lawlietcoco的作业贴,据说名字要长！！！才有大神帮忙！！！！小生叩首啦~~~

lawlietcoco

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lcaecar

Do you agree or disagree,if you need to discuss upsetting or controversial problems with others you will use email or text messaging or you would like to use telephone or voice messaging?

It is effortless to imagine that so embarrassed is discussing upsetting or controversial problems with others that we always cannot find a proper way to do so.Despite various responses people may have on this issue concerning that we should adopt which method,I,given the chance,prefer to endorse using telephone or voice messaging to deal with this kind of situation.

To begin with,most of those who encounter the situation might have the illusion that avoiding direct dialogue is a good strategy.So,they are inclined to use e-mail or text messaging instead of telephone.However,this is not the case at all.The research of 11,190,000 communication cases across the whole word by Mckinsey&CO.,an anthropology institute,shows that 4.68% written materials cannot convey the real meaning the writer want to express and up to 35.91% written materials,to varying degrees,fail to do so,while face-to-face or voice-to-voice communication cases only has 7.36% failure rate.     The reason accounting for this statistical result,the researcher claiming,is that especially when expressing emotional concern,written materials appear kind of "ruthless",while the voice and facial expression are more sincere and thus expressive.Doesn't it seems insincere to console somebody just using text messaging or emails? No matter how polite and courtesy they are,written materials are likely to be misunderstood and a sense of "white teeth smile".That is to say,indirect communication does not do good to this dilemma.And in fact,upsetting or controversial problems obviously belong to the "emotional concern".So,in this sense,it is better to use telephone or text message.

In addition,usually,upsetting and controversial problems are so complex that it is difficult to bring home to others these intricate problems.If you imagine someone using text message to discuss the divorce or the senator using emails to determine the bills,you will definitely stand on the same side with me.Further lending credence to my position is my own experience.Since I left my hometown 3 years ago because of job transfer of my father,I have kept in touch with my friends Li usually by using emails.Several months ago,he just emailed me that he broke up with his girlfriend and he was so distressed.When I wanted to write something on the screen,I just did not know how to express by words.After hesitation on the screen for quite some time,I decided to call him directly and then the result seemed very well.

Admittedly,email and text messaging have their own merits,especially in some special occasions,such as workplace and the occasions not permitting you making sounds.Nevertheless,generally speaking,using telephone or voice messaging is rational and perhaps the best choice in the case of facing upsetting and controversial problems.


楼主写作功底很强大
用词也很准确
例子描述也很到位，而且用了详细的数据
30分钟内写完的话可以得满分了..

lawlietcoco

真的假的，当然不是30分钟写的写了1个小时，可是上次我也是这样的文风，中的机经，只有fair~~~所以很郁闷啊

lawlietcoco

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小兔爱twins

今天和楼主互改 刚写完自己的po上去了 就来看楼主的了。。。 哎 ，， 一打开500多个字绝对保证是24以上的
再看内容，在遣词造句的功夫上 做的非常到位 语法错误也没有 一些小细节也是不打紧的 估计要上26.27分了，，，
在那我写的套的模板作文一比对 我可怜巴巴的作文顿时变成了女屌丝一枚。。。看边流口水。。。。
面对高帅富的作文无从下手修改。。如果真有意见要提 就是觉得文笔太生硬 似乎没有那种特别渴望评卷人拿高分的流露，， ，，就很像对评卷人说：老子写的就是这些了 你慢慢看 看完不要忘了给老子打分，，，差不多这个意思。。。。  
文风如果能稍微花俏一点 说不定就会满分了。。。。

个人看法

lawlietcoco

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小兔爱twins

楼主 我今天练完口语来细看你作文哈~~　我水平有限估计还是只能膜拜。～～　　你可以把帖子发到ｓｗｕ试试看～～求版主修改～　那的版本都是满分大牛。。。。　

lawlietcoco

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sherryzhangh

Along with thousands of years of evolution, human beings have had various means of expression, and correspondingly, people always grope for the better way of communicating with others. As for the statement in the topic, despite various responds people may have on this issue, I,given the chance, prefer to endorse that there are indeed some reasons for rudeness. Reasons are presented below.

To begin with, most of those who agree with the statement above have the illusion that with the continuous development of social civilization, human should not be impolite any more. However, this viewpoint does not make sense at all. Actually, rudeness is one of the normal attitudes with which people make daily communication, the same as politeness in a sense. Each of us needs a way of venting when too many negative emotions stack in our mind. So, it cannot be(more than) normal too much for people to be rude to another person. Simply because rudeness does not that correspond with gentle manners does not mean that people couldn't be impolite.



Furthermore, as a normal attitude of expressing, rudeness, in certain occasions, do have its own functions. Imaginge yourself is to be an office worker, and you are not going well the whole day. Then later, you lose your temper and shout at your wife or husband. Even if this behavior is not that rational, isn't it acceptable? The answer is absolutely yes. The research of 27,873 family cases, by the Mckeysin&CO., a private-public jointly-operated institute, shows that as often as twice a week, people would be rude to others in varying degrees, and that being rude is nothing but a way to adjust oneself, if done in a proper way. Further, if there is no link of being rude, what will happen when people do have lots of negative emotion to vent? It is effortless to know that on no account fighting with others is better than simply being rude to others!

Last of all,with the increasingly fierce social competition,people do have more and more pressure nowadays,such as financial stress,work stress,and also family stress.Consequently,people need more outlet to adjust their mental state especially while working.In fact,there is a common phenomenon that it is easier for people to be rude to each other   during the working hours.Even if this is not advocated at all,people  should know that nit is the faults in work that such rude behaviors aim at,not the persons.So,rude behaviors of which the target is not persons are acceptable,even if not that rational,and people should learn to allow for others' negative emotion from the stress in modern life.

Admittedly,it pays to be polite as possible as we can,because this is the symbol of one's self-improvement and courtesy always costs nothing.Nevertheless,since the wording"nerver"is too absolute to agree with,I give preference to that there are some reasons,even if not many,to be rude to others.

个人感觉最后还应该有个结尾段，不过我觉得楼主勇气可嘉，敢冒天下之大不韪。个人觉得rudeness 是一个非常贬义的词。如果楼主真的坚守的话，我觉得应该侧重说一下 rudeness 只是一个情感的发泄渠道。而不是直接反驳人和人之间应该接受粗鲁的相互对待。

另外，楼主措辞上很有造诣，加油！