the health and recreation market.”
Discuss how well reasoned . . . etc.



来篇范文作为参考:
Because Take Heart Fitness Center experienced a 12 percent increase in member usage as a result of opening a new swimming pool last summer, the author recommends the addition of new recreational facilities in subsequent years as a means of increasing membership in Take Heart. The author’s recommendation is problematic for several reasons.
First, and foremost, the author assumes that an increase in member usage portends an increase in membership. This assumption may hold true in some cases. However, it is unlikely to hold true in the case at hand, because it is reasonable to expect that members would visit the fitness center to inspect and try out the new swimming pool. This would account for the increase in usage. However, since the author provides no evidence that this new rate of usage was sustained, the abrupt increase in usage provides little evidence that the addition of facilities such as the pool will attract new members.
Second, the author assumes that the addition of the swimming pool was responsible for the increase in member usage. However, the only evidence for this claim is insufficient to establish the causal claim in question. While temporal precedence is one of the conditions required to establish a causal relationship between two events, by itself it is not a sufficient condition. Consequently, it is possible that the addition of the pool was unrelated to the increase in usage in the manner required by the author’s argument.
Finally, the author has provided no evidence to support the contention that Take Heart will be the only center in the area to offer a wide range of activities to its members and thus have a competitive advantage in the fitness market.
In conclusion, the author’s belief that adding additional recreational facilities will increase Take Heart’s membership is ill-founded. To strengthen the argument the author would have to provide evidence that member usage is reliable indicator of new membership. Additionally, it would be necessary to show that the cause of the increase in usage was the opening of the new pool.





AI:"It is difficult for people to achieve professional success without sacrificing important aspects of a fulfilling personal life."Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion slated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your own experience, observations, or reading. 看到网上的范文不是很像样,就不误导大家了,我只用了一个例子!所以略显空洞!大家看看模板,把该有的框架和能想到的理由准备一下,Issue就顺其自然咯!


阅读:如果题库不换的话,JJ还是有比较直接的帮助。
         我考到了women reenter in the paid workplace,分析women/family的那个project,经济理论,还有一个忘记了。
虽然JJ比较乱,题目和答案无所谓,知道一下大概内容就好了!以免考试的时候时间不够,鸟瞰后选对的几率比较高可以节约时间!
逻辑:顺着做还不错,做到bf两题,我还以为是高分了,结果.......
语法:有不少是眼熟的,JJ中的,还有GWD,还有2道是prep还不知道是OG上面的,让我慢慢回忆会再补充!




数学 我只看了前面50题JJ,但是也有几道眼熟的!只是答案不记得了还是自己做的~最后只有49,好丢人!!!


不知道现在准备二战还能报到名吗?~


妈妈催我出去吃饭了!!!明天考的孩子们加油!!!谢谢CD!!!!
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沙发
发表于 2011-7-21 19:50:43 | 只看该作者
谢谢楼主~~二战会好运的~
板凳
发表于 2011-7-21 20:31:52 | 只看该作者
LZ 都720鸟 还准备二战咩。。。。
地板
发表于 2011-7-21 21:40:07 | 只看该作者
700~730都是尴尬的分数,绝对高分,但不甘心,能考自然再考咯
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发表于 2011-7-21 21:57:00 | 只看该作者
嘿嘿,牛啦!加油
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发表于 2011-7-21 23:20:10 | 只看该作者
太牛了~~~~虽然你还不满意,但是我觉得还是要恭喜你的,恭喜你的实力~真的很强,因为数学49,总分都还有720~~~
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-7-22 12:57:23 | 只看该作者
我觉得数学真的不好......很丢人!!!我狂躁了一晚上,决定再战!!!
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-7-22 12:57:54 | 只看该作者
谢谢!!话说我遇见到了问题,不是说二战要30天以后吗?~知道具体的报名细节吗?~
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-7-22 12:58:49 | 只看该作者
是的。。。我是贪心的家伙,考前说700分就好了,考试做到加试最后一题心里想750就好了......考好出来就狂躁了~
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 楼主| 发表于 2011-7-22 12:59:41 | 只看该作者
我都写得没什么精华,考完出来就该拿纸笔写下来的》。。我太失策,完全失忆了!!!
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