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1.C ✅
just as so+前后平行
2.C ❌ （正确：D
A novelist who…, Selma became….是可以的
in addition to 分离句意
3.E ✅
C不确定
allow that 承认
allow for考虑到/允许
allow sb to do 允许
4.A ✅
独立主格？
5.D❌（正确：E
并不是火山运动把金子放到触手可及的地方，而是被火山运动能够推到地表的河床。
6.D✅
夹心修饰
7.B ❌（正确：E
书和书平行
我晕！！！
8.A✅
9.A✅
10.E❌（正确：C
per milligram是插入语！
price不需要加介词！
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Day14
1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks. C
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the（得是人）
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a （as 是完整的句子）
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the （要just as）
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature. D
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win（这里的and 不知道连接谁了）
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won （这里的she 和S这个人不好）
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning（in addition 不对）
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won（不是结果状语）
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one. E
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred（because of sth 会好一点觉得）
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred（没有allow that 这种用法）
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction （只有all wo to be）
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred（it 应该是指代boon这个东西）
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years. A
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated （同B）
C.and each has dated （回溯不能用完成时）
D.and each one dating （and 是句子了）
E.each one of which date （三单）
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel. E
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for （put 是动词了）
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of（and putting 不对）
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of（同B）
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for （since 要是不接时间的话就得是个完整的句子）
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials. D
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of（their 不对，不是货物用）
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of（应该是被动语态）
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using（同A）
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using（没有谓语了）
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man E
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man（同D）
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison（应嘎是the other）
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man（同B）
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man （前面也是个作品）
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods. A
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and（结果状语不对）
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being（同B）
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is （得是复数）
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston. A
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve（时间词表示应该是过去）
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving （led to 中间不该有插入语）
D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving （这题的D保留想）
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving（同C）
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient. E
A. as （as 不对，少了一个）
B. than（than 不对，没有比较级出现）
C. that（that 指代price也不行）
D. of what （不是名词性而应该是定语从句）
E. at which
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1.（229）Just like thebackground in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate findsof ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needsspecialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understandshipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history neededby an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs abackground in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a
C.Justas an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds ofancient art, so a
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds ofancient art and requires a background in art history, so the
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires anarchaeologist who has a background in art history, so the
C
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism towrite romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden,in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was alsothe first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to writeromantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was alsothe first Swedish writer to win
B.She turned away from literary realism andwrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden,and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the firstSwedish writer that won
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned awayfrom literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life andlandscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman inaddition to the first Swedish writer winning
D.Anovelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories aboutthe peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away fromliterary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life andlandscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also thefirst Swedish writer that won
D
3.(231)The globalization of financial-servicescompanies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placedin a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in amore regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a lessregulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in abank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in aless regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D.it allows the transfer of money having beenplaced in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E.itallows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to betransferred
E
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldestsurviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least athousand years.
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated
C.andeach has dated
D.and each one dating
E.each one of which date
A（错选C，要注意时态的问题，这里不能用完成时，而且用了and这句话本来一句能说完的变成了两句，也多余，其次A完全没有问题用来修饰）
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during theCalifornia gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion,prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to thesurface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybodywith a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glaciermovement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanicactivity put gold literally within reach for
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glaciermovement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds tothe surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glaciermovement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbedsto the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement,and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to thesurface, putting gold literally within reach for
E.sinceerosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbedsthrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
E
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, makingit possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of newmachines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-producemanufactured goods, was marked by their use of
B.making possible the mass production ofmanufactured goods, marked by the use of
C.which made it possible that manufactured goodswere mass-produced, was marked by their using
D.whichmade possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the useof
E.which made the mass production of manufacturedgoods possible and was marked by using
D
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction,Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever writtenby Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of NativeSon, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being RichardWright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B.Black Americans—including Native Son byRichard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright,author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being RichardWright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.aBlack American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison'sInvisible Man
E
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphinfamily are closely related to whales and in fact include the animalknown as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famousfor its aggressive hunting pods.
A.includethe animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
B.include the animal known as the killer whale,growing as big as 30 feet long and
C.include the animal known as the killer whale,growing up to 30 feet long and being
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale,which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale,which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
A
9.(237)Concerns about public health led tothe construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitanBoston.
