a更符合并列,为什么不选?

hedgeforfun

11.    Charlotte Parkins Gilman, a late nineteenth-century feminist, called for urban apartment houses including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities.
(A) including child-care facilities and clustered suburban houses including communal eating and social facilities
(B) that included child-care facilities, and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(C) with child-care facilities included and for clustered suburban houses to include communal eating and social facilities
(D) that included child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities
(E) to include child-care facilities and for clustered suburban houses with communal eating and social facilities included
答案是d,为什么a那么平衡就不选?

gemj

A中的clustered suburban houses前缺for。
D在形式上虽然不对称，但功能上是对称的。

hedgeforfun

for不能省略吗?
把for a and for b写成for a and b不行吗?
什么时候可以省略呢?

kathy72

这里的for 如果省略的话会有歧义.

clustered suburban houses  是和 urban apartment houses 并列 而不是和child-care facilities 并列.

gemj

但在这里，第二个FOR离第一个太远了。
中间的成份太多，没有FOR容易被误认为与其它成份并列。

hedgeforfun

明白了,介词还是少省为妙,对吧?

gemj

尤其是在容易引起误解的时候不能省。

hedgeforfun

有道理

joywzy

为何C和E不行啊?也是并列啊.

kiwiya

gemj 发表于 2003-10-24 23:50
但在这里，第二个FOR离第一个太远了。中间的成份太多，没有FOR容易被误认为与其它成份并列。 ...

nice explanation！