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作者: 天山    时间: 2003-11-11 16:29
标题: [推荐]壮士慢行,请过五关斩六将后再去决战ETS
[推荐]壮士慢行,请过五关斩六将后再去决战ETS
申明:部分题目来自网友的帖子,部分题目是近两个月的真题,请大家讨论,最好能列出 理由。

1. The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientific detail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of the work.
A. the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that
B. fact that it depicts marine world scenes of life and death as having emotional overtones that
C. depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones
D. depiction of marine world scenes of life and death, which have emotional overtones and thus
E. fact that if depicts scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones

2.Those who have visited the Grand Canyon have typically seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark the passage of time like the rings in a tree trunk.
(A) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark
(b) see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors mark
(c) been seeing layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors are markers of
(d) been able to see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors marking
(e) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, marking by different colors

3.In many upper-class Egyptian homes, French was spoken within the family, just as it had once been among the Russian aristocracy.
A. just as it had once been among the Russian aristocracy
B. just like it once been among the Russian aristocracy
C. just as Russian aristocracy had once done
D. similar to what the Russian aristocracy had once done
E. like what had once been done by the Russian aristocracy

4.  Child care already a solid part of the employee benefits package at many companies, more businesses are focusing on a newer family benefit known as elder care, servicing for older dependents.
A. Child care
B. With child care
C. Child care as
D. Being the Child care was
E. With child care’s being

5. Leaching, the recovery of copper from the drainage water of mines, as a method of the  extraction of minerals, it was well established as early as the eighteenth century,  but until about 25 years ago miners did not realize that bacteria taken an active part in  the process
A. as a method of the extraction of minerals, it was well established                  
B. as a method of the extraction of minerals well established                              
C. was a well-established method of mineral extraction                                 
D. was a well-established method of extracting mineral that  was                             
E. had been a method of mineral extraction, well established

6. After more than four decades of research and development, a new type of jet engine is being tested that could eventually propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours  or help boost cargoes into space at significantly lower costs than current methods permit.
A tested that could eventually propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two or help
B. tested that could eventually have the capability of propelling aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours or to help
C. tested, eventually able to propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours, or helping
D tested, and it eventually could propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours, or helping
E. tested, and it could eventually have the capability to propel aircraft anywhere I the world within two hours or help

7.    The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
A)    The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses
B)    The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania permits the visitor unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
C)    The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania gives the visitor the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without telephoto lenses.
D)    The visitor to the Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania has the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
E)    Even without the aid of telephoto lenses, the visitor to Tanzania’s Lake Manyara Park has an unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees.

8.    One noted economist has made a comparison of the Federal Reserve and an automobile as racing through a tunnel, bouncing first off one wall, then the other: the car may get where it is going, but people may be hurt in the process.
A)    made a comparison of the Federal Reserve and an automobile as racing through a tunnel, bouncing
B)    made a comparison between the Federal Reserve and an automobile racing through a tunnel, bouncing
C)    compared the federal Reserve with an automobile as racing through a tunnel and which bounced
D)    compared the Federal Reserve to an automobile racing through a tunnel, bouncing
E)    compared the Federal Reserve with an automobile that races through a tunnel and it bounces

9. Baker was perhaps not the most gifted soloist in the orchestra, but the conductor felt what was lacking in his technical skill was more than made up by the passion with which he played the music
A)    what was lacking in his technical skill was more than made up by
B)    what he lacked in technical skill was more than made up by
C)    whatever was lacking in his technical skill was more than made up by
D)    whatever he lacked in technical skill was more than made up for by
E)    whatever he lacked in technical skill he more than made up by

10.There is ample evidence, derived from the lore of traditional folk medicine, that naturally occurring antibiotics are usually able to be modified to make them a more effective drug.  
A)    are usually able to be modified to make them a more effective drug
B)    are usually able to be modified to make them more effective drugs
C)    are usually able to be modified, which makes them more effective drug
D)    can usually be modified to make them a more effective drug
E)             can usually be modified to make them more effective drugs




作者: gemj    时间: 2003-11-11 17:18
无比感谢天山的无私奉献!
作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-11 17:55
谢谢天山.