A.Concernsabout public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of threeseparate sewer systems to serve
B.Concerns about public health have led to theconstruction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C.Concerns about publichealth have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separatesewer systems for serving
D.There wereconcerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904of three separate sewer systems serving
E.There wereconcerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separatesewer systems for serving
A
10. (238) A newhair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as thedrug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
B. than
C. that
D. of what
E. at which
C（错选D，这里的that是跳过per milligram连接前面的price，而D的of what 就有问题了，变成了price of price，因为what在这里指的是price）
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1.B（C）2.D 3.E 4.A 5.B（E）
6.D 7.B（E）8.A 9.A 10.B（C）
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1.B（选错，应选C），对比的对象要一致。根据后半句archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of…to…可以推出前半句的结构。B错误，一是没有so/as/so too搭配；二是just as后面的句子不是独立完整的句子。
句型：just as A do, so B do. 这个平行比较结构，在每个部分之后都需要一个独立的子句。
知识点1：just as的平行比较句型（必须都是独立句子）
1） just as A do, so B do.
2） A do, just as B do.
3） Just as..., so…
4） Just as…, as…
5） Just as…, so too… (so with是错的)
2.D，a novelist who…作为主语SL的同位语。主句的the first woman and also the first Swedish writer并列
3.E，placed in a bank…修饰money，从句的主句是allows money to be transferred
4.A
5.D（选错，应选E），B的and putting没有与之对应的并列结构，排除；C的owing to不对，and putting没有对应的并列，排除。
主句主干：P was an easy task, since X, Y, and Z put gold within reach of…。X,Y,Z的三个并列事件应该是：erosion, glacier movement, 和ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds。为什么不能选“volcanic activity”？因为它不是put gold within reach of anybody的直接原因，而是gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface的直接原因。 所以！这里不能只单纯地看词性是noun就下判断，还是要符合逻辑的并列。
知识点1：reach for sth：伸手抓某物；reach of sb：在某人能触及到的范围内
知识点2：表示原因用because；原因是推测是用for；原因是大家看到就知道的时候用as/since
6.D，主句：the industrial revolution was marked by the use of A, B, and C。排除ABE。C by their using不对，排除。
7.E，对比的对象都是小说。非划线的部分是Jeam Tommer’s Cane，所以后面举例的两本书格式也要对应，只有E符合。A black american指代一类人。
8.A，whales include，排除DE。Which从句修饰killer whale。
9.A，句子主干是：concerns led to the construction to serve Boston。BC的have led时态不对，DE的leading不对。
10.B（选错，应选C）C正确，that引导限制性定于从句，修饰price。 B错误，因为3 times the price than the drugs maker charges…不对，than必须要有比较级搭配。 D错误，of what the drugs maker charges (要charge的就是price)，所以price of what就变成price of price。E的at which不对，因为charge a price就可以了，不需要加别的介词。
知识点1：times表达倍数的用法：x times as… as… ; x times the +noun. ; x times more than
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C
D
E
A
E
D
E
A
B--A
Between会有歧义,应该是construction between，B选项很容易理解成污水系统between
另外lead发生在过去，不应该用现在完成时，不然就变成了到现在concern还在lead建设
E--C
Times比较级用法
1. X times as adj./adv as
2. X times the Noun. （就是这个
3. X times more than
that指代price
three times the price that 药商 charges for
E：price是charge的直接对象，不用介词，直接that。此外charge at a price错误，sell sth at a price可以
拓展：charge a price for sth.
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Day14:
1.C
2.D
3.Cx D
4.A
5.E
6.E
7.Bx E
8.A
9.A
10.Bx A (that 前面加逗号不一定是错的，可以是插入语的逗号)
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作者: 秋桂红 时间: 2022-10-9 21:48
打卡，错了最后一个题目
理解为charges后面不用跟N，应该用that引导定语从句。
作者: Catherine107 时间: 2022-10-9 21:49
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1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the
B✖ C✔
A: the background和the nautical archaeologist不平行，A错误；just like表达wordy； in order to不如to简洁
B: B错误；just as后面没有so/as/so too搭配， 比较结构错误； just as后面句子主谓不完整
C: 正确
D: D错误；like…, so…比较结构错误； evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history打破了原来的目的状语结构， evaluate应该是requires a BG in art history的目的
E: 不平行，E错误；as…, so...比较结构错误； 前一个分句更改原句合理句意； as…,so…逻辑上前后不平行
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
D
句意：作为一名从自由现实主义转变为写农民生活和北瑞典风景的浪漫主义故事的小说家，SL在1909年成为获得诺贝尔文学奖的第一个女性和第一个瑞典作家
A: in 1909位置不对，不是SL在1909是小说家，而是在1909获奖；became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer，意思是SL成为第一个女人，A错误；in 1909放在Selma前面不好， turning away的修饰对象Selma被隔远了(也是一个典型错误)； in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist荒谬的说SL只有在1909年才从现实主义文学成为浪漫小说家， 应该是1909年成为first woman…； and后面的多出了was使得原义变为SL是第一个女人， 意思不对， 应去掉was
