OG12 131（已解决）

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Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France
derives from nuclear power, while in Germany it is just
over 33 percent.
(A) while in Germany it is just over 33 percent
(B) compared to Germany, which uses just over 33
percent
(C) whereas nuclear power accounts for just over
33 percent of the energy produced in Germany
(D) whereas just over 33 percent of the energy
comes from nuclear power in Germany
(E) compared with the energy from nuclear power in
Germany, where it is just over 33 percent
OA:C
问：B。OG答案中说it is not clear what 33 percent refer to。 问什么？？

天使追梦

根据句子的语法结构，33 percent后面省略的是Over 75 percent of the energy
pared to Germany无法修饰到与Germany对称的France。
B的错误很多…use over 33 percent，好像再说Germany用了France的资源。

PS：33 percent之类的数词做为单独出现没有问题，但是前面要有成分让它指代。

-- by 会员 aeoluseros (2010/9/15 12:32:05)

谢谢斑斑~

aeoluseros

根据句子的语法结构，33 percent后面省略的是Over 75 percent of the energy
pared to Germany无法修饰到与Germany对称的France。
B的错误很多…use over 33 percent，好像再说Germany用了France的资源。

PS：33 percent之类的数词做为单独出现没有问题，但是前面要有成分让它指代。

zxtcomeo

我认为,b选项的错误有两个
1. compare 的比较对象错误,前面是能源后面是国家,不恰当!~
2. 33 percent 后面的名词省略,省略是 nuclear power 还是 energy?? 我记得一个外国网站说过,".....percent " 后面必须加名词,不能单独出现.但我找到几个例外,比如 increase by ..percent.我个人认为外国网站说的还是有一定道理的,尽量不要单独出现 ..percent  .

天使追梦

ding!

天使追梦

Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent

我觉得B选项的错误有好几个
1.  which 有可能指代 Germany，也可以把（compared to Germany）当插入语跳过，指代 nuclear power
2. 33 percent 前面的动词是use，无法预示 这个数字是与前面的谁平行

-- by 会员 qingbo (2010/9/12 17:41:25)

33 percent 前面的动词是use，无法预示 这个数字是与前面的谁平行什么意思呀？

天使追梦

ding!

天使追梦

进来就是想说一声，楼主那个心形开头太给力了！

-- by 会员 Christianyang (2010/9/12 18:56:53)

哈！我的独特标识~

Christianyang

进来就是想说一声，楼主那个心形开头太给力了！

qingbo

Over 75 percent of the energy produced in France derives from nuclear power, compared to Germany, which uses just over 33 percent

我觉得B选项的错误有好几个
1.  which 有可能指代 Germany，也可以把（compared to Germany）当插入语跳过，指代 nuclear power
2. 33 percent 前面的动词是use，无法预示 这个数字是与前面的谁平行