我试试:

AAACC  AEDBE
作者: iselibra    时间: 2003-11-11 18:10
我来try try
aeaccaadbe

和楼上的nn差了这么多...


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作者: remeo    时间: 2003-11-11 18:17
非常感谢天山的无私奉献和共享精神!!!

建议以后取名为“天山擂台系列”,大家都来攻擂,呵呵,然后你就逐一点评。
作者: jennilu28    时间: 2003-11-11 19:24
daaac  addde
不同的简直不敢相信!


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作者: solome    时间: 2003-11-11 19:38

aaacc   acdbe

除了7题以外其他的都和joywzy一样。
7我觉得DE是我首先排除的的,因为The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania 应该放在主语的位置上,对不对呢:)

谢谢天山


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作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-11 21:04
aeabc aedbe
作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-11 21:08
第二题是ea老布kanplan800里的题,答案是e--layers marking the passage of time..by different colors.
第四题俺认为是b,c是啥用法?做让步也不对。
作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-11 21:09
7,park can give?
作者: solome    时间: 2003-11-11 21:56


我觉得做题的时候挺认真的,怎么犯怎么初级的错误。
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作者: yzlinlin    时间: 2003-11-11 22:30
谢谢天山,老有好东西分享。

ADABC   AEDBE

用时11分钟(第8题是老题)。

答案里第2题拿不准,觉得5个选项都不尽如人意,最后选D,好象没有人选,没底。
第7题一定是E,因为其他4项里without the aid of telephoto lenses 都有修饰歧义。


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作者: iselibra    时间: 2003-11-11 22:43
我觉得第七题把aid去掉改变了原来的意思了
作者: 天山    时间: 2003-11-11 23:20
公布答案:
部分答案是标准答案, 另外部分答案需要大家一起探讨:
1.    暂无定论,  A 中的with emotional overtones 有修饰world 之嫌疑, 按照意思,应该修饰Depiction ,故我无奈之下选C.
2.     E
3.    A (仅供参考)
4.    B (仅供参考), 似乎B也不完美,  最好是With child care as
5.    C(仅供参考), 但觉得C似乎改变了句子强调的重心.(was established … as early as…)
6.    A((仅供参考)
7.    E
8.    D
9.    D
10.    E

作者: iselibra    时间: 2003-11-11 23:53
错了这么多...
天山兄能否给出各个题目的解答方向
作者: sbbi    时间: 2003-11-12 02:05
天山要先吧壮士们累够呛.)
谢谢天山..

以下是引用天山在2003-11-11 16:29:00的发言:
[推荐]壮士慢行,请过五关斩六将后再去决战ETS

作者: gemj    时间: 2003-11-12 02:38
以下是引用sbbi在2003-11-12 2:05:00的发言:
天山要先吧壮士们累够呛.)
谢谢天山..

sbbi,我很想你呀,见到你的指示,我倍感亲切,倍增精神!
真心话。
作者: yzlinlin    时间: 2003-11-12 03:07
以下是引用gemj在2003-11-12 2:38:00的发言:
sbbi,我很想你呀,见到你的指示,我倍感亲切,倍增精神!
真心话。


瞧这哥俩又开始猛吃青葡萄了。
作者: sbbi    时间: 2003-11-12 05:10
寂寞的时候想想我
想我的时候来看我
//真够酸的
作者: xiang_y    时间: 2003-11-12 05:27
1. The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientific detail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of the work.
A. the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that
B. fact that it depicts marine world scenes of life and death as having emotional overtones that
C. depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones
D. depiction of marine world scenes of life and death, which have emotional overtones and thus
E. fact that if depicts scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones

2.Those who have visited the Grand Canyon have typically seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark the passage of time like the rings in a tree trunk.
(A) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark
(b) see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors mark
(c) been seeing layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors are markers of
(d) been able to see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors marking
(e) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, marking by different colors


7. The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
A) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses
B) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania permits the visitor unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
C) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania gives the visitor the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without telephoto lenses.
D) The visitor to the Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania has the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
E) Even without the aid of telephoto lenses, the visitor to Tanzania’s Lake Manyara Park has an unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees.