B: She和SL割裂，B错误；She无指代， and novelist Selma使得两个分句分裂成两个人的事； turn away from…to…改为了from…and…少了“弃前取后” 的逻辑关系； as well as有主次之分，分开了first woman和first Wewdish writer的平等关系， 使得that仅指代了Swedish writer， 使得前面became the first woman成为第一个女人， 意思不对
C: “in addition to” 将整个结构完全分解为两个独立的部分， 使句子含义犯了成为“第一个女人” 的错误，C错误；the first…winning习惯用法错误，应该是the first to win
D: 正确；在这里如果去掉了also反而不好了， 如果就X and Y， 一般是用于指两个不同的人， 如果有了also， 一般指的是对同一个对象的两个描述， 不过去掉also问题也不大； first woman和first Swedish writer必须平起平坐(凭这点就能排除A,B,C)； the first…to do sth正确用法
E: 强调重点颠倒E，E错误； in 1909的位置不好， 最好是放在becoming后面； that不能指代人
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
E
A: because of 应该+名词/动名词，A错误；because of后面累赘， 混乱， awkward
B: 错误同A，B错误; because of后面累赘； allow sth.后所接的一长串过于累赘
C: 没有允许的含义在里面，C错误；如果allow意为允许， 则需要用allow sb. to do sth.搭配； If "allows that" did mean "permits," you'd have to change the "is transferred" to "to be transferred,"。
D: awkward，D错误；Allow sth.后所接的一长串过于累赘；having been不能做限定性修饰
E:
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated
C.and each has dated
D.and each one dating
E.each one of which date
B✖ A✔
注意：不要觉得复杂的就是对的，不要对A选项有偏见
A: 正确；both dating独立主格在此表示补充说明， 与each型独立主格同一原理； 这里both用each来替代也可以； dating用了分词形式， 其潜在时态与主句一致
B: B错误；which指代的是two oldest surviving Pueblo communities， 带入即both of two oldest surviving Pueblo communities可以发现both和two重复； date的现在完成时有潜在含义说“以后都不是追溯到1000年以前了”， 要用一般现在时或者分词形式， 分词形式的潜在时态与主句一致。
C: C错误；有and作为并列连词割裂了前后关系； 现在完成时错误同B
D: D错误；and后面句子不完整(fragment)
E: each用单三，E错误；且定从不如同位语简洁
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
D✖ E✔
句意：在加州黄金淘金热时期探金是很容易的事情， 冲蚀， 史前冰山运动， 被火山运动推到地表来的古老的产金河床把金子放到有淘金盘或铲子的人们触手可及的地方
注意：长难句，一定要抓主干！一定要找好谓语动词
A: because of 后面接了谓语动词put，A错误；reach for anybody含义错误
B: and putting 和前面主语不平行；because of后的核心名词是erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface， 而并不是”事件”，逻辑含义错误； volcanic activity并不是put gold within reach of anybody的直接原因，而是gold-breaking riverbeds thrust to the surface的直接原因， 所以第三个并列名词应该是ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds而不是volcanic activity； and putting和前面的名词短语erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that hadthrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface逻辑上不能并列， 实际上后者三个名词是Put的行为主使。
C: and putting错误同B；不需要用had been时态，C错误； owing to和because of用法相似， 错误亦同B中的because of； had thrust用过去完成时表示了thrust发生在主句之前， 可thrust是个缓慢持续， 至今仍在发生的过程， 用过去完成时不合 适； volcanic activity在逻辑上与 erosion， prehistoric glaciermovement不平行
D: D错误；since从句没有谓语动词， putting应改为put； reach for错误同A； 并不是火山运动把金子放到触手可及的地方， 而是被火山运动能够推到地表的河床
E: 正确；since表示顺其自然的原因， 用在此最合适； erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds三者并列没有问题， 三者确实都是行使put这一动作的事物， 虽然前两个是抽象性名词， 后者是具体的实物名词， 但功能相同（难点， 很容易因为这一点而排除了E） ； thrust在此为过去分词, 意为猛推
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
D
A: their指代不清，A错误；their无所指， 若指代goods则逻辑意思错误； 虽然make it possible to do sth.搭配没
有问题， 但to mass-produce不定式表示动作趋势， 而mass-produce goods是已经发生的事实， 所以用名词the mass production of manufactured goods更为恰当
B: 缺少谓语动词，B错误
C: made it possible that…累赘；their错误同A；by ones' using累赘，C错误；用that引导名词性成分累赘； manufactured goods were mass-produced(产品都是量产)改变原句合理含义(量产产品)
D: 正确；用make it possible to mass-produce或make possible the mass prodcution都没有问题
E: 没有谓语，E错误； make sth. adj.中如果sth.太长通常后置到adj.后； using的动作发出者成了Industrial Revolution， 不合逻辑
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
B✖ D✔
A: 主语应该是书，A错误； 破折号之前的主语是Cane这本书， 后面平行的也需要对应是书而不是人， 所以后面
的平行错误； 语法上a black american或black americans都没有错， 但在此用单数更为清晰， 明确指出了一本书是一个人写， 而没有多个人写的歧义
B: B错误；Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison和Jean Toomer's Cane不够对称， 不如E好； 歧义同A
C: 平行错误同A，C错误
D: 平行错误同A，D错误
E: E正确；the others being用法正确， Jean Toomer's Cane， Richard Wright's NativeSon， Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man平行的最漂亮完美： 不仅仅都是书， 而且都用了所有格
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
B✖ A✔
注意：A一定要仔细读完，确定错误的地方，读A时候不能太着急，不然总选不到A！！！
A: include主语是species，正确；which修饰killer whale，A正确；
B: B错误；growing修饰了species而不是killer whale；as big as和long重复， 用一个就好(size和length是同一概念)
C: being+adj.错误，C错误；growing错误同B
D: includes错误，D错误；long错误同B
E: includes错误，E错误；it is在从句中没有平行，run-on
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
句意：关于公众健康的担忧导致1876-1903期间为波士顿大都市服务的、3个分开的下水道系统的建造
A: A正确
B: 过去的事情，不用have been；between 1876 and 1904修饰concerns，句意错误，B错误；Between 1876 and 1904有修饰systems的歧义， 意思变成了systems只有在1876和1904年之间存在
