[求助]GWD中关于句子重心改变的两道题

sophy369

 GWD12-20:

Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.

1. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established

2. The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established
3. The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which
                           made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established
                           句子结构不完整
4. Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established
5. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing

GWD12-31:

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

1. Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering

2. Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
3. Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886and outnumbering
4. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering
5. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber  

两题对比，同样有句子重心改变的问题，为什么答案不一致呢？

还有，什么时候是可以改变原文的句子重心的呢？

mymengming

以下是引用sophy369在2006-8-13 19:29:00的发言：

 GWD12-20:

Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.

1. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established

2. The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established(making修饰歧义)
3. The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which
         made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established
         句子结构不完整
4. Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established(这里making修饰歧义,不好 )
5. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing

选A

GWD12-31:

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

1. Dickinson
                               were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering(这种伴随不好,被动不能伴随)

2. Dickinson
                           were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
3. Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886 and 
                           outnumbering
4. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering
5. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber  

两题对比，同样有句子重心改变的问题，为什么答案不一致呢？

还有，什么时候是可以改变原文的句子重心的呢？

mymengming

我认为改变重心一般有两种情况:

1, 逻辑意思有误

2, 除了这个改变的外别的都是错误选项

sophy369

1. The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established(making修饰歧义)
2. Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established(这里making修饰歧义,不好 )

M兄，怎么理解making修饰歧义？

making修饰the act, which修饰的也是the act, 就算making存在修饰主句主语，和从句主语的歧义，在这里主句主语和从句主语也是相同的啊，请指教！

M兄，怎么理解making修饰歧义？

making修饰the act, which修饰的也是the act, 就算making存在修饰主句主语，和从句主语的歧义，在这里主句主语和从句主语也是相同的啊，请指教！

mymengming

第一个不知道making是修饰主语的还是修饰后面的谓语的

46. To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, and she remained in France during the Second World War as a performer and an intelligence agent for the Resistance.

(A) To Josephine Baker, Paris was her home long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate

(B) For Josephine Baker, long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Paris her home

(C) Josephine Baker made Paris her home long before to be an expatriate was fashions（D）

(D) Long before it was fashionable to be an expatriate, Josephine Baker made Paris her home

(E) Long before it was fashionable being an expatriate, Paris
                was home to Josephine I Baker

 

这里讲了,B把两个修饰的东西放在主句的前面是一种awkward!!

天蝎座1107

GWD12-20:
    

Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established the Library of Congress.

1. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress that made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established 正确

2. The act of Congress, which was approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also established
     that made不能改成making
3. The act of Congress approved April 24, 1800, which
         made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., and established
         句子结构不完整
     
4. Approved April 24, 1800, making provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., the act of Congress also established
     
5. Approved April 24, 1800, the act of Congress made provision for the removal of the government of the United States to the new federal city, Washington, D.C., also establishing 正如作者所说 改变句子重心
                               

GWD12-31:

Emily Dickinson’s letters to Susan Huntington Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering her letters to anyone else.

1. Dickinson were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumbering 这里其实还是错在outnumbering 现在分子放在句末有两种用法 伴随状语 和 结果状语 伴随状语要求现在分词的动作与主句谓语动词同时发生 结果状语表达的是前面整个句子造成的结果 如果outnumbering在这里做伴随状语 现在outnumbering与were written不是同时发生的 如果做结果状语也不对 因为ED的给SHD的信写于XXX时期并不能造成outnumbering her letters to anyone else这个结果

2. Dickinson were written over a period that begins a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ended shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber
      定语从句的时态错误
3. Dickinson, written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and that ends shortly before Emily’s death in 1886and outnumbering
      begins period后面的后置定语和定从不对等
4. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother, ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, and outnumbering  没有谓语
5. Dickinson, which were written over a period beginning a few years before Susan’s marriage to Emily’s brother and ending shortly before Emily’s death in 1886, outnumber   情非得已改变句子重心选了E  正确

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天蝎座1107 发表于 2009-4-9 12:59
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