請教大牛。
10 題中有以上3題考到了關於“WITH/WITHOUT” 短语的用法。(1,2,7)。 有几个令我困惑的问题。

(1) WITH/WITHOUT” 短语就近修饰主句中的哪个成份。我一直以为它应该修饰主句中主语的动作。但是在第2题中, “with different colors that mark the passage of time like the rings in a tree trunk" 应该是修饰 “layers of sediment” (主句中的宾语)。

(2)WITH/WITHOUT” 短语前有逗号和没逗号的区别。

(3)WITH/WITHOUT” 短语放在什么地方不会引起歧义。如果说第7题,"without the aid of telephoto lenses“放在“lions playing in trees”后会引起歧义,那么第1题里“with emotional overtones ”放在 “marine world”后就不会引起歧义吗。



作者: xiang_y    时间: 2003-11-12 05:42
6. After more than four decades of research and development, a new type of jet engine is being tested that could eventually propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours  or help boost cargoes into space at significantly lower costs than current methods permit.
A tested that could eventually propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two or help
B. tested that could eventually have the capability of propelling aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours or to help
C. tested, eventually able to propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours, or helping
D tested, and it eventually could propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours, or helping
E. tested, and it could eventually have the capability to propel aircraft anywhere I the world within two hours or help

这题很多人选A,不知THAT从句修饰什么,E中虽然COULD 和 CAPABILITY 重复,但结构还是清晰的。
作者: xiang_y    时间: 2003-11-12 05:52
10.There is ample evidence, derived from the lore of traditional folk medicine, that naturally occurring antibiotics are usually able to be modified to make them a more effective drug.  
A) are usually able to be modified to make them a more effective drug
B) are usually able to be modified to make them more effective drugs
C) are usually able to be modified, which makes them more effective drug
D) can usually be modified to make them a more effective drug
E)             can usually be modified to make them more effective drugs

一个问题,can什么时候可以代替be able to? 记得以前作过一道题, "can often" 不能 代替“be often able to" 前者表是“能经常”,后者表示“经常能”, 意义不一样。
作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-12 08:33
以下是引用xiang_y在2003-11-12 5:42:00的发言:
6. After more than four decades of research and development, a new type of jet engine is being tested that could eventually propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours  or help boost cargoes into space at significantly lower costs than current methods permit.
A tested that could eventually propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two or help
B. tested that could eventually have the capability of propelling aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours or to help
C. tested, eventually able to propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours, or helping
D tested, and it eventually could propel aircraft anywhere in the world within two hours, or helping
E. tested, and it could eventually have the capability to propel aircraft anywhere I the world within two hours or help

这题很多人选A,不知THAT从句修饰什么,E中虽然COULD 和 CAPABILITY 重复,但结构还是清晰的。

6.jet engines that...is being tested.
10.be able to be done???




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作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-12 08:48
天山,

T1,A是有修饰歧义之嫌,可是用whose 指代world,不对吧?

T4,我在C/B中选,根据LZM中说,独立主格修饰时,可省略with,可后面的as 不可省啊.所以我选了C.

还是晕修饰啊.真不知有什么好办法?这样,不敢上考场了.
作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-12 08:51
以下是引用sbbi在2003-11-12 5:10:00的发言:
寂寞的时候想想我
想我的时候来看我
//真够酸的


sbbi,你家兄弟在受苦,就要考试了.你怎么只在岸上观火啊???叫人想啊??????

不够意思吧.快帮忙解答问题啊.这才叫好兄弟.