C: 过去的事情，不用have been；Between 1876 and 1904放在lead后面修饰lead只在1876和1904年期间导致了construction， 而1904年以后又导致了其他事情， 改变句意； 表示动作的目的用to do而不用for doing， for doing是指某事物的具体用途， 而to do 则有目的的意思， 但用途和目的本来就有交叉的地方， 所以没有绝对规则， for doing有持久性的趋势， 而to do往往是一次性行为
D: D错误；there are表示的是自然存在， 不能用于concerns之前； Leading时态错
E: E错误；there are错误同D； between 1876 and 1904错误同C； for doing错误同C
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
B. than
C. that
D. of what
E. at which
B✖ C✔
考点：times比较的用法
注意：像这种划线句特别短甚至只有一个单词的，一定要带进去前后贯通阅读，理解句意和用法
A: A错误；X times as adij./adv. as，as不能单独用
B: B错误；X times more than, than必须要与比较级搭配
C: C正确；threes times the price that the drug's maker charges…
D: D错误；what修饰price，从句变成了the drug's maker charges price of price，逻辑错误
E: E错误；price是charge的直接对象（charge a price） ， 所以不需要再加介词， 直接that即可；charge at a price是错的， sell sth. at a price倒是可以的(另外price出现在at后面常表示代价)
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1.（229） _Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the_ nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the
history和n archaeologist不平行
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a
选B
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a
As...so?
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the
Like...so
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the
as…so
2.(230) _Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win_ the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
选A
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
She没必要
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
The first 没必要in addition to the first
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
Became in?
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
Becoming通常形容正在发生？
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because _of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred_ to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
because of跟noun，AB错
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
it指代globalization这件事
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
选E
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, _both dating_ back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated
选B更符合句意，两个都，而不是分开的each是
C.and each has dated
D.and each one dating
无V
E.each one of which date
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, _because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for_ anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for
Bc of 不跟名词排除
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
That thrust and putting 排除
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
E？
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, _making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of_ new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
Revolution was marked by their use ，their指代不清
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
工业革命marked by？
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
选D
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer’s Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by _Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man_
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
不工整
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
宣言B
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright’s Native Son and Ralph Ellison’s Invisible Man
三个最好的不可能是a blk american所以排除CDE
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact _include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is_ famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
选A
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
species复数，排除DE
9.(237) _Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve_ metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
Led to… to…?
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
选D？
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, _as_ the drug’s maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
选A
B. than
C. that
D. of what
E. at which
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6. reach for sth: 伸手抓某物； reach of sb.: 在某人能触及到的范围内
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1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so theJust as..., so...
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
纠结于DE E中from...and错啦！！
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
纠结于CD，但觉得D中的transfer having been placed 不对，笑死我了、、选E才对
ALLOW THAT 承认
ALLOW SB TO DO!
