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考到一篇和范文差不多的文章！范文放在最后大家可以参考一下~考试题目是说一个航空公司收到1000份问卷调查其中只有百分之一表示对他们的一个procedures不满意，因此航空公司认为这一部分可以忽略，公司的未来会更美好。
数学
这次能上七真的要感谢数学JJ，太给力了。。基本上都是JJ的，我还曾经抱怨了更新太慢，现在实在是不好意思。。JJ基本够用了，大家一定要好好做一做，我做了三遍：P
补充几道题 综合版的第6题 一个pencil pen box为一个set 卖10元 尽可能多的卖set 剩下的pencil卖x元（忘了），pen3元， box0.5元
综合版196题 有说abc是正的非零实数 选A
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碰到四篇都是JJ里的，感谢CD！！一篇是领导方式transaction什么的（题忘了，有点难。。蒙了几个），一篇是rna的（有一题和JJ一样文中说A和B一样，暗示的是A与CD一样，又一题讲主旨，就选有limitation那个。还好有JJ不然真心看不懂，单词巨难，但真的题目都考第一段最后几个例子），一篇是减少碳排放量（还好早上刚刚看的最新鲜的第44篇！jj很全的放心做！）一题是问第一段的作用，我选的是提出一个概念然后在下文develop大概是这个意思，有一题问主旨；还有一篇是讲UV的
科学家发现一种鸟的下蛋孵化成功率与蛋中一种酶的活性有关 A鸟蛋的活性最大 他的孵化成功率大于BC鸟蛋 同时酶也和免疫力有关 酶比较活跃的鸟不容易得一种病（有一道削弱题）对不起大家，，就记得这点了T-T
感想
大姨妈第一天。。累的要死心想横竖横了就战死沙场吧，结果大厦的门卫人好好，看我和他一个姓的，和我扯了几句，叫我好好考瞬间心情好了哈哈，出来想感谢他，可是没找到人，他一定是天使。。
下午一点的考试提前50分钟到，居然就让我进去了，三战压力真的挺大，比前两次都紧张IR简直是乱做的，成绩出来一定惨不忍睹T-T，上海北考场真的很热！！！工作人员说有27度以上！！大家少穿点，我考得口干舌燥要昏过去了！！还好数学基本上都是JJ的，好多题秒选，做完还剩30多分钟赶紧出去喝水，真的很热。。。语文做的感觉不好，心跳声好大。。二战的时候看了逻辑的JJ感觉非常影响考试做题，一直在回忆没法专心思考，所以这次就没看逻辑的JJ，阅读运气好，都看到过，领导方式和RNA都挺难，还好有JJ定定心不然肯定崩溃了。。总体感觉做的不顺还以为这次又要完蛋了，结果Q51V34 710真的感谢CD，帮助实在是太大了T-T（ps有人说数学一个月简单一个月难，我觉得好像是这个样的，连考三次觉得上次难一点）
学习方法就不多说了，基础一般，日语专业四年没碰过英语。。一开始挺痛苦，还好楼主大四闲的很八月开始复习的，每天差不多八个小时，到现在也就低空滑过700。复习了一个月一战660（换库后第三天），二战640可伤心了，原因是天天做语法大全，大全的思路真的完全不一样。。。千万别做。。三战复习的比较轻松，俺妈都不想让俺考了，再考下去小命都要没了。。。高考都没这么复习过，楼主到了大学快要毕业才体会到原来好好学习是这样子的=-=惭愧惭愧，三次复习一共做了两遍OG两遍PREP，两遍狒狒逻辑，作了两百道陈向东数学，两遍GWD-TN最后正确率大概在百分之七十到八十，一战的时候在淘宝买了2012GWD上课的录音，听了整整三天三夜，语法逻辑倒是非常受用，没有刻意背过什么搭配用法，逻辑也没有想过逻辑链（很汗吧=-=）阅读被害的不浅。。他声称做题不用读文章。。我到二战惨败才明白他是在放屁。。。文章。。还是要读的。。。。。。。最重要的是阅读能力！三战跟着阅读小分队练了两个星期（潜水党。。），还是有效果的，作了20多篇小安，阅读上来了逻辑肯定也不会差，感谢阅读小分队！！
大家要相信自己，菜鸟运气好也是能过700的^_^ 第一次耐住了这么久的寂寞，为了赞RP都不太敢出去玩实在寂寞了就看美剧，二战的时候看了破产姐妹一季多，三战看了绝命毒师四季，国土安全一季多，追摩登家庭，生活大爆炸实在没得看了还看了韩剧。。。我到底在干嘛。。。
楼主过两天去寺里还愿~有申法国的吗？大家交流交流~~
V2六个月了，the hot cup cafe has a website, containing acustomer feedback page,然后customers可以submit comments. the website address is clearlyprinted on the each receipt, so it is not difficult for customer to access thefeedback page. 然后呢，那六个月the hot cup cafe卖了300,000cups of coffees，但是customer feedbackpage最有179个complaints和87个suggestions（大概数字是这样的既不清楚了）。然后就说almost all thecustomers are satisfied with our current products and customer servicedepartment, so we don't have make any improvement。
In this argument, the author concludesthat. They don't need to make any improvement..tosupport this conclusion, theauthor reasons that.only 179 complaints and suggestions are responded bytheir customers out of 30000cups of coffee.which means that almost all thecustomers are satisfied with their current products and customer servicedepartment, as the following discussion shows, this argument is criticallyflawed in several respects.
To begins with, the conclusion is basedon the assumption that all the customers who arenot satisfied with the cafe submit comments on the websites, this assumption, however, is problematic, the author fails to consider that there may be alarge number of customers who were not happy with the service but didn't try tocomplain on the website. It is entirely possible that some customers aretoo busy to respond their complaints, or that they are just chose not go to thecafe anymore instead of expressing their unpleasant. In addition, the authorassuming that customers are not difficult to access the feedback page on theground that the website address is clearly printed on each receipt, thisassumption is also questionable, since it is possible that many customers arenot used to keep receipt or the website address is too small to draw theirattentions. Unless the author can rule out the these possibilities, can thisassumption be accepted.
Secondly, even if customers who didn'tsubmit their complaints and suggestion are all satisfied with the cafe'sservice and products, the author's prediction that almost all thecustomers are satisfied with their current products and service department isstill open to doubt, since 300000 cups of coffee don't mean there are 300000 customers, it is highly possible thatsome customers buy the coffee everyday, or some customers buy more than one cupof coffee every time they go to the cafe, thus, it is highly possible that179complaints and 21 suggestion accounts for a large part of the customers whobought the coffee. Without theinformation about how many customers indeed bought coffee in the last 6 month,i have good reason to doubt that whether almost all the customers aresatisfied with the coffee and service.
Finally, even if the customers who areunsatisfied with the cafe do accounts for a small part of all customers, itis unfairly for the author to claim that the last 6 month's service andproduct will remain satisfies customers in the future , it is very likely othercoffee cafes near the hot cup cafe are keep developing their products andservices , if hot cafe doesn't have improvement, their will lose theircustomers in the long run.
To sum up, this argument is logicallyflawed and therefore unwarranted as it stands,to strengthen the argument, theauthor would have to provide evidence that all thecustomers who not submit to the website are all satisfied with the cafe, .tobetter assess the argument, i would also need to know more information about othercafes and whether they are improving. |
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