下来下来!!!!!


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作者: xiang_y    时间: 2003-11-12 09:19
Hello, anybody home????
怎么没有人回答问题, 还是我的问题都太蠢?
作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-12 09:27
以下是引用joywzy在2003-11-12 8:48:00的发言:
天山,

T1,A是有修饰歧义之嫌,可是用whose 指代world,不对吧?

T4,我在C/B中选,根据LZM中说,独立主格修饰时,可省略with,可后面的as 不可省啊.所以我选了C.

还是晕修饰啊.真不知有什么好办法?这样,不敢上考场了.

独立主格这题能用么?as already?


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作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-12 09:30
9.can anybody explain why "whatever" is used here?

作者: allaneli    时间: 2003-11-12 10:12
joywzy 我认为 t4  with children care 不是独立主格,而是介词短语+ 同位结构,不知对不对。
作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-12 10:17
以下是引用allaneli在2003-11-12 10:12:00的发言:
joywzy 我认为 t4  with children care 不是独立主格,而是介词短语+ 同位结构,不知对不对。


with A as B,应该没问题的.可是词短语+ 同位结构,对不对啊?

我也不明白啊.你可能是对的.
作者: sunmike    时间: 2003-11-12 10:22
我做的答案猜不忍睹。。。。这些题好像比OG,补充材料上的题难好多呀。。

革命尚未成功,同志仍需努力。。




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作者: xiang_y    时间: 2003-11-12 10:36
以下是引用Marrow在2003-11-12 8:33:00的发言:
6.jet engines that...is being tested.
10.be able to be done???




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Thanks!

作者: 天山    时间: 2003-11-12 18:10
部分题目点评,个人意见,仅供参考。
1. 翻译:此书的失败并不在于其缺少对科学细节的关注,而是在于其对海洋世界里生命与死亡景象的描述上,该描述带有情感暗示(色彩),这种情感暗示(色彩)降低了作品的可信度。
(A)    without emotional overtones 有修饰world之嫌疑。
(c)whose 似乎也有修饰歧义, 但根据对文章的理解, whose 似乎逻辑可修饰depiction。比较(a)和(c), 我倾向与(C),尽管(C) 也不完美。

2. (C)中的been seeing (d)中的been able to 就注定这两个选项是错的。
   (A)中with noun. 这种结构ETS往往将其作为 Ungrammatic 选项, 例如:….,with the result that …就是典型错误选项。 要么在with noun 这种结构后面加上分词构成状语,要么换写,(E)选项比较完美,考虑了逻辑一致性。.

4. with介词+名词(或代词)+分词或介词构成方式状语,修饰句子的谓语。OG例句如:  With  meat as a rarity; with arms and legs hanging like socks on a  clothesline
该题目最好的答案是: with child care as 或 with child care being   
其实选B,我也是迫于无奈,因为省略了as 或being的用法确实并不多见。但是如果选c, child chare 似乎作同位语,紧跟在它后面的句子的主语应该是与child  care 性质相同的 benefit, 而不是more businesses。故排除c.

7. 除E外,其他选项均有歧义。

9,此题目考察的重点是习惯用语,make up for ,弥补,标准书面英语。另外,most gifted 与whatever相互呼应,更能表达conductor 的but 观点(转折观点:),whatever与what之间主要区别也就是语气程度的不同。

10 ETS一般不倾向于用be able to ,优先顺序是can >be able to







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作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-12 18:13
天山,第一题怎么说?

革命尚未成功啊.这种水准,不敢上考场.
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作者: xiang_y    时间: 2003-11-12 18:50
以下是引用天山在2003-11-12 18:10:00的发言:
部分题目点评,个人意见,仅供参考。

2. (C)中的been seeing (d)中的been able to 就注定这两个选项是错的。
    (A)中with noun. 这种结构ETS往往将其作为 Ungrammatic 选项, 例如:….,with the result that …就是典型错误选项。 要么在with noun 这种结构后面加上分词构成状语,要么换写,(E)选项比较完美,考虑了逻辑一致性。.