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated
C.and each has dated
D.and each one dating
E.each one of which date
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
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8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
对修饰30feet long的玩意儿有点模糊
B as big as 与 long 重复！
grow修饰错误（修饰主语及谓语动词）
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for servingD.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
B. than
C. that
D. of what
E. at which
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1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the【主语不对等】
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a【as后面不是完整的句子】
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a【正确，just A do, so do B，所以后面的so并不是多余的】【just as A do, so B do平行比较结构的习惯搭配：意思是：就如同A…B…。不过与大多数并行性信号不同的是，它在每个部分之后都需要一个独立的子句(一种相对不 常见的结构)，所以不要轻易判断为错】
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the【so多余】
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the【so多余，句子中出现两个连词】
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win【the novelist who became the first woman应该是the first woman to become novelist】
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won【he first Swedish writer that应该是the first to do；as well as不如and】【She无指代，and novelist Selma使得两个分句分裂成两个人的事；turn away from…to…改为了from…and…少了“弃前取后”的逻辑关系；as well as有主次之分， 分开了first woman和first Wewdish writer的平等关系】
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning【the first Swedish writer winning错误；in addition to不如and】
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win【正确】
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won【the first Swedish writer that错误；becoming与turn away之间不具备因果联系，不是改变方向就能获奖】【from…and错误同B；that不能指代 人；句子逻辑上主次颠倒了，重心放到了前半部分】
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred【允许钱被转移，多了宾补】
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction【允许转移】
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred【allow that错误】
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction【 允许转移；having been placed作为定语错误】
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred【允许钱被转移，多了宾补；使用句子比A 好】【正确】
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating【正确】【dating用了分词形式，其潜在时态与主句一致】
B.both of which have dated【which有指代communities的风险；且作为定语从句只与名词有关，但是该句子明显应该是解释前面的句子】【date的现在完成时有潜在 含义说“以后都不是追溯到1000年以前了”，要用一般现在时或者分词形式，分词形式的潜在时态与主句一致。】
C.and each has dated【并列关系不对，应该是解释两个最老的】
D.and each one dating【and后面应该是完整句子】
E.each one of which date【date应该使用单数】
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for【because of不能加句子】
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of【and putting没有并列的】【volcanic activity并不是put gold within reach of anybody的直接原因， 而是gold-breaing riverbeds thrust to the surface的直接原因，所以第三个并列名词应该是ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds而不是volcanic activity； and putting和前面 的名词短语erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface逻辑上不能并列，实际上后者 三个名词是Put的行为主使。】
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of【and putting没有并列的】【 had thrust用过去完成 时表示了thrust发生在主句之前，可thrust是个缓慢持续，至今仍在发生的过程，用 过去完成时不合 适】
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for【since应该加完整句子】
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of【正确】
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of【making作为状语修饰was marked错误，应该是描述工业革命这个名词，所以作定语更合适；their多余】【to mass-produce不定式表示动作趋势，而mass-produce goods是已经发生的事实，所以用名词the mass production of manufactured goods更为恰当】
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of【making作状语错误】【缺少谓语动词，was，应该是要表达被动语态】
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using【it形式宾语只能指代不定式或者复合不定式，不能指代that句子？；using不如use，their多余】
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of【正确】
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using【主句缺少谓语】
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man【应该是介绍另两本书，而不是两位作者】
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison【including应该是介绍介绍整体，不能表示介绍另外两个】
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man【including问题】
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man【人的问题】
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man【正确】
