急请教高手 补充材料厂12-04 05

delldell

Just as plant species native to regions with browsing mammals evolved many natural anti-browser defenses, so humans in malarial regions have evolved dozens of chemical defenses against malaria.


B humans in malarial regions have been evolving dozens of chemical defenses against malaria


A是什么用法, B为什么不对


The record of the past is always incomplete, and the historian who writes about it inevitably reflects the preoccupations of their own time.


D writing about it, it is inevitable for historians to relect
E historians in writing about it inevitable reflect


D 为什么不如E, in writing 是定语么

jnlvo

1.         Just as....., so......固定表达


2.         D: writing的动作执行者，通常是主语，这里是it，如果它要指for后面的 historians ，离得太远没有依据。in writing 是定语。


还有一个问题，不知你有没有考虑，就是E中的inevitable修饰谁?我觉得还是有点怪。

dreadpower

     楼主的题目似乎错了，jnlvo说的对，inevitable不能那样修饰，找了一下原来题目，是inevitablely


         D显然罗嗦而且夹杂不清


     BTW：我想楼主可能还没有下载大全吧，所以题目都是自己打出来的


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