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visiontokyo

57. According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could , by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

(A) According to its proponents, a proposed new style of aircraft could, by skimming along the top of the atmosphere, fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

(B) Byskimming along the top of the atmosphere, proponents of a proposed new style of aircraft say it could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours.

(C) A proposed new style of aircraft could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours, according to its proponents, with it skimming along the top of the atmosphere.

(0) Aproposed new style of aircraft, say its proponents, could fly between most points on Earth in under two hours because of its skimming along the top of the atmosphere.

(E) According to its proponents, skimming alongthe top of the atmosphere makes it possible that a proposed new style of aircraftcould fly between most points on Earth in undertwo hours.


答案是A。但请问一下a proposed new style of aircraft这种表达主语究竟是什么啊，按照题目应该是aircraft，但是我怎么总觉得是a proposed new style啊。另外According to的逻辑主语可以是a proposed new style吗？我觉得它的用法像下面的错句子：
Based on the recent decline in enrollment , the ofice decided to evaluate its recruitment strategies.
Based on修饰错了the ofice啊。。




83. In theory, international civil servants at the United Nations are prohibited from continuing to draw salaries from their own governments; in practice, however, some governments merely substitute living allowances for their employees' paychecks, assigned by them to the United Nations.

(A) for their employees' paychecks, assigned by them

(B) for the paychecks of their employees who have been assigned

(C) for the paychecks of their employees, having been assigned

(0) in place of their employees' paychecks, for those of them assigned

(E) in place of the paychecks of their employees to have been assigned by them

B：Correct. In thi s sentence, the meaning is clearer, because paychecks is separated from

employees. The relative clause clearly modifies employees.

一眼看到这题真的不知道该怎么做，用怎么的思路去解题。大家说说思路吧~~ 另外substitute了allowances for paychecks 之后用to their employees是不是更好呢？这题的意思我读起来也很费解。。。望DX出手啊~~~

lhnstefsun

57我也不能说清楚lz的问题，只是对于长句就是用排除法排除最明显的错误来做题的，没有最好的答案，只有更好的答案。a proposed new style of aircraft可以理解成aircraft的一种新型号飞行器：还有a proposed new style做According to its proponents的逻辑主语很合适呀，its proponents指的就是这种新型号的支持者，its指的是“a proposed new style的”

至于58题
首先substitute for是固定搭配先排除D、E。A中 assigned by them的them指代不清，C中having...可直接做employees后置定语也可以在伴随状语直接修饰上面整个句子（逻辑主语是some governments），所以最好的就是用定语从句就不会产生歧义了

visiontokyo

谢谢了~··哈哈~~

lhb2612530

新手回答，抛砖引玉，如有错误请指教
对57，初看并没有什么问题，by skimming along the top of the atmosphere这个插入语有点妨碍阅读
看B，句子意思改变了，变成proponents飞，而不是a proposed new style of aircraft飞。
对C，with改变了句子意思（好吧我是“句意”党）
对D,because of 改变了原文的意思，飞机是通过这个方式飞，不是因为这个方式飞，随意插入因果关系通常也是可以排除的。
对E，makes it possible that啰嗦
所以选A
最后回答LZ问题，楼主说的没错，核心词就是 style ，可以理解为这种飞机型号是通过大气层巡航来完成飞行的，对A OF B，核心词是A；对B'S A ，核心词是A

对83,
对A，assign的发出者是paycheck，显然不对
对B，感觉没什么问题，看下一个
对C，assign的发出者还是paycheck
对D，substitute for是固定搭配，不能被逗号隔开，in place of也多余
对E，FOR没了，不对
所以选B