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TWE 2 the first one ,thanks you for your help

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发表于 2005-1-7 23:07:00 | 只看该作者

In our daily lives, we will have various teachers. Who is the best one? Some people think our parents are the best teachers in our lives连续重复的词组, 不好。, because our parents are the first persons语法有点问题吧 to teach us to pronounce, 这里少了个and吧to tell us how to be a good person. But I think the first teacher doesn't mean the best one. 感觉上转折有点突然。


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发表于 2005-1-7 06:34:00 | 只看该作者

TWE 2 the first one ,thanks you for your help

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Parents are the best teachers. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.




In our daily lives, we will have various teachers. Who is the best one? Some people think our parents are the best teachers in our lives, because our parents are the first persons to teach us to pronounce, to tell us how to be a good person. But I think the first teacher doesn't mean the best one.



To begin with, I think the best teacher should lead the children to find their own interests and future, and then teach them how, but most of parents do not realize this point. Some of them just want to put their unfinished dreams and interests onto their children. For instance, the father did not go to the college because of shortage of money, so he hopes his children will fulfill his dream, but he does not realize that his own children would like to be a chef instead of going to college. Sometimes, I have to say just because the parents put so much hope on the children, the children could not fulfill their own dreams and interests.



Secondly, we have to admit that some parents have their own demerits, and they pass those to their children unconsciously. For example, some parents have some big shortcomings in their daily lives, such as dishonesty, laziness. If a child lives in this family, later and later, he or she will have the same shortcomings just as his or her parents. Of course, everyone has his own shortcomings, but as a good teacher, he should avoid his shortcomings before his students and lead them to do the right things. So, I believe that some parents could not achieve this standard.



Finally, because the parents are very concerned about their children, they treat their own children very cautiously. Actually, most children always complain about their parents treating them like a baby. Of course, protection of children is very important, but over-protection is not a good one. For example, the parents tell the girls not to go outside after dark, or limit their children’s activity areas. In some level, the parents limit the children energy and eagerness, too. I have to say that over-protection is another problem for both parents and children.



To sum up, taking into account above mentioned reasons, I think the first does not mean the best. Parents as the first teacher and all-around teacher in our lives are the paramount, but if we want to find who is the best teacher for us, we should weigh who has the crucial influence on our dreams and lives, and help us to be an independent and complete person.

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