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is【正确】
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and【像30英尺那么大，错误，应该是30英尺那么长；growing作为状语错误】【as big as 和long重复，用一个就好(size和length是同一概念)。】
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being【growing作为状语错误】
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is【includes错误】
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is【includes错误；and it is错误】
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve【正确】
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve【between 1876 and 1904作为状语错误】【lead发生在过去，不应该用现在时态（现在完成时），have lead表示了concern至今 依然持续；Between 1876 and 1904有修饰systems的歧义，意思变成了systems只有在1876和1904年之间存在，但是construction确实只有在这几年存在！！！】
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving【错误，between 1876 and 1904作为时间状语，而非定语；for doing？】【have led时态错误，have lead表示了concern至今依然持续；Between 1876 and 1904 放在lead后面修饰lead只在1876和1904年期间导致了construction，而1904年以后又导致了其他事情，改变句意；表示动作的目的用to do而不用for doing】D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving【这里有担忧，错误】
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving【这里有担忧，错误】
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
B. than
C. that【正确，引导定语从句，修饰price】
D. of what
E. at which
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1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the
答案：C
比较对象为the nautical archaeologist，排除A E
Just as … so…选C
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
答案：D
Turning away给出动作发出者，排除A
She…and novelist S L语义逻辑不对，排除B
In addition to 不恰当，排除C
Becoming表结果伴随状语，修饰turn away and wrote语义逻辑不对，and also重复，排除E
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
答案：E
Because of +n.排除A B
Allow to do sth. 排除C D
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated
C.and each has dated
D.and each one dating
E.each one of which date
答案：A
Both of which冗杂，排除B
And 前后联接两句子，排除D
Each one of which表达冗杂，排除E
C？
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
答案：E
Because of +n.排除A B
句子不完整排除C D
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
答案：D
根据语意，应该为 The Industrial Revolution was marked by…排除B
Their指代不明，排除A C
句子不完整排除E
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
答案：B
Best novels 对应作者应为复数，排除 C D E
破折号后面解释说明novels，排除A
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
答案：A
The 32 species are and include…排除 D E
Growing 的逻辑主语为 32 species 不对，排除 B C
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
答案：A
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
B. than
C. that
D. of what
E. at which
答案：C
What/which 代指price，重复，排除D E, 没有比较级，排除 B；后面的句子修饰 price，选择C，定语从句
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1.C
as+句子，句子结构
2.D
the first womon&first Swedish writer是平行的
3.E
固定搭配：allow sth. to be done; allow sb. to do sth.; allow that承认；allow for考虑到，允许
4.A
date at和前面的是最古老的是说明关系，所以用dating
5.E
thrust在此为过去分词，是修饰语，意为猛推；因为其他的选项有绝对的错误项所以选择了E
owing to和because of用法相似
6.D
make sth. possilble，如果sth.过长，可以后置，避免头重脚轻
7.B❌——E✅
主语是一本书Book C，intended meaning：…, Book C… —Book NS and Book Man
一本书是一个人写的，不要因为书的内容是多种体裁的mixture就想当然为是多人的作品合集，不要预设❕
dash之后的补充说明也应该为书，与主句的主语相同，所以排除CD
8.A
9.A
intended meaning：concerns导致了construction；同时明确有时间为1876-1904，不应该用现在完成时，没有延续到现在
10.E❌——C✅
price是charge的直接对象，不需要用介词，e.g. charge the price，如果是charge at the price就是错的
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1. C
As +句子/ like + 单词
Just as A do, so B do
2. D
考点:
(1). 分词短语和逻辑主语之间有插入语不好
(2). The first …….to do sth 数词➕不定式
3. E
考点:
(1). Because of ➕名词
(2). Allow sth to be done
4. A
Both dating 独立主格
5. E
考点:
- 一般原因用because，原因(推测)用for, 顺其自然的原因用as/ since 最合适
- Reach for sth伸手抓某物
- Reach of sb 在某人能触及到的范围内
6. D
A. Their无所指，to mass- produce逻辑错误
B. 无谓语动词
C. That累赘，manufactured goods were mass- produced 逻辑错误，their 无指代
E. 无谓语
7. E
考点:
- 破折号在这的用处是补充说明主句的内容，即需与主句平行
- 句子主语是书，平行对称应该也是书
8. A
B&C. Growing 做伴随状语修饰了谓语动词include 及其主语32 species。而which 引导的句子就近修饰whale
9. A
A. Correct. Between 1876 and 1904 修饰construction. 逻辑正确
B. Between 1876 and 1904有修饰system 的歧义(只存在于那么多年
10. C
考点:
- times 做比较的用法
1). X Times + as+ adj./ adv. + as
2). X Times + the + n.
3). X Times more than
C. That 不省略不一定错
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作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-10-24 12:57