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"with noun that"结构可在OG中找到, OG205
E选项中如果"marking by different colors"修饰 "layers of sediment", 为什么不用 marked by different colors.

2.Those who have visited the Grand Canyon have typically seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark the passage of time like the rings in a tree trunk.
(A) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark
(b) see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors mark
(c) been seeing layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors are markers of
(d) been able to see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors marking
(e) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, marking by different colors


作者: 天山    时间: 2003-11-12 20:16
OG 205 :The peaks of a mountain range, acting like rocks in a streambed, produce ripples in the air flowing over them; the resulting flow pattern, with crests and troughs that remain stationary although the air that forms them is moving rapidly, is known as "standing waves."
此处,with crests and troughs that… 是作pattern的定语,而非状语,我所指的是此种结构(with+noun)不能作状语,但它肯定可以作定语。
marking by different colors  不是修饰 "layers of sediment" , 而是现在分词作状语,表示(结果)状态,当然不能用marked。 .后面半句话的意思是:峡谷的沉积层通过不同颜色来标记时间的流逝,象树干的(年轮)环一样。

作者: mariezhu    时间: 2003-11-12 21:03
以下是引用天山在2003-11-12 18:10:00的发言:
部分题目点评,个人意见,仅供参考。
1. 翻译:此书的失败并不在于其缺少对科学细节的关注,而是在于其对海洋世界里生命与死亡景象的描述上,该描述带有情感暗示(色彩),这种情感暗示(色彩)降低了作品的可信度。
(A) without emotional overtones 有修饰world之嫌疑。
(c)whose 似乎也有修饰歧义, 但根据对文章的理解, whose 似乎逻辑可修饰depiction。比较(a)和(c), 我倾向与(C),尽管(C) 也不完美。

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首先感谢天山GG奉献给大家的精彩好题!
不过有一点想与你商榷,请赐教:
T1:个人以为depiction sth with emotional overtones 非常完美“描述某事时带有过多的感情色彩”,而且看起来marine world似乎不可能被误认为可以跟with emotional overtones 放在一起,因为这样意思会非常奇怪,所以我觉得这道题看来似乎还是A更好一些。另外从平行的角度考虑,这道题里depiction前面是不是加上the 更好一些?这点我不肯定,欢迎指正。

作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-12 21:36
同意楼上,depiction前没有the无法忍受,相反c的whose才有误解嫌疑。
作者: joywzy    时间: 2003-11-13 08:49
谢谢天山的精彩解释.

这十题有四题讲到with 引导的介词短语的修饰,易引起歧义的问题.这种情况,在我问的一个with the aim to ,OG中的一题,天山和dandan做了详细的解释

主语...+名词+with 引导的短语,易引起歧义,可修饰主语,也可修饰前面的名词,要特别引起注意.

T1,我选的是C,A的介词短语会引起歧义.可是C呢?在OG113:

Visitors to the park have often looked up into the leafy canopy and saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang like socks on a clothesline.
(A) saw monkeys sleeping on the branches, whose arms and legs hang

OG中的解释是这样:awarkly seperate the relative clause begining with the monkey from the monkey , the noun it modifies.

这样说来,T1的C也是错的.在A/C中不知如何选择.

T2和T7中的介词短语完全赞成天山的.

这种介词短语的歧义,根据句子的逻辑意思,有几种改正方式:

1.用分词的形式来表示,如T2
2.用平行句表示
3.将介词短语放在句首,避免歧义

T4,我原以为是做独立主格结构,来修饰.根据LZM220, (with)+名词/代词+现在分词(过去分词,介词短语等),其中名词/代词做独立结构的主语.

可是在T4中,如果with省略,会引起歧义,以为是主语的同位语,所以这里,with不可省.

什么情况下可省略with呢?在不引起歧义的情况下.

