2011年北美NA作文题练习 第一篇 Your job has more effect on your happiness than social life d

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Hardly in this world can anyone else claims that they enjoy themselves isolated from job or social life, because people who entirely devote in office would not experience the real happiness of life and those who without their own career would live in a life being short of hope and determination. And this essay below will account for my disagreement and my view of keeping both of them.
 For starter, Working is the most essential and natural action of human beings, although it has the distinct meaning over the history. What must we do when dating back to the primitive time? We worked for food. What must we do when it comes to the modern age? We work for accomplishment and achievement. From physical needs to mentally desire, it goes without saying that working not only invents the real world but also renders people the way to discover spiritual things. Now, no matter men or women, adults or teenagers, family members or friends benefit from their job, directly and indirectly. Men are confident and charming with successful business; women are attractive and dashing being financially independent; kids are self-identified and praising for working hard. Therefore, the most striking conclusion is that people feel happy and satisfactory by job.
 From the aspect of social life, let me firstly cite a statistical report researched by a psychological group from Hong Kong aiming to investigate the sense of happiness over cities in China. According to the report, because of fewer social life and communication, 73.6% of the citizens felt lonely and depressed in some time every day and even about a quarter of them turned to speak less and be unwilling to make new friends either. This phenomenon happens more frequently in developed cities and, unfortunately, it had become worse. There is no one but longs to a comfortable life，that’s the reason why we should put an importance on the significant role of social life. Working to pursue a better future is a symbol of our time and it is truly a reflection of the spiritual things like I mentioned in the second paragraph，but it doesn’t mean we could abandon our life source, happiness, and our life way of holding, communicating and understanding. Thus, we need to spare more social time, above all, it pays to.
 In summary, job does not have more effect on our happiness than social life. Since job promises us to survive and illustrate us to the spiritual wealth, social life brings society happy and peace, we should spare no effort to hold them both.

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