Day 14 CC(错了，这道题应该是d, 因为in addition to 是除了她之外还有别人的意思） EAE DEAAC
作者: lastchance2010 时间: 2022-10-24 13:06
Day 14 CC(D)EAE DEAAC
作者: 野生小刘 时间: 2022-10-25 17:43
补卡
作者: RachelG 时间: 2022-11-20 23:56
Day14
1.C
A.得是人
B.as 是完整的句子
D.要just as
2.D
A.and 不知道连接谁
B.she 和S这个人不好
C.in addition 不对
E.不是结果状语
3. E
A.because of sth 会好一点
C.没有allow that 这种用法
D.只有all wo to be
E.it 应该是指代boon这个东西
4.A
C.回溯不能用完成时
D.and 是句子了
E.三单
5.E
A.put 是动词了
B.and putting 不对
C.同B
D.since 要是不接时间的话就得是个完整的句子
6. D
A.their 不对，不是货物用
B.应该是被动语态
C.同A
E.没有谓语了
7.E
A.前面也是个作品
B.应该是the other
C.同B
D.前面也是个作品
8.A
B.结果状语不对
C.同B
D.得是复数
9.A
B.时间词表示应该是过去
C.led to 中间不该有插入语
E.同C
10. E
A. as 不对，少了一个
B.than 不对，没有比较级出现
C.that 指代price也不行
D.不是名词性而应该是定语从句
作者: 肥宅二号 时间: 2022-12-2 09:54
Day14
1. C 考点比较 固定搭配
考的比较型是Just as...so...表就如同A...B
有五种形式：
1. Just as A do, B do.
2. A do, just as B do
3. Just as..., so...
4. Just as..., as...
5. Just as..., so too
A like后面只能跟名词，就算可以跟从句也和后面的句型不平行
B Who接引定语从句 前半句话没有主语
D like同A
E 两个比较从句结构不对称 不优 as...so结构错误
2. D 考点rhetorical construction
initial modifier需要后面立即接引逻辑主语，因此排掉A
B用and连接两个从句 意思变成了两个人的事情，语义错误了
C in addition to the first Swedish writer语义变成了除了第一个瑞典人外的第二个人，语义错误
E 没有and连接，run-on sentence
3. E 考点grammatical construction idiom
AB 用because of但接了完整句子 绝对错误排除
allow somebody to do something 是表允许的正确用法
allow that表承认
因此C的语义是错误的
D的having been不可以修饰名词
4. A 考点修饰 grammatical construction
each型独立主格：强调上一个句子的句尾名词
因此用each在这里不是错误的，而是这里each的用法都错了
B 的which指代了communities 指代错误了
C 时态has dated有问题
D and后面要接引完整clause 这里没有谓语动词
E each one of which是定语从句 不优于同位语修饰
因此这里选A
5. E 考点 修饰 grammatical costruction
A because of 后面接了完整句子 错误
B and后面和because of平行 没有谓语
C and同B had时态有误
D 用that定语从句导致没有谓语 错误
6. D 考点修饰 平行 人称
AC的人称it their没有指代排除
B marked by the use主动形式语义错误
E 用and连接导致没有谓语 排除
7. E 考点平行 logical prediction
这句话是要表达这些书里包含了哪些黑人作家写的小说
AD的说人的排掉
B和C的Including象是在说黑人包含了什么人 离谱
8. 错选A 考点平行 主谓一致
32 species主语先排除掉DE
ABC里面BC doing修饰整个从句 语义不对排除
9. A 考点时态 logical prediction
给了时间段1876-1904因此肯定不应该是完成时态，BC排除
D改变原局的语义，重点放在了There were concerns错误
E同D
补充：for doing指某事物的具体用途，todo有表目的的含义，for doing有持续性的趋势，而to do是一次性行为
10. A 考点idiom 比较
这道题还是在考比较量词的固定搭配
正确的结构式Sold for three times the price that the drug's maker charges for another product
Sold for three times the price as the price 是错误的！
正确的应该要不是
1. 3 times as adj as...
2. 3 times the y...
3. 3 times more than...
作者: Ranyo 时间: 2022-12-3 23:31
Day14
1.（229）Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the nautical archaeologist needs specialized knowledge of the history and theory of ship design in order to understand shipwrecks.
A.Just like the background in art history needed by an archaeologist in order to evaluate finds of ancient art, the
B.Just as an archaeologist who needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, a
C.Just as an archaeologist needs a background in art history to evaluate finds of ancient art, so a
D.Like the archaeologist who evaluates finds of ancient art and requires a background in art history, so the
E.As evaluating finds of ancient art requires an archaeologist who has a background in art history, so the
C* Just as…, so… 在gmat中成立
D后面不应该有so the
E比较对象有误
A前后比较对象不一致
B缺少谓语动词
2.(230)Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win the Nobel Prize for Literature.
A.Turning away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 Selma Lagerlöf was the novelist who became the first woman and was also the first Swedish writer to win
B.She turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and novelist Selma Lagerlöf in 1909 became the first woman as well as the first Swedish writer that won
C.Selma Lagerlöf was a novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, and in 1909 she became the first woman in addition to the first Swedish writer winning
D.A novelist who turned away from literary realism to write romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, Selma Lagerlöf became in 1909 the first woman and also the first Swedish writer to win
E.As a novelist, Selma Lagerlöf turned away from literary realism and wrote romantic stories about the peasant life and landscape of northern Sweden, in 1909 becoming the first woman and also the first Swedish writer that won
D*
A turning表示修饰，SL这个人应该立即出现在逗号后面
BC有两个独立句子，不对（但是不能绝对地从这个角度看）。B的she和SL不知道是不是同一个人，C应该是to win。
E becoming表示伴随，不对。
3.(231)The globalization of financial-services companies has been a boon to money launderers, because of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred to a branch in a more regulated one.
A.of allowing money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
B.of allowing the transfer of money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
C.it allows that money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction is transferred
D.it allows the transfer of money having been placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction
E.it allows money placed in a bank in a less regulated jurisdiction to be transferred
E* allow … to do
AB because of 不对
C allow that 不对
D很奇怪。Ron
d) is a weird construction that tries to have two verbs without any sort of connector -- it says "it allows X have been Y".
this is like saying "i'm missing the piece goes here" (instead of, e.g., "i'm missing the piece that goes here").