如LZM 220, 11-50

His right hand and arm crippedy by..HP, worked by

可在11-51,

and seen moneys sleeping on the branches, with arms and legs hanging like socks ..

此时,若省略了with,会引起歧义,修饰不清了.

欢迎批评指正.


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作者: xiang_y    时间: 2003-11-13 10:48
2.Those who have visited the Grand Canyon have typically seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark the passage of time like the rings in a tree trunk.
(A) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark
(b) see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors mark
(c) been seeing layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors are markers of
(d) been able to see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors marking
(e) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, marking by different colors



Cite what "upstairs" said
"
T2和T7中的介词短语完全赞成天山的.

这种介词短语的歧义,根据句子的逻辑意思,有几种改正方式:

1.用分词的形式来表示,如T2"

Why using "分词的形式" won't bring any ambigous meaning?
Who is "marking the passage of time by different color"? here
the  vistors? the layers of sediment? or the gaping canyon?

How can you tell?




作者: solome    时间: 2003-11-13 11:05

og 212
212. The Baldrick Manufacturing Company has for several years followed a policy
aimed at decreasing operating costs and improving the efficiency of its
distribution system.

A.    aimed at decreasing operating costs and improving
B.    aimed at the decreasing of operating costs and to improve
C.    aiming at the decreasing of operating costs and improving
D.    the aim of which is the decreasing of operating costs and improving
E.    with the aim to decrease operating costs and to improve

In E, the infinitives to decrease and to improve, while parallel, are less idiomatic than
the prepositional phrase of decreasing ... and improving in modifying the noun aim.
Also, with the aim...to improve can easily be construed as referring to the Baldrick
Manufacturing Company and so does not refer unequivocally to policy.

偶在选a的时候也犹豫了一下,我也觉得按理说好象with的修饰是有问题的,但是我觉得
其他的选项都有问题,所以仍然的选了A。
从上面的题对E的解释上看来ets好象是认为这种with的结构是可以被理解为修饰前面的词
的,所以第一题中的A的修饰是不是可以认为没有歧义呢?请指教


作者: nettalker    时间: 2003-11-13 12:16
以下是引用joywzy在2003-11-12 10:17:00的发言:

with A as B,应该没问题的.可是词短语+ 同位结构,对不对啊?

我也不明白啊.你可能是对的.

作者: nettalker    时间: 2003-11-13 12:19
以下是引用allaneli在2003-11-12 10:12:00的发言:
joywzy 我认为 t4  with children care 不是独立主格,而是介词短语+ 同位结构,不知对不对。


t4两种理解都是对的,并不矛盾。答案是b
作者: nettalker    时间: 2003-11-13 12:39
以下是引用yzlinlin在2003-11-11 22:30:00的发言:
谢谢天山,老有好东西分享。

ADABC   AEDBE

用时11分钟(第8题是老题)。

答案里第2题拿不准,觉得5个选项都不尽如人意,最后选D,好象没有人选,没底。
第7题一定是E,因为其他4项里without the aid of telephoto lenses 都有修饰歧义。


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你真厉害!!! 11分钟. 我花了18分钟, 答案aaabc,aedbe, 非常sure. 不过一开始我t9选错了
t2应为a, d的marking应用一般时态.且been able to语法不错,但此处与原文想表达的逻辑意思不符合.
作者: shaman_tse    时间: 2003-11-13 20:17
aaaeb
eedbe
觉得是不是题目有的地方不对啊
作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-13 22:16
请问天山,这题你给出的答案是标准答案么?第9题答案确定是d???
作者: 天山    时间: 2003-11-13 23:35
非标准答案部分我都注明了,未注释部分都是标准答案。9题是D.
作者: Marrow    时间: 2003-11-14 07:59

作者: gemj    时间: 2003-11-18 22:38
以下是引用sbbi在2003-11-12 5:10:00的发言:
寂寞的时候想想我
想我的时候来看我

