求助OG13 19题和26题，我有自己的理解，求确认

eliane小小爱

如题，希望有明白的同学现身解释下哈。
19 A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploits included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne’s fictional Phileas Fogg.
A A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploits included
B The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
C Nellie Bly wasa pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
D Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly’s exploits are
E The pioneer journalist’s exploits of Nellie Bly included


答案是B，可我觉得 a pioneer journalist是作为同位语，而B选项中，岂不是成了exploits的同位语？所以不太理解，求指导。另外求翻译。谢谢。


35题
By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen official national and international speed records, and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be of dangerously experimental design.
A and she earned them at a time when aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

B earning them at a time that aviation was still so new for many of the planes she flew to be

C earning them at a time where aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

D earned at a time in which aviation was still so niw such that many of the planes she flew were

E earned them at a time when aviation was still so new that many of the planes she flew were

这个题，我当时误认为earned 过去分词来表被动，修饰主语the pilot是错误的，一下子排除了DE.
如果我这样理解，分词短语不一定非要修饰主语，也可以就近修饰名词，如本题的正确答案E，earned就近修饰speed records. 而BC错在earning 离修饰的主语the pilot太远，请问这样理解对吗？谢谢！

Hendy

双重所有格是江湖大忌

EMMALIULIU

能够解释下19题E为什么不对么？谢谢~

-- by 会员 简单的豆 (2012/9/12 23:33:05)

E完全改变了句意，把a pioneer journalist和Nellie Bly说成是两种人，前者exploit后者。

同样句子意思改变的是C，句子意思变得莫名其妙。。。都无从下手翻译了。。。

另外，manhattan提到，修饰语通常不能修饰所有格名词。SO，见到所有格基本可以排除。

简单的豆

能够解释下19题E为什么不对么？谢谢~

qiuhua01234567

如题，希望有明白的同学现身解释下哈。
19 A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploits included circling the globe faster than Jules Verne’s fictional Phileas Fogg.
A A pioneer journalist, Nellie Bly’s exploits included
B The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included
C Nellie Bly wasa pioneer journalist including in her exploits the
D Included in the pioneer journalist Nellie Bly’s exploits are
E The pioneer journalist’s exploits of Nellie Bly included


答案是B，可我觉得 a pioneer journalist是作为同位语，而B选项中，岂不是成了exploits的同位语？所以不太理解，求指导。另外求翻译。谢谢。

-- by 会员 eliane小小爱 (2012/8/5 12:52:17)

同有疑问，小有补充：
OG13 47题 In 1713, Alexander Pope began his translation of the Iliad, a work that took him seven years...此处a work作为同位语修饰his translation。
          19题 The exploits of Nellie Bly, a pioneer journalist, included... a pioneer journalist作为同位语修饰紧邻的名词 Nellie Bly。
按照manhattan语法charpter6 modifier 的讲解，touch rule:a noun and its modifier shoule touch each other.
所以，我认为，19题中的更有道理，和a pioneer journalist最近的名词是 Nellie Bly
                   而47题的疑问，还请NN帮助解答一下！大谢~

-- by 会员 angela不怕孤单 (2012/8/5 18:15:22)

虽然看晚了，希望帮的上忙。
我觉得GMAT是考逻辑的东西，没有比较死的rule。看47，你觉得Iliad可能是work嘛？现在要修饰的就是这个translation，用whic修饰？不可能，会歧义吧？用-ing分词还是-ed分词修饰？还是不可能吧？看来看去只有这里的同位语修饰比较合理点。所以逻辑上是正确的。

v20

By 1940, the pilot Jacqueline Cochran held seventeen
official national and international speed records, and
she earned them at a time when aviation was still so
new for many of the planes she flew to be of
dangerously experimental design,
(A) and she earned them at a time when aviation
was still so new for many of the planes she flew
to be
(B) earning them at a time that aviation was still so
newfor many of the planes she flewto be
(C) earning these at a time where aviation was still
so newthat many of the planes she flew were
(D) earned at a time in which aviation was still so
new such that many of the planes she flew were
(E) earned at a time when aviation was still so new
that many of the planes she flew were


原题是这样的啊 E里没有them的

antel

wordy。。。。 A选项 楼上有人问A选项怎么错了的 还不清楚GMAT语法不是选对的是选 最好的吗。话说GWD里面有些题的选项多多少少都有问题 甚至有答案选 there be 这种所谓的必错题，原因就是其他题错得很离谱，而最佳答案虽然也不是完美的但是在5个选项里面是最没问题，“Best”的

jeffery2541

谢谢楼上jeffery同学。
关于同位语，你的意思是，不一定是核心词修饰，也可以说就近修饰前面出现的名词对吧。

关于35题，OG13确实选了E，OG解释是
A（我当初错选了A）too wordy,不如earned 修饰speed ecords来得直接。
B earning主语是the pilot,而不是records, 但是earning离records太近了，making this sectence hard to process(原话)；so new that many x were y,比so new for many x to be y更清晰
C where错
D 应该用when来引导；such多余
E对，earned就近修饰records;清晰的使用了so new that many x were y

-- by 会员 eliane小小爱 (2012/8/5 13:38:12)

你原来回复我了啊~~~~记得引用哦~

我是说你贴出来的E选项没有问题吗？

angela不怕孤单

E里面没有them啊。。。。。。。我想知道A怎么错了，虽然读着确实很罗嗦，可是就是不知道哪错。。。。

-- by 会员 jingangel (2012/8/8 18:42:30)

when后是这样的一句话：
aviation was so new for planes to be of dangerously experimental  design.
我的理解是：航空制造业对于飞机来说太新了，为了危险的实验设计。
-->og对A的评价很好：this version is too wordy and does not contribute to clarity.

我不是NN，刚看了两周语法，只能说，的确比不上E，avitaion was so new that planes were of dangerously experimental  design

jingangel

E里面没有them啊。。。。。。。我想知道A怎么错了，虽然读着确实很罗嗦，可是就是不知道哪错。。。。