4.(232)The Acoma and Hopi are probably the two oldest surviving Pueblo communities, both dating back at least a thousand years.
A.both dating
B.both of which have dated
C.and each has dated
D.and each one dating
E.each one of which date
B* dated back
答案是A。B的have dated意思是现在已经不这样了。dating back没有问题
5.(233)Prospecting for gold during the California gold rush was a relatively easy task, because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for anybody with a pan or shovel.
A.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach for
B.because of erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
C.owing to erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that had thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, and putting gold literally within reach of
D.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and volcanic activity that thrust ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds to the surface, putting gold literally within reach for
E.since erosion, prehistoric glacier movement, and ancient, gold-bearing riverbeds thrust to the surface by volcanic activity put gold literally within reach of
D*但答案是E。
and putting不和前面平行，也不能表示修饰，排除BC。
since后面要加句子，D的putting使句子缺少谓语动词。
A：because of后面不应该加句子。所以选择E。
我对这段话的语意存疑，但从语法来说，E没有错。
6.(234)The Industrial Revolution, making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of new machines, new energy sources, and new basic materials.
A.making it possible to mass-produce manufactured goods, was marked by their use of
B.making possible the mass production of manufactured goods, marked by the use of
C.which made it possible that manufactured goods were mass-produced, was marked by their using
D.which made possible the mass production of manufactured goods, was marked by the use of
E.which made the mass production of manufactured goods possible and was marked by using
D*
AC their指代不明，排除。
BE句子缺少谓语动词。选D。
7.(235)A mixture of poems and short fiction, Jean Toomer's Cane has been called one of the three best novels ever written by Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
A.Black Americans—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
B.Black Americans—including Native Son by Richard Wright and Invisible Man by Ralph Ellison
C.a Black American—including Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
D.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright, author of Native Son, and Ralph Ellison, author of Invisible Man
E.a Black American—the others being Richard Wright's Native Son and Ralph Ellison's Invisible Man
E*
the others being是在说书，including是在修饰American(s)
A没有在说书，排除。B修饰错误，排除。C a black american不应该包括两个人，排除。D不是在说书，排除。
8.(236)The 32 species that make up the dolphin family are closely related to whales and in fact include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is famous for its aggressive hunting pods.
A.include the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and is
B.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing as big as 30 feet long and
C.include the animal known as the killer whale, growing up to 30 feet long and being
D.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow as big as 30 feet long and is
E.includes the animal known as the killer whale, which can grow to be 30 feet long and it is
A*
32 species，排除DE。
B being famous 排除
C grow up to be? 排除 growing修饰了整个句子也不对
9.(237)Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve metropolitan Boston.
A.Concerns about public health led to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems to serve
B.Concerns about public health have led to the construction of three separate sewer systems between 1876 and 1904 to serve
C.Concerns about public health have led between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
D.There were concerns about public health leading to the construction between 1876 and 1904 of three separate sewer systems serving
E.There were concerns leading between 1876 and 1904 to the construction of three separate sewer systems for serving
D*
AB不对，the systems to do不正确，只有抽象的才可以用to do。
CE for serving 也不对，lead to for serving，逻辑有误，应该是 systems serving。
这道题应该选A。BC时态不对。A的to serve是表示目的的，可以用to do。
Ron:
there's also just a general awkwardness about (d) that would be apparent to most native-born speakers of english. it doesn't look good, it isn't easily readable, and, most importantly, it doesn't emphasize the right thing: the main skeleton of the sentence is "there were concerns", which is NOT the main point. in choice (a), the main skeleton is "concerns led to the construction", which IS the main point.
--
"to serve" is better than "serving", because
* "to serve" implies a sense of purpose or intention (which is precisely what is to be conveyed here), and
* "serving" implies that the systems were already serving boston at the time when they were being constructed.
10. (238)A new hair-growth drug is being sold for three times the price, per milligram, as the drug's maker charges for another product with the same active ingredient.
A. as
B. than
C. that
D. of what
E. at which
C* the price that
这些是对的：
1) X times+noun：three times the price
2) X times as +adj/adv+as: three times as high as
3) X times +comparative+than: three times more than
作者: 海绵栗子 时间: 2023-3-16 16:51
DAY14
CDEAD
DBAAC
作者: 2021上北大 时间: 2023-7-6 09:20
D14
1、C 句子结构，固定搭配
2、D 句子结构 修饰 、句意
3、E 固定搭配 修饰 句意
4、A
5、E 句子结构句意
6、D
7、E
8、A
9、A
10、C
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