What can be infer from the passage?
ANS: 寂寞的时候来看我
作者: njman    时间: 2003-11-21 12:55
标题: original explanation of #2 from Kaplan 800
#2: A is the right answer

the answer choices give you the option of replacing with different clors with whose different colors but the second options is wrong because , if you added whose, it could refer to the layers ofr the Canon, and whenever a pronoun has more than one possible antecedent, it is used incorrectly. Eliminate B and C. A is correct. Eliminate E as well because the subject of marking is similarly unclear; is it the layers or the Canyon that is marking the passage of time? And A is better than D because, once again, seen is better than the wordier alternative been able to see. A is correct.
作者: philipzhou    时间: 2003-11-22 07:29
#7 质疑
Something gives somebody the opportunity to do somethig 是一个惯用语:
Simulators give students an opportunity to experience network problems at first hand.
give 的主语不一定是人

原题明显是在考这个惯用语的用法:
A. afford someone with opportunities 错, 应为: afford someone the opportunity 没有with
B. 没有permit opportunities 的用法
C. 标准用法
D.E, 改变了原意, 至少应改为Visitors. 不然的话是特指某个visitor


作者: tony6    时间: 2004-6-11 20:57
T2还是选A比较合理。
作者: gmat700+    时间: 2004-6-12 02:53
adaac ecdbb
作者: robertchu    时间: 2004-6-12 08:40
以下是引用nettalker在2003-11-13 12:39:00的发言:


你真厉害!!! 11分钟. 我花了18分钟, 答案aaabc,aedbe, 非常sure. 不过一开始我t9选错了
t2应为a, d的marking应用一般时态.且been able to语法不错,但此处与原文想表达的逻辑意思不符合.


My answers are same as nettalker's: AAABCAEDBE.  I'm also pretty sure of them :-)


作者: baiyun007    时间: 2004-6-12 13:31

mindfree、pumpkin、genj都跑哪去了,牛人都来给个说法啊,答案到底是什么?


作者: tony6    时间: 2004-6-12 14:51
以下是引用xiang_y在2003-11-12 5:27:00的发言:
1. The failing of the book lies not in a lack of attention to scientific detail but in the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that reduce the credibility of the work.
A. the depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world with emotional overtones that
B. fact that it depicts marine world scenes of life and death as having emotional overtones that
C. depiction of scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones
D. depiction of marine world scenes of life and death, which have emotional overtones and thus
E. fact that if depicts scenes of life and death in the marine world, whose emotional overtones

2.Those who have visited the Grand Canyon have typically seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark the passage of time like the rings in a tree trunk.
(A) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors that mark
(b) see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors mark
(c) been seeing layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, whose different colors are markers of
(d) been able to see layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, with different colors marking
(e) seen layers of sediment in the gaping canyon, marking by different colors


7. The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
A) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania affords the visitor with unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses
B) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania permits the visitor unequalled opportunities to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
C) The Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania gives the visitor the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without telephoto lenses.
D) The visitor to the Lake Manyara Park in Tanzania has the unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees without the aid of telephoto lenses.
E) Even without the aid of telephoto lenses, the visitor to Tanzania’s Lake Manyara Park has an unequalled opportunity to photograph lions playing in trees.


請教大牛。
10 題中有以上3題考到了關於“WITH/WITHOUT” 短语的用法。(1,2,7)。 有几个令我困惑的问题。

(1) WITH/WITHOUT” 短语就近修饰主句中的哪个成份。我一直以为它应该修饰主句中主语的动作。但是在第2题中, “with different colors that mark the passage of time like the rings in a tree trunk" 应该是修饰 “layers of sediment” (主句中的宾语)。

(2)WITH/WITHOUT” 短语前有逗号和没逗号的区别。

(3)WITH/WITHOUT” 短语放在什么地方不会引起歧义。如果说第7题,"without the aid of telephoto lenses“放在“lions playing in trees”后会引起歧义,那么第1题里“with emotional overtones ”放在 “marine world”后就不会引起歧义吗。



These are good questions!






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