[求助] 新prep1-203

zanyingsan

句子结构中的两个and我有个疑问  the chambers  ...were closed and repair 这个and是连接了哪两个平行呢？第二个and是连接了stone was crystallizing和fungus was growing。

crystalmonic

分析好详细。。。

zanyingsan

A. due to结构复杂，which修饰tourists，effectiveness。its指代moisture。造成了逻辑意思错误，应该是the chambers增加了humidity，而不是moisture。Such…so that用法错误。
B. due to结构复杂，thereby raising修饰全面整句，意思错误，raise的动作发生在repair…之后。Its错误同A。the stone would crystallize和fungus was growing on the walls前后不平行。
C. which修饰moisture，effectiveness。Such that用法错误。平行错误同B。
D. because of后面通常跟简单的名词，句子结构太复杂. so … as to…用法错误，使得make的行为者成为tourists逻辑错误. that was exhaled没有必要补出that was，effectiveness。And前后平行错误同B。
E. correct。humidity within them...里tourists身体里面不可能包含有humidity，所以them不会指代混乱，而指代了the chambers。
对于A里面的its我认为是有指代的，回来讨论一下。

rainbowmanutd

humidity within them...tourists身体里面不可能包含有humidity，所以不会指代混乱.

-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2009/2/11 14:16:00)

这是用逻辑判断的吧，可是og12很多题都不是这样的
75.
A proposal has been made to trim the horns from
rhinoceroses to discourage poachers; the question is
whether tourists will continue to visit game parks and
see rhinoceroses after their horns are trimmed.
(A) whether tourists will continue to visit game
parks and see rhinoceroses after their horns are
(B) whether tourists will continue to visit game
parks to see one once their horns are
(C) whether tourists will continue to visit game
parks to see rhinoceroses once the animals’
horns have been
(D) if tourists will continue to visit game parks and
see rhinoceroses once the animals’ horns are
(E) if tourists will continue to visit game parks to
see one after the animals’ horns have been


OG解释A，“And see” should be “to see”
“their” is ambiguous;
“are” should be have been.

rainbowmanutd

我也来补一个:
A. due to后面结构过于复杂; 用which引导非限定性定从不能表达出该有的意思; such…so that固定习语使用错误. its无所指代.
B. due to后面结构过于复杂; thereby raising修饰前面整句，逻辑错误.
C. 用which引导非限定性定从不能表达出该有的意思; such that…短语使用错误; 过去进行的事情不能用过去将来时would.
D. because of后面结构过于复杂. so … as to…使用错误，使得make的行为者成为tourists逻辑错误. that was exhaled没有必要补出that was，累赘.
E. correct. humidity within them...tourists身体里面不可能包含有humidity，所以them不会指代混乱.
open to discuss.

-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2009/2/11 14:50:00)

另外请问，due to 过于复杂，但是不是也没错呀？due to后面可以跟名词吧~~~~

aeoluseros

humidity within them...tourists身体里面不可能包含有humidity，所以不会指代混乱.

-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2009/2/11 14:16:00)

这是用逻辑判断的吧，可是og12很多题都不是这样的
75.
A proposal has been made to trim the horns from
rhinoceroses to discourage poachers; the question is
whether tourists will continue to visit game parks and
see rhinoceroses after their horns are trimmed.
(A) whether tourists will continue to visit game
parks and see rhinoceroses after their horns are
(B) whether tourists will continue to visit game
parks to see one once their horns are
(C) whether tourists will continue to visit game
parks to see rhinoceroses once the animals’
horns have been
(D) if tourists will continue to visit game parks and
see rhinoceroses once the animals’ horns are
(E) if tourists will continue to visit game parks to
see one after the animals’ horns have been


OG解释A，“And see” should be “to see”
“their” is ambiguous;
“are” should be have been.

-- by 会员 rainbowmanutd (2010/5/9 10:01:11)

这个比较特殊的，因为their horns处于从句主语位置，所以their通常要与主句的主语指代一致，也就是指代tourists，所以有ambiguous。
"主从句的主语指代一致原则"在别的题目也可以经常看到，这个原则凌驾于逻辑含义之上。

aeoluseros

我也来补一个:
A. due to后面结构过于复杂; 用which引导非限定性定从不能表达出该有的意思; such…so that固定习语使用错误. its无所指代.
B. due to后面结构过于复杂; thereby raising修饰前面整句，逻辑错误.
C. 用which引导非限定性定从不能表达出该有的意思; such that…短语使用错误; 过去进行的事情不能用过去将来时would.
D. because of后面结构过于复杂. so … as to…使用错误，使得make的行为者成为tourists逻辑错误. that was exhaled没有必要补出that was，累赘.
E. correct. humidity within them...tourists身体里面不可能包含有humidity，所以them不会指代混乱.
open to discuss.

-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2009/2/11 14:50:00)

另外请问，due to 过于复杂，但是不是也没错呀？due to后面可以跟名词吧~~~~

-- by 会员 rainbowmanutd (2010/5/9 10:13:32)

嗯，due to过于复杂不是绝对性错误，只是有效性错误。due to后面一般跟比较简单的名词。

hwrshui

shannie 发表于 2009-2-11 10:01
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E的because 引导原因状语从句，这件事情导致，不是某个名词