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Nowadays, food hasbecome easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Usespecific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As we all know, with the development of technology and economy, the qualities of people’s lives have improved a lot. From my daily life, the most obvious and eye-catching development takes place on the aspect of food not only refers to  the sufficient food-supplement but also including a much easier  way to prepare it. Hence from what I said above, my opinion can be seen clearly.  I definitely believe that a easier way of preparing food makes a benefit to people’s lives qualities.
With the help of the great development of technology , more and more new functional foods has came up in our society. For example, nowadays there are full of organic vegetable or fruit i n the supermarket and people also prefer to buy them  due to their higher nutrition and less pollutants. From this way, we can know in the result of preparing foods has became much easier, the much easier way offers us much more chances to development and research much more healthier food in order to meet people’s need. Therefore from this aspect, we can know that make a benefit to people’s life.
Aside from this, with much easier food process from our daily life we can find it surly save us lots of time when cooking the food. For example, in the past, maybe our ancestors have to peel up timbers then make a fire in order to gain the hot water, while nowadays if we need some hot water w hat we need to do is just turning on a open key.  So when refers to cook a me al it will waste great more time compared with nowadays. Thus there is no denying that the announcement is reasonable enough. In fact that also can provide people much more time to enjoy themselves with  less time is needed to prepare the food after work.
In addition, the easier the food to prepare, the much more various the foods we can gain. Since people would rather to cook and create more and more delicate and nutrition foods. When hanging around the street, we can find there are full of different kinds of cakes or dishes with a high speed of updating, besides it also offers us more choices. For example, we can order the fried fish or streamed fish as well as roasted fish, there are much more choices without any doubts  compared to the past time.
From  all of the reasons being listed above, In the view of the more leisure time and more variety of the food genre are provided to us，we can the conclusion that the easier the food can be prepared the higher quality of the life become.