OG 12 SC 80

ainiAnnie

80. A report by the American Academy for the Advancement of Science has concluded that much of the currently uncontrolled dioxins to which North Americans are exposed comes from the incineration of wastes.

(A) much of the currently uncontrolled dioxins to which North Americans are exposed comes

(B) much of the currently uncontrolled dioxins that North Americans are exposed to come

(C) much of the dioxins that are currently uncontrolled and that North Americans are exposed to comes

(D) many of the dioxins that are currently uncontrolled and North Americans are exposed

to come

(E) many of the currently uncontrolled dioxins to which North Americans are exposed come


答案容易选择，可对于OG中对于D选项的解释，不太理解，请NN解答，并且 that 在什么情况下可以省略？？谢谢大家~~~~
D That are is wordy; to maintain the parallel in this construction, that would have to be repeated in the clause that North Americansare exposed to.

MILKLUVNYC

以下是Ron大神关于that什么时候可以省略的回答，老帖子了 希望也能对以后看到的人有帮助吧~
“basically, it's ok to omit "that" if the sentence is still legitimately parallel without it.
for instance:
food that is nutritious for cats but that is poisonous for dogs
food that is nutritious for cats but is poisonous for dogs
food that is nutritious for cats but poisonous for dogs
all correct.

hand signs that natives use and that appear in local rituals --> correct.
these are both [i]that-clauses that modify "hand signs", so the parallel structure works.
BUT
hand signs that natives use and appear in local rituals --> INCORRECT.
the second of these doesn't work because the right-hand component of the parallel structure is appear in local rituals (i.e., active verb whose subject is "hand signs"). there is no verb in the left-hand side that is parallel to this, so this makes no sense.”

http://www.manhattangmat.com/forums/sc-a-report-by-the-american-academy-for-the-advancement-t7508.html

ainiAnnie

是否改为
A report by the American Academy for the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins currently uncontrolled and that North Americans are exposed to come from the incineration of wastes.
就对了？？？
求NN解答~~~！！！！

michaelmay17

是否改为
A report by the American Academy for the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins currently uncontrolled and that North Americans are exposed to come from the incineration of wastes.
就对了？？？
求NN解答~~~！！！！

-- by 会员 ainiAnnie (2012/2/8 20:30:02)

og解释的意思是加一个that来使句子更平行，然后that什么时候省略很难概括吧，一般讨论的是that不省略的情况例如在动词之后的that宾语从句，然后像that的定语从句常出现用of 替代的错，然后还有像这题，宾语从句的并列，常常出现少that的问题~

ainiAnnie

是否改为
A report by the American Academy for the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins currently uncontrolled and that North Americans are exposed to come from the incineration of wastes.
就对了？？？
求NN解答~~~！！！！

-- by 会员 ainiAnnie (2012/2/8 20:30:02)

og解释的意思是加一个that来使句子更平行，然后that什么时候省略很难概括吧，一般讨论的是that不省略的情况例如在动词之后的that宾语从句，然后像that的定语从句常出现用of 替代的错，然后还有像这题，宾语从句的并列，常常出现少that的问题~

-- by 会员 michaelmay17 (2012/2/9 2:25:25)

谢谢你的回答~
可是我觉得按照D选项的该法 改变了句子的结构从而导致表义上也有一些问题。。。
不知道NN怎么看呀？？

caroline莲莲

og解释的意思是加一个that来使句子更平行，然后that什么时候省略很难概括吧，一般讨论的是that不省略的情况例如在动词之后的that宾语从句，然后像that的定语从句常出现用of 替代的错，然后还有像这题，宾语从句的并列，常常出现少that的问题~














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是否改为
A report by the American Academy for the Advancement of Science has concluded that many of the dioxins currently uncontrolled and that North Americans are exposed to come from the incineration of wastes.
就对了？？？
求NN解答~~~！！！！
-- by 会员 ainiAnnie (2012/2/8 20:30:02)



og解释的意思是加一个that来使句子更平行，然后that什么时候省略很难概括吧，一般讨论的是that不省略的情况例如在动词之后的that宾语从句，然后像that的定语从句常出现用of 替代的错，然后还有像这题，宾语从句的并列，常常出现少that的问题~
-- by 会员 michaelmay17 (2012/2/9 2:25:25)


谢谢你的回答~
可是我觉得按照D选项的该法 改变了句子的结构从而导致表义上也有一些问题。。。
不知道NN怎么看呀？？

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同样的问题，感觉定语从句变并列关系，比平行结构中少了that是更严重的错误。但是OG没有提。