语法求助！！

笨笨星辰

2号考试，做了模考，但是有几道语法真的不懂，求解释！！
Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from muclear power, while in Germany it is just over 33 percent.
A while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
B 错误，可忽略
C whereas muclear power accounts for just over 33 percent of the energy produced in Germany.
D whereas just over 33 percent of the energy comes from muclear power in Germany.

此题答案选C，可我真心不知道D为什么错。。。C重复了那么多不啰嗦么，D的平行没什么大的问题啊、、求解释

笨笨星辰

NN们看过来！！

Elroy

1.the energy 此处错误指代了 the energy produced in France
2.改变了原句核心意思，只是表面上的平行

笨笨星辰

1.the energy 此处错误指代了 the energy produced in France
2.改变了原句核心意思，只是表面上的平行

-- by 会员 Elroy (2012/5/30 21:05:54)

嗯嗯，明白了D容易产生歧义，明白啦！谢谢斑竹~~~