原题是GWD-24-38C In January 1994 an oil barge ran aground off the coast of San Juan, Puerto Rico, leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of the city’s beaches. A. leaking its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean, while causing the pollution of B. with its cargo of 750000 gallons leaking into the ocean, and it polluted C. and its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, polluting D. while it leaked its cargo of 750000 gallons into the ocean and caused the pollution of E. so that its cargo of 750000 gallons leaked into the ocean, and they were polluting. 1.while的用法不对——应改为ang 2.cause the pollution 不如polluting简洁 3.ving表示伴随功能结果,本题强调因为漏了油,伴随结果污染;而不是因为航行而伴随结果漏油 |