请教GWD17-Q29 有关because的并列问题

qtwang

GWD17-Q29:

Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

A.and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing


B.and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing


C.as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing


D.and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized


E.but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of


这道题选D, 请问大家A为什么不对。我已经看过以前的讨论帖，但是还是没有理解A为什么不对 是因为because不能并列吗。
另外附上一道和because并列的题

18. GWD17-Q18:

Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.



A.Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

B.Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.

C.With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

D.The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

E.Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
这道题答案是A
为什么后面这道题可以并列 前面那道不行呢

O(∩_∩)O谢谢

jackie19881102

GWD17-Q29:

Mary Wollstonecraft’s A Vindication of the Rights of Woman (1792) was unprecedented in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing these indignities.

A.and because it was eloquent and passionate in exposing and criticizing


B.and in that it was eloquent and passionate when exposing and criticizing


C.as well as the eloquence and passion it had in exposing and criticizing


D.and in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized


E.but also its eloquent and passionate exposure and criticism of


这道题选D, 请问大家A为什么不对。我已经看过以前的讨论帖，但是还是没有理解A为什么不对 是因为because不能并列吗。
另外附上一道和because并列的题

18. GWD17-Q18:

Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.



A.Over the course of the eighteenth century, the average output of ironwork tripled as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery and because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore.

B.Over the course of the eighteenth century a tripling in the average output of ironwork was due to the replacement of charcoal by coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, in addition to several improvements in blowing machinery.

C.With charcoal’s being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

D.The replacement of charcoal with coal for the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore and several improvements in blowing machinery, the average output of ironwork tripled over the eighteenth century.

E.Charcoal being replaced by coal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore, and several improvements in blowing machinery, which tripled the average output of ironwork over the course of the eighteenth century.
这道题答案是A
为什么后面这道题可以并列 前面那道不行呢

O(∩_∩)O谢谢

-- by 会员 qtwang (2011/4/9 15:54:39)

对称不是说单纯地看结构是否对称，逻辑对称是精髓。先看第二道，对称的地方在于as a result of several improvements in blowing machinery和because coal replaced charcoal as the fuel used in the smelting of iron ore，第一题和这题完全不一样，对称点在于 in its firsthand accounts of the indignities suffered by women和in the eloquence and passion with which it exposed and criticized，能理解吗lz？实在不能理解就翻字典，把句子翻译出来体会

billxxyy

GWD17-Q29个人认为A是平行的问题，但是GWD17-Q18我觉得A是有问题的，始终不理解。还请nn来解惑。